Dou Po's White Hair Cloud Mountain

I have been working on a contract signing recently. Once it is completed, I will start updating normally (more than 8,000 words per day). It will probably take several days to complete. Looking at the comments, some people say that I am not good at details? . . It is a matter of the cultivation of Yunshan, the leader of Yunlan Sect. According to normal development, Yunshan is indeed Douhuang at this time (it is also mentioned in the book - Chapters 2 to 3) In this book, what changes have occurred in Yunshan's realm from Douhuang to Douzong? Or something? That's right, it's the two things of being destroyed and reassembled by the old man and the protagonist being reborn. . . No, there is one more thing The souls of the original Yunshan and the protagonist merge, the memories collide, and the consciousness remains (that is, the protagonist) Which of these three things allowed Yunshan to break through to Douzong? First item. What made Yunshan break through Douzong in the first thing? That ball of blood is golden but exudes green light. Don't ask why the breakthrough happened right now, and don't ask why there was no movement in the breakthrough. The question is that the blood was very high and terrifying in my setting, but there was no movement in the breakthrough? The old man pressed it down smoothly. It seems that everything needs to be explained clearly in the book in the future, otherwise you won't understand. But to be honest, this is very watery. . . Uncomfortable. . .

Regarding the content of Chapter 1, there was a problem with Qidian itself. I posted that he would not change it. If you didn't understand it before, come here to take a look.

For these three attributes, you can learn from Xiongba's own "Three-Point Return to Vitality" to integrate these three attributes.

Except for the first few chapters, the content is quite good. However, the author's description of how to arrange cheats for the protagonist is too exaggerated and can easily be dismissed. After all, the background view is not as grand as possible. It is better if you really write a grand world view and introduce it bit by bit. If you are only writing Dou Po fandom, there is no need to do this.

Is the protagonist a comic book character?

It's been seven days, eunuch? ? ?

I guess today's update won't be the same as yesterday. I have to deal with contract matters again. Being underage really requires a lot of procedures, which is annoying.

Watch it if Yunshan becomes Chihiroji 🤔

Come on, author! ! Chase every day! ! !

Come on! It's well written, but it's best not to have such brainless characters.

Come on, it's pretty good 🙂

There aren't many good Dou Po fandoms nowadays. I'm optimistic about you. Come on.

I suggest you change the beginning. If you open these, you are really trying to persuade them to quit. It is better to just travel to Yunshan and get the golden finger.