Lord of the Rings Lord of the East

When writing a story like Legion, don't make your personal strength too strong, otherwise it will easily collapse.

You are talking about being an Oriental, but you also have a Yanhuang system, a foreign name, and a Japanese demon sword called Murasame. I'm so poisonous

Why do you need a dragonborn? It's not an Eastern dragon. Is the dragon really strong? But he is already extinct, and he still has a bloodline to come up with it 😤😤 Is Huang Feihu so strong because of his bloodline? , Now I still rely on my bloodline and I feel a little low, very low.

Typical self-pleasure article, eating settings, inexplicably adding skills, magic weapons, and ability settings. To bring out the sea of ​​fa, I really don't know what this is. As a Buddhist cultivator, he must put Buddhism first in his heart. As a system owner, whether the system is stronger or Buddhism is stronger, he builds temples to support him. Buddhas are the instincts of monks. How do you write about the conflict between faith and political power? Do you dare to write? Besides, the dragon is our original totem. What qualifications does a foreign belief in Buddhism have to call it a demon? Say it is an evil path. Isn't it an evil path to hand over the soul of faith to the Buddha? Melting blood is good or not It is integrated into one's own body. If you hand over your faith, you will be rewarded by the Buddha. Why bother reading this? And it is really unnecessary to divide a combat power range into four small stages. Even if you want to expand the upper limit of world-wide combat power, there is no need to do this. Old bookworms will feel tired just looking at it. The strangest thing is that Are you the Holy Mother? There are so few major ethnic groups, but you want to save other ethnic groups. Let alone the uncivilized Middle Ages. Even now, racial discrimination and ethnic conflicts are still common. Not to mention the despicable and shameless Denlanders you described. It's disgusting.

It feels like the writing is nondescript. It has a Western name, but the names of the people around you are still Eastern. It sounds very embarrassing to read. It would be better if you just bring a World of Warcraft system to time travel.

The protagonist and Aragorn in Chapter 10 gave me the impression that they are two psychopaths.

Seriously, what's going on? Forced wisdom, is this Aragorn? It's understandable that the protagonist is self-righteous with a low IQ. After all, ordinary people would be arrogant and arrogant if they traveled through time with a plug-in. Is Aragorn someone who has been on the battlefield and in the court so low? When he was in Gondor, the regent during the War of the Ring (his father was still there at the time) and Aragorn were political enemies. Because the previous regent trusted and admired Aragorn very much, Denethor targeted Aragorn with all kinds of dissatisfaction. If Aragorn was so useless, Denethor would have killed him long ago. Denethor had gone crazy during the War of the Ring, but he himself was not a very powerful prime minister. He was far inferior to his ancestors, and the throne was not theirs. Several of the early great ministers who improved Gondor took their oaths seriously and were sincerely willing to return the throne to the royal family. The descendants of Elendil themselves are the orthodox royal family, and Isildur himself truly inherits the title of King of Gondor. However, he died early because his younger son was too young and not strong enough. In addition, he failed to regain the throne due to negligence. Melander, who was acting regent at the time, ascended the throne himself because he was of royal blood. The subsequent prime ministers were greedy for power and were extremely greedy, and it was easy for Sauron to take advantage of him. Being around such a person (although I hate this guy, but he does have some abilities, and everyone thinks he is a guy, so I just follow suit), and being feared by such a guy, think about how dangerous it is. Aragorn's pseudonym is Thoronzil. A person with no background in Gondor can accomplish countless feats and finally leave alive. Is this a bad person?

I read all the updates in one go. From the amazing at the beginning to the boring later, a large amount of background introduction takes up less than half of the content. The protagonist's IQ is worrying, the name is speechless and a bit alienating, the protagonist's personality is speechless, and it changes in one chapter. It is disgusting to read. This is a military novel, a novel about hegemony. Can't the character of the protagonist be stable? One moment he is domineering and the other moment he acts like a bullied girl. It makes people speechless! I just hope that the author can be more stable. In fact, there is really no need to add a lot of unnecessary settings to the protagonist's character to make the protagonist colorful. There is really no need to be like a little girl who is sunny and cloudy for a while, just plain and plain. I hope the author can work hard!

After the protagonist traveled through time, he changed his name to a Western one and had a bunch of Eastern names. It looked really awkward to me.

Oh wow, look, I actually found a Lord of the Rings fan novel that is being updated.

To sum up the book so far, it is an Eastern system protagonist traveling into a Western fantasy world. Then, as the master of the system, he did not kneel down to the Son of Destiny in the Western fantasy world so far, and then triggered a plot that basically included the villain of the Western fantasy world and the Son of Destiny kneeling down and subduing the Son of Destiny. The righteous party surrounded and beat the protagonist! ! ! (눈_눈)

The author doesn't know much about ancient Chinese armor, so he recommends reading "Illustrated Ancient Chinese Armor" first. Also, I have been telling Europeans on the Internet that there was no distinction between light and heavy cavalry in ancient China. Unlike European knights, riders, and mounted archers, ancient Chinese cavalry can both shoot from a distance and fight at close range. They are distinguished according to their functions and armor rate. Another thing, ancient Chinese cavalry In ancient times, when fighting against nomads, men wore heavy armor, and horses did not wear armor, otherwise they would not be able to catch up. The Chinese Civil War, especially the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, the Anshi Rebellion, the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, the Song, Liao, Jin, and Xixia Mongolian cavalry battles all used armor and riding equipment. Please carefully check what armor and riding equipment is [all men and horses are (covered) in heavy armor]

Please, as a Western fantasy world, even if the protagonist is an Oriental, but the others are not, can you not use Oriental elements in it? It's very embarrassing. What am I telling you? When you write a Western fantasy, you have to use Western vocabulary. This way, there is no sense of substitution, it's very dramatic, and it's embarrassing.

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So childish! Very descriptive! It's too embarrassing. The protagonist's character is always that of a young man who can't grow up.

This Elrond can't even say it without killing the protagonist. Not to mention Aragorn's magical transformation. Thinking about his identity, Aragorn is not only an adopted son, but his ancestor Elros, the founding emperor of Numenor, is Elrond's biological brother. He just chose an elf and a human, but they are both the children of Beren and Lúthien. Now the protagonist wants to kill his brother's last descendant in the world, Elrond doesn't want to kill him?

So people of Eastern descent are given Western names?

Really, if I don't understand the original work and am too lazy to read the book, I go to station B to look for the video. It takes a few minutes to explain the plot of a book, but it doesn't take long to finish reading it. I'm not even a true hardcore fan, I've only read six books in the trilogy: The Silmarillion, The Children of Hurin, and The Lord of the Rings. There are also many documents that I have never touched. In these short chapters, the original characters involved are a bit troublesome. Some of the changes to the settings of the original work are acceptable to me, and the changes to the original characters are really good. . . This is not the epic world of Tuo Lao

Alas, the beginning of Chapter 10 looks like it was written by two people, and it ends in an anticlimax.

The name issue has a strong sense of inconsistency. It should be unified either in European style or in Chinese. It's too confusing. The subject matter is a good army type. Well written and very attractive. Come on,

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The subject matter is good, I like it very much, I have collected it!