Raising Cubs in the World of Cultivating Immortals

Why hasn't the heroine started cultivating immortality yet? It's too slow. Anyone can bully her. I want to ask if there are any male protagonists.

This book is a bit baffling. At first the heroine was unwilling to adopt for fear of being killed, but after reading the novel, the heroine naturally knew that she was killed because of abuse. This is the first point. The second point is that the heroine Xiang Zen said that there is only one introduction in the novel about her previous life, but there is no introduction about how she died. However, according to the plot line, her biological son was eaten alive by his biological father who was demonized. It is impossible not to introduce it, and this kind of demonization is very important. Third point, I see other people calling the heroine a mortal senior. This is too fucking ridiculous. Calling you Mrs.

The first three chapters were well written, and I became interested in the subsequent plot after reading it. It is said that the first three chapters are very important and determine whether the reader will continue reading. Then I can only say that the first three chapters of this book are above the standard. It's just that the introduction is not good enough 😜. I was attracted by the title of the book😁

Just saw it posted. The story setting is pretty good. Is the author a novice? I feel like I didn't describe the specific content well. The background of the story is not narrated where it needs to be introduced, and the overall story seems a bit laborious, with jumps in the plot and incoherence. The development of the heroine's character is very vague, so the heroine feels strange. For example, when the heroine meets the half-demon little fox for the first time and learns that she is cannon fodder in the book, her whole reaction is a bit strange. Fear and avoidance are okay, but going too far. Also, I don't know why the heroine followed her back to Chu's house. After a series of events, she left Chu's house alive with her children. Why did she join the ring again? Enter the secret realm? A mortal heroine, with spiritual roots, doesn't have any psychological changes and foreshadowing? Why enter the secret realm? No kids? Are you relieved to leave it to someone you haven't known for a few days? ! Be big-hearted. In short, the author, please work harder, improve your writing skills, and write the story you want to express well. There is a long way to go to write an article that most readers can understand and be satisfied with!

I didn't understand it at all🤔🤔

The first few pictures are okay, but the latter part is a bit foggy. First of all, I can't explain why I went back to the Chu family. I'm very confused about the behavior and attitude of the Chu family. There's also Chu Qingyan, the heroine who saves and doesn't save her, but finally saves her again. Just like Ah Sheng before, it's so disgusting. It's like this again and again. Isn't it annoying?

The heroine is so awesome that when she gave birth to a baby, she just used a knife to cut it, stretched out her hand, and the baby was born. He also got out of bed and went out like a normal person.

After reading thirty chapters, I have no idea what I am writing about 😵😵😵 There is no logic and story, and the emotions of the characters come too quickly. It's as if the heroine has opened a Mary Sue halo, making everyone love her 🤔🤔🤔 Weirdly

Stock trading quietly. I want to buy Xunsheng stocks but I feel my child is too young to buy it Chu Li is too scumbag and I don't want to buy it If I don't have enough talent, I will have to buy it at the limit It's quite interesting But unfortunately now everyone seems to like no CP😭

I think it's really not connected. Although I like the introduction and the previous part written by the author, it's really weird 😰😰

Xianxia is not martial arts, and the heroine is too weird. I don't even know where to complain: I only saw Chapter 43 1. She traveled through the past and had the memory of the book, and she didn't want to have a relationship with the male protagonist in the original book. This is normal, but the heroine turned out to be an ordinary person. She behaved differently from before and was not afraid of being thought of as someone who took over her life. Ordinary people will not become supermen when they travel to the past. Everything she showed is that I will be a boss one day, and I am not afraid of any of this 2. The heroine knew that the Chu family who took her back had bad intentions, but she still went with her. She was a Mortals still dare to be tough and cheat like a detective. As soon as you go there, you will know that the Chu family has a devil. Everyone she meets is very nice to her. Here I am going to complain about the righteous leader. You can check whether your ex-wife is pregnant or not, or you can send someone to check. Yes, it's still the saying that immortals are not martial arts, immortals are mysterious and unpredictable 3. It's even weirder when you come out of the Chu family. Suddenly you heard someone demeaning women, so you suddenly went over to kill someone, happened to be seen by the eldest lady, and was picked up by the eldest lady during the martial arts competition.

I don't understand, if the city lord has the ability to protect the heroine, why does the heroine have to go back to the Chu family to suffer? I can't explain it

Why should I go back to Chu's house? I feel confused.

It can't be that the heroine is holding a vixen, the heroine is starting to become popular. . . Inexplicable

What is written is a mess, with no beginning or end and no logic at all...

Stay up late to catch up on the latest, I have invested... Let me talk about my feelings, the plot is good, the writing style needs to be improved, the plot transition is incoherent, I need to think about it to connect with the previous plot (only my opinion)...

The writing is good, but I feel that sometimes the heroine's character is a little too cold and too arrogant. Of course, I can't say it's wrong. After all, everyone has their own opinions, but there is one thing I don't understand. Chu Xuyi's feelings for the heroine are a bit inexplicable. He hated the heroine at the beginning, but soon he liked her. This reversal is a bit big (of course, it may be that I didn't read it carefully enough). I have to describe the emotional line clearly, otherwise it will easily make people feel inexplicable. (Personal opinion)

It's pretty good. I want to see the heroine get spiritual roots and start practicing.

The plot is clean and tidy, not sloppy, and goes towards the clear. I like to watch it, but it needs a little more! ! !

I just want to know whose child it is? Does anyone know?