Shine All over the Heavens

The pace has been a bit slow recently. I don't know if it's because of the update once a day, but there are so many updates on the shelves. Now in the water arena, I'm pretending to be neither good nor bad, but I'm pretending to be a bit low.

The first chapter is sure to make you laugh. Pig's Knuckle is set up as a martial arts master, but it feels like a middle-class idiot. I'm really annoyed by this kind of character design that has no writing style and still has to be awesome. It's so embarrassing to watch () = convex

I haven't read the novel, so I will evaluate it personally. My thoughts when I saw this book were that the title of the book I read first should be "Zhutian Genre", and then the introduction. After reading the introduction, my first thought was, what is he writing? What's his story? Does he have a golden finger? What's his general direction? No, not at all. Then I looked at the catalog and found that I didn't know the specific content roughly. I was originally going to leave, but after seeing the good reviews in the comment area, I thought I should take a look. But before reading it, my opinion about this novel is that either the author deleted the review, or this book is well written.

It's better to be a Royal Sister than a Lolita

Isn't it just a trumpet opened with warm tea and rice wine? Just look at this fight scene and you will know it. One punch can be described as hundreds of empty spaces.

I've finished reading the first world. It's so rhetorical and unclear. I don't know what I want to express after the first volume. I say the protagonist is great, but he's just lying all the time. If it wasn't recommended by others, I wouldn't have the patience to read it. Others say the second volume is better, so I'll continue to look forward to it.

This book gives people a sense of the times. What kind of sense of the times? In that era, ordinary people did not trust the government very much. They always felt that there were many tricks and villains in the officialdom, and they were unable to use serious methods and liked to engage in crooked ways. I always feel that the government will compromise for certain reasons. The Japanese are a clean and domineering country. Japan is very strong and has a great say in East Asia. A certain business figure has a great influence on the entire world, and even the government has to bend down and cooperate with them. I like to distinguish the difference between love in the heart and love in the body, which has a Platonic feeling, but author, times have changed. The explosion of information has made the Chinese people understand many things. The first is that personal will is nothing in front of the state machine. Even a world-famous giant like Jack Ma has no power to fight back in front of the state machine, let alone the absurd joke that a Japanese entrepreneur can influence the entire East Asia. China and Japan are no longer rivals at the same level. If Japan is the dog of the United States, then China is the opponent of the United States. It is even said that the United States is no longer an opponent. Our real opponent is precisely ourselves. The journey of the stars and the sea is not just talk. Don't try to laugh at or doubt the will of a person who grew up under the red flag. His consciousness and level will make you feel ashamed. When he sacrifices for his beliefs, you can't help but sigh, how can there be such a person in the world? The so-called innocent heart will make people feel nothing but this kind of emotion under such sacrifice. I believe the author is quite young, and it was an era of public massacres. I especially hope that the author can one day understand the meaning of homosexuality. I am moved by the fact that no one knows your name and your achievements will last forever. Because I used to sneer at the color red just like the author.

One punch is a long paragraph of boxing theory. The life and death battle at the beginning even has time to be dazed and distracted. I thought it was a card game. There is a long dialogue before even one move is made. It's sick.

Couldn't the author write more normally? The world of Mao's martial arts must be all about the dark side of society, and he kneels down and licks the Japanese. I'm really convinced. If you write like this, you will be reported.

National martial arts, King of War, killers, and other names such as Lin Feng, Xiao Feng, Ye Feng, Lin Fan, etc. Most of the books with these elements are bad books.

The writing is too mystical and too flamboyant.

There's so much nonsense, don't push it if you can do it

Are you killing someone or writing a thesis? There will be a full dialogue and exchange during the fight. Stop fighting. Let's sit down and improve the thesis together. Do you insist on fighting like this after the old song is said after Chapter 4?

Don't you think there's too much nonsense in the analysis? I really can't stand it anymore. Fighting is just fighting. You're babbling and analyzing a lot of useless stuff. You've just gone through a few moves after a few chapters. Are you going to kill someone? Go and see how fighting is written in Yan Wu Ling.

O sea, you are all water. It's actually possible to communicate during a life-and-death fight. Damn it. Dry.

The national secret organization kneels down and licks the little devil, you really are the author, you are not the descendant of a traitor, then it is no wonder

Let me tell you a joke. It is not important whether the results come out after shooting. What is important is the life insights after shooting! I'm speechless. This is what I fear the most when reading novels. What's your point? As you write it, I can write 100 chapters for shitting, 200 chapters for eating, and 300 chapters for sleeping. This is no longer a matter of grinding. It's like the feeling when we were writing essays when we were young, and the teacher asked us to write 500 words, but we couldn't write it out, so we just rambled here and there to make up the number of words. This is why the authors call for reading the genuine version every day, and readers' money comes from the strong wind!

Starting from Chapter 13 of Volume 2, there were few comments and no votes cast. The main reason was that the character of the protagonist collapsed. I had been avoiding things that I didn't want to get involved with in the early stage, but later I was persuaded by the Taoist priest and got involved. Your emotional state seems to be fake (Purely personal opinion)

There is only one word in the whole article, empty. I want to know if you can defend your true way?

New book issues are updated slowly, and I recently started the second edition. I always see complaints about the so-called "kneeling and licking" behavior in the first volume, so I will tell you my own views and prevent new readers from running away after seeing the comment area. The questions in the first volume mainly focus on Chapter 6 and the following chapters. One point is the complaints about the female character Yu Chun. I am single and don't know much about women. I can only say that you can meet such people in daily life, and the name Yu Chun is somewhat explicit (stupid), so I won't go into details. Another drawback is also the main drawback of the first volume, which is the so-called secret organization "Kneeling and Licking" Japanese. To be honest, the main reason for this shortcoming is that the author did not intend to write too much in the first volume, so some background and details that should be included are not described. The author explains at the end of Chapter 6 that Jiang cannot die in S City or even plant flowers, but this does not prevent the protagonist from taking revenge, but that he cannot die during this time. There is no clear explanation here as to why a secret organization attempts to delay revenge. The following chapters also show that the secret organization is seriously inclined to protect Jiang and hinder the protagonist's revenge. Some readers who are more novice can't accept it. Why do they think that their own secret organization has become the opposite of the protagonist? So I felt very unhappy. First point, the protagonist is a warrior who has been abroad for many years. Strictly speaking, this revenge can belong to the level of Xia uses force to break the forbidden. It can only be said that the author did not write about the feeling of a country ruled by law in the first chapter (...), So it is difficult to go into details here. Second point, ignoring the unmentioned rule of law, we can find that the conflict between the protagonist's personal interests and national interests is the reason for the opposition between the protagonist and the secret organization, but the author does not give a clear background. We might as well create one ourselves: Suppose that at that time, the Zhonghua Group in Hejiang exchanged some core technologies and interests. These core technologies were technologically blocked by European and American countries, but we often say that the Neon Country is the dog of the Lighthouse Country, and the Neon Country itself is not peaceful, so it is possible for the two parties to secretly exchange interests. At this time, if the protagonist kills Jiang in S City or Zhan Hua, this plan will undoubtedly be ruined. After adding such a background, the disadvantage of "kneeling and licking" can be eliminated. Finally, I would like to say a digression. Read novels. The negative comments in the comment area will slip away and you will not read a novel at most, but in daily life, everyone must have their own thinking. In today's Internet age, everyone can receive all kinds of information, but we must use our own brains to think and learn to identify deception with ulterior motives. For example, in the past, public intellectuals advocated lighthouses and belittled flower cultivation, blindly promoting environmental protection without mentioning development and history; now, there are often things worth 500,000 yuan that use the so-called patriotic card and capital card to engage in information deception, intercepting part of the real information and mixing it with their own private life to influence your thinking. Please think more about it. The situation in your life, country, etc. Is not necessarily what others describe it to be, nor is it necessarily the reason they think it is. Think more, observe more, learn to think independently, and develop a perspective of the overall situation, these will help you.

I think it is well written. I have been reading books for many years. The main reason is that my spiritual level rises too fast and it is really difficult to write later. Hh Come on, Jibei. I hope you will continue to write. Come on.

I really want to read it... It's a pity it's gone. Author, please come back. I'll be a fool and order all the books.

If you want to take revenge, you have to kill the whole family. You are so hypocritical and nagging at me all the time. This kind of person has a shitty character.

Such a wonderful book is gone like this. Alas, I am just a little curious. People in the second world are so intelligent. How can the people behind write? Come on, author, I think you are a real novelist. I look forward to future works Also, author, have you offended anyone? There are so many stupid people.

Alas, why don't you finish the first story before finishing it? At first I thought the fragment was in the hands of the emperor, but I'm still not quite sure :-D

Li Zhao is the most similar to Li Hansha written by Meng Rushenji, Li Hansha, if the sky is sentimental, the sky will be old, and the origin is empty Wang Zhong, the emperor of heaven steps on the heroic call, the sunrise in the east is red 🌅 Wang Chao, the emperor of martial arts, Xiongguan Road is as true as iron, earth-shaking and generous

Why can't the mobile version search for book titles, but the web version can find them normally?