The Ups and Downs of My Master in the Great Rivers and Lakes

This protagonist is completely black for the sake of being black, and has no personality at all. He can be classified as a pervert.

Killing other people's parents and still expecting others to be loyal to you, are you stupid or someone else? What kind of plot is this! Damn it

After reading about ten chapters, I found that the system rewards are all martial arts secrets and weapons. After reading it, I felt very happy. No matter how many martial arts secrets you have, you still need to practice, and practice depends on your talent. The protagonist's talent should be very good, but in the end, you still have to practice step by step like others, so the enjoyment is very low. If you can add some or something like that, it would be great to assist in training. The system is also very vague and marginalized.

I will not comment on the content of the book, I just want to say: May you live long, my friend.

Are there too many cousin scenes? I've only read Chapter 15, and there's basically every picture, and the protagonist tells her all the secrets without any reservations. He also wants to find her a boyfriend for the protagonist. The protagonists are all virgins, and the cousin has been converted. Aren't all the secrets gone? Don't say you can't, you may not know how to write, but the less you have, the more you lack? The type of witch like cousin is most easily influenced by good old people, such as Zhao Min and Zhang Wuji, Huan Huan and Xu Zilin

When will my cousin write it to death? When will I watch it again? .

The author said that you wrote a dark novel, and that the heroine is not pleasing to both sides. If you don't have a heroine, you can go to the black bar and help you promote it.

I like the setting, whether the protagonist is likeable or not is another matter.

The protagonist doesn't have much character, he just feels like a villain.

Wearing a dark skin, doing stallion things, and having a little bit of chuunibyou.

This protagonist is so bad that he hasn't even developed a good thing like Soul Chasing Incense, so people can run away.

They keep saying that there will be rewards for changing the plot. The way the protagonist changes the plot is too simple, that is, who was famous in the previous life, I just kill them, and the plot is rewritten. I don't feel like he's the mastermind behind the scenes. His martial arts skills are just like that, and he will be instantly broken when he encounters a big boss. I feel like he is a simple fun-loving person who looks tyrannical and cool, but actually looks like a schizophrenic. Some people are directly poisoned and controlled by poison, and then the little girl just made others mute without any precautions. It can only be said that the heart is as high as the sky, but the talent is great and the wisdom is sparse.

A large number of characters are thrown out. If this is a popular game, then everyone knows it, and it doesn't matter. But no one knows it. You throw out five or six versions of the characters at the same time. Who can remember them? There are also plots from various TV movies and novels. Just change the names and use them. . . Also, every time there is a massacre, one or two children will always run away. When the first version of the plot begins more than ten years later, it can be targeted at the protagonist. Don't worry about running out of things to write... The protagonist's treatment of women is also a problem. You clearly want to use the princess as a tool, and even stab her father in the back. But the way you treat her is not chasing girls? You don't show any signs of treating others as tools There is also that clone, Jing, female body, kind, dark text, but likes and dislikes are about to appear, but now there is no trace at all, at least Jing's appearance has been foreshadowed for dozens of chapters, it's so awkward There is also little point in rewarding so many exercises, even if you keep meeting people who teach them The apprentice also accepted them for no reason. Based on the previous description of the protagonist, it is not like the kind of person who picks up a beggar on the roadside and accepts him as his apprentice. There is no reason at all.

The writing is too messy, the setting is good, but it has no internal flavor.

I saw some names that were related to Pili, but Li Zi had nothing to do with them, which was really weird.

Personally, I think the literary flavor is a bit strong. When I saw the protagonist playing with souls, or the duality of good and evil, which has a side effect on the body, I lost it. It is a standard boss template that seeks death. I am really not afraid of becoming a lunatic and being tricked to death by myself. Then looking at other aspects, good guy, it is really a head-on collision. There is no end to the madness of seeking death. It's so awesome. He fell down from the beginning and never picked it up again. He looked like a first-rate or third-rate mini-boss. It would be really interesting to have another fun guy to clean it up. At first, I felt that the setting was pretty good and the framework was OK, but the placement of the characters and the plot always had a third-rate feeling. It felt like it was not well written and the plot was quite perfunctory. To be honest, apart from the new variables caused by the new settings, I don't feel like there is anything else to see as the game progresses!

Well, isn't the man behind the scenes planning to use others to achieve his goals, but he seems to have nothing to do with it?

Please don't write it as the person who masters the weapons. It's always the people who control the weapons, even if it's a magic weapon. Please don't use it to describe the weapons. I don't see how it's cool at all? Write more about the characters! ! !

A mouse in the dark but likes the light is destined to be tragic, and the word is mean