The World Is Empty

The writing style needs to be improved, the conflict is a bit cliche, the character description, detail processing, and plot setting are quite satisfactory. Some parts need to be divided into sections, otherwise it will be too troublesome and tiring to watch. But there are still some things worth mentioning, such as the cleverness of the foreshadowing. I hope you will set up more interesting and unexpected plots in the future. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author keeps at it! I'm working on finishing the book!

The writing is steady, the writing technique is sophisticated, the plot is full of ups and downs, and it has an internal flavor.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group, please update ~ Complete the book, no eunuchs required

The writing style is steady, the foundation is profound, and it is wise and charming!

Life is really as lonely as snow, watching old friends go away one by one