The Ultimate Iron Fist Is as High as Ten Thousand Feet

The story is okay, and the character of the protagonist is also very good, but the timeline is too dense, and it feels like it all follows the plot of Tianzou. The first few chapters span two months, and the rest of the dozens of chapters span just over a month. This more than a month is spent practicing martial arts and fighting monsters through various plots, and the writing on both ends is very rough...

A brother who eats the meat of exotic animals at home every day, and his sister went to the dock to resist Da Bao. She spent half a tael of silver to see a doctor, which was more than ten days of wages for her. Author, are you sure you are not sick?

. . . All I can say is. . Too much crotch! Those who are targeted are dying! The body was tortured to pieces. . The effect of the golden finger lasts until Chapter 43! It doesn't show how it is used at all! Just give me a panel and increase my proficiency while practicing!

Author, please go to the palace. The tag is written as a cross-referral article but it does not express the meaning of the article at all. It is destined to be criticized by many people with high expectations.

After watching the beginning, I didn't want to watch it. A girl came up. I'll go. In addition to the sister, couldn't you write some younger brothers or older brothers? As for writing about younger sisters, I really have never seen a younger sister who is not a poisonous one. . . .

If you eat less meat, your father and your sister don't have to go out to do things. If you eat meat yourself, your sister is resisting sacking at the dock. She doesn't look like she has deep feelings.

I read more than a hundred chapters, and I got addicted. A sect selects disciples, and the protagonist is selected and killed by the protagonist. Isn't it exciting to read the content? In fact, it's not pleasant at all, it's just a suicide attempt. The protagonist always wants to avoid trouble and develop in peace, but what he does and development in peace are completely different things. On the one hand, he wants to develop in peace, but at the same time, he goes around causing trouble without any code. When I see the selection of disciples, I can't help it. It's so awesome that you can watch it again.

Among the Yakuza themes, this is trash among trash. It seriously reduces the reading experience of Yakuza books.

Every one who rushes into the street does not rush into the street without reason. The first three chapters here are the three golden chapters of the book. Shit gold kind. Explain more later, and you will be very happy later, you are in the first 35 chapters. You have almost driven away your potential readers. Winning by surprise and being unconventional are not your style of play. The title of your book does not match the content at the beginning of your book. In my personal opinion, you wasted a good title. Of the 100 readers attracted by the title of your book, at least 70 will be driven away by your first three chapters.

I've never seen someone who is so violent and cruel.

I really can't watch it anymore. The protagonist doesn't provide a good life for his family even though he has money, and why is the whole world looking for trouble for the protagonist? It's really forced to add drama, it's very blunt, the author should go to the palace, I hope the next book will sort out the main plot line.

I finally got through the recommendation, it's not easy, I am asking for everyone's fire support.

The author is poisonous! Not telling my sister what happened with the blood pill can make her pay attention, and use the beautiful name to prevent her from worrying, and then get caught. Around this point, I feel that the protagonist has traveled to the past and been depraved. When I look at the back, I always feel that the roundness is very inconsistent and blocked. All the problems have to be solved in a sudden explosion at the end. The plot logic is too strange.

The author can either go purely horizontally. But the plot was deliberately written, but it was not written well. There are many poisonous points, especially for old bookworms. It is obvious that it feels more fragmented, and the development of the plot style becomes unreasonable and full of flaws.

There are so many things going on every day in a small county town of more than 100,000 people, and so many people die every day. If this were the case, no one would have died long ago.

There is no Yakuza-ryu appearance. The fusion of so many martial arts, not to mention the cross-level challenge, cannot be pushed to the same level. Does your fusion have a ball? You are also at the peak of blood transformation, but you are still frightened when you see the chief arrest, are you still a loser? I had silently tolerated many of the poisonous spots in front of me, but I was really disgusted when I saw this place. Even if you are extremely brainless, you are still extremely incompetent. This is also a new type of Yakuza style! Being able to read Chapter 207 is worthy of the author. I hope the author can use his brain to write a book. Goodbye!

It feels great to keep suppressing the protagonist and letting the readers suppress the author more and more! Farewell

If you add it so late, you must be a yakuza style 😒

Still the ultimate iron fist? Just change his name to a weakling.

Does the author himself need to do more publicity?

Well written. Practicing boxing is about practicing boxing, rather than using a knife to kill people after practicing boxing. What is the use of practicing boxing?

Your writing is okay, keep up the good work!

Chapter 31 What the hell are high-grade and medium-grade?