Pearls and Jade Under the Silk and Satin

It wasn't until I read Newsweek a few days ago that I realized that silk and satin are different

First of all, we do not use generalizations in character creation, but rely on dialogue and psychological description. Haha, this Cantonese language has very local characteristics and personality. Then, there is the shaping of the worldview. It can be seen that the author wants to create a world with modern characteristics that integrates East and West. After. . If I read it correctly, the author created such a masculine protagonist with such a description so that more readers can accept it. Then, let me tell you about the advancement of the plot. The author actually doesn't control it very well. For example, the progress between Audrey and Xiaoyun, I think it will be difficult for a tsundere to take the initiative. . In addition, intention is one thing, whether it is useful where used is another matter. . For example, how to describe a person's beauty, and how to use something extremely sexy or something to describe a person's good figure is often very common. At this time, the experience I have accumulated tells me that I should use the art of leaving blank space Also, this broken chapter is a bit uncomfortable, right? It's quite abrupt. Often a qualified chapter expresses what is wanted to express and advances what should be advanced, such as (1) (2). . . I think this should be used sparingly unless it is suitable for a big plot. . Ahaha, of course it's not all shortcomings, that's all. . Hmm, did you change your name halfway through? . Although this is an attempt, it has actually changed a bit. . The appropriate application of first person and third person depends on the way you want to express it. . Just like "Wandering Alone", the whole story is in the first person, which is very suitable, and it fits the theme very well. For example, the author of "Wireless Blood Core", the third person objectively advances the plot, and the first person closes the distance to create the characters, making it easier for readers to get into the characters. . Wait like this In addition, if you feel that there are too many fighting plots, it is better to use a detailed and appropriate method at this time. For the same plot, you should consider the reader's acceptance and other factors, write in detail when necessary, and abbreviate when necessary. . In addition, although the main line of this book is quite obvious and the content of the book fits the title, I feel that it lacks a core, which is the theme. For a work that can be truly remembered, the theme it expresses should be profound. The author expresses it through the description of the entire book. In this regard, "Wandering Alone" is really great. To give another example, in the college entrance examination essay, an article with beautiful diction will not score as high as an article with less beautiful diction that expresses profound thoughts. Of course, for mainstream online articles, there must be a plot in the early stage to make people feel interested in increasing the number of readers, and then the author will use the plot to express the theme to enhance reader stickiness. I think this is the difference in focus. I give you a bunch of skill points and it depends on how you allocate them. Above. . It's almost like I am giving advice to the author. Regarding this book, I am actually more inclined to give advice to the author. . Writing an article really requires careful consideration. . Come on!