Elemental Wizard of Hogwarts

Based on the compatibility and relationship between the protagonist and Hermione, your description of the trio and the iron triangle is a bit mechanical. Either Hermione will force the protagonist to form a foursome, or Hermione will not be so close to Harry and Ron. There is absolutely no possibility of a trio!

This book is quite good. I have read more than a dozen Harry Potter fanfics, but basically I lost interest after halfway through. The pace of this book seems to be pretty good so far. I hope that the subsequent stories will be more exciting.

Well, follow Hermione into Gryffindor and die of poisoning. You said that the heroine Hermione is okay, but entering the Lion's Court for this reason is completely unreasonable. Is the protagonist being carried away by love? To be honest, it would be perfect if this became the protagonist, changing Hermione's view of other houses, and going to Ravenclaw with Hermione.

Even though the protagonist and Hermione are childhood sweethearts, Hermione still gets involved with those two idiots. I really don't understand it. Is it just to reference the plot of the original work? If Hermione had a crush on the protagonist, why would she always help those two idiots?

This is invincible

I saw that when the protagonist saw Dumbledore for the first time, that damn old Deng was very poisonous. It was obviously not the behavior that a child should have. If you can't control it, don't change it. Professor McGonagall is fine. If you change it randomly and you can't control it, it will be poisonous. Keep reading, Shen Nong used tea to detoxify the first time.

I just started watching it, but I wish the protagonist would have less to do with Harry Potter. He is just a troublemaker, a human being, and just messing around with everything.

There's a reason why it didn't become popular. It was too awkward in front of me. . I can hardly stand it after dozens of chapters.

My heroine Hermione is very authentic! It's the same as the Conan fangirl mourning the heroine. It's hard to understand why Hermione is dissed as the heroine

I think the author is not very clear about the priorities of this book. Everyone is here to see the story of the protagonist creating his own legend, not to come here to be a nanny for the trio. (Of course, if the heroine is Hermione, at least she shouldn't be the nanny of the other two)

After reading more than 130 chapters, I feel a little numb... The power system is really unacceptable. It doesn't refer to elemental magic or ancient magic, but just the power system of the novel. This book is not a numerical flow like the blue-striped mage in the game. If my numerical value is strong, I will take Avada and punch Voldemort to death; It is not a restraint flow like the research rules in DND, where one thing is reduced to another and the right restraint relationship can be found, and the fight can go up to several levels; It is not a numerical restraint mix and match flow like the original Harry Potter, where various magics within a certain level have various restraint relationships. What this author learned is the kind of collapse of the treasure in DC that talks nonsense! Once a new gadget appears, all the previous gadgets except this new gadget will become useless paper, and all the previous skill strengths will be eaten up (including the skills of other characters in the original work or the movie)!

I originally thought this was a HP fanfic that explored the essence of magic and incorporated the theory of Pallas's four elements. Now it seems that it actually borrowed the mage system from DND or video games. The author completely misunderstood the elemental theory behind the four major academies. It's not that it doesn't look good, it just feels like I was tricked into clicking in. Note: This post is not to say that the novel is not good-looking, and it is not a comment. I just hope that readers can know in advance what the so-called elemental mage in the title is and be mentally prepared in advance.

The psychological age of the protagonist should be over 30 years old. He just got off guard after being spoken to by the socket nose for a few words. Then his psychological quality is too poor. If he is a child like Harry Potter, then there will be no problem. The problem is that the protagonist is a time traveler 😥

Why are almost all the heroines of Harry Potter fan fiction Hao Min?

Doesn't the author have his own outline? The plot is really developed unchanged and copied from Rowling🤔🤔

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I've had enough, as a Chinese teacher I am almost suffering from obsessive-compulsive disorder. Can't you just check it after you finish writing? How many typos are there?

Two Hermiones, choose one

In the first few chapters, the protagonist has been in Harry Potter for a year. When Dumbledore came up to him, he said "Old Deng" and looked very surprised. It was really the first time he persuaded him to leave.

It's really poisonous. It's only suitable for people who haven't read the original work.

As an adult who has passed through the soul, not to mention the SB behavior of buying stocks before the age of 11 at the beginning, just seeing the original characters is a "surprise"! Really poisonous...

For the sake of heroine Hermione, I kept it on the bookshelf.

The protagonist is not as good as the little girl next door. Drizzt made the old man Grindelwald docile. Look at this person again, bah~ it's nothing.

Although there are many flaws, such as the lack of a sense of immersion in the characters, from the front to the back, I can see the author's progress. I look forward to the next book.

No, author, can you correct the typos? It looks so uncomfortable(┯_┯)

Personally I think it's amazing

It can be seen that the author loves the HP world... But the nanny and group flow are really too boring

Miss Furong🌹🌹🌹

The writing is a bit awkward, but it's average and still readable. Nowadays, articles that follow the protagonist group are no longer popular and cannot attract people.

Is Harry Potter the one in which thousands of people fight against the village-level terrorist Lord Voldemort?

Why are there so many typos? It's so uncomfortable to watch😭