Super Online Game: Universe

Post a post. I just started reading it. I suggest you highlight the protagonist. Is the description of the supporting characters a bit too much? Is it like this later? You are writing a novel, you cannot introduce everything in the same way as the background of the game.

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After reading this book, what can I say about this book? Apart from the false group portrait in the previous article, the lengthy plot in the following article, and the extremely slow progress of the subject matter, the overall plot, character description, world view, and some content settings and detailed descriptions are all quite good. But, what we pursue when reading this kind of online game novels is the greasiness of the plot (of course, the main focus is on the pursuit of gratification) This kind of pleasure now does not refer to the kind of pretense and slap in the face, but refers to the sense of satisfaction that readers get from indulging in the process of characters getting results through hard work and solving certain events based on the continuity of the plot, or the excitement and passion that readers get from it. The most intuitive manifestation in online games is killing monsters, upgrading, and beating bosses. (This kind of coolness was brought to its extreme in Tribulation of All Races. It made me feel so tired when I watched Star Gate.) There were no big problems in the previous part of this book before Red and Red left the village. The character expressions were still in place, but after leaving the village, other characters were greatly reflected (reflecting the training process and gradually improving the protagonist's attributes at this time is a great coolness, but with the interspersion of a large number of characters, this coolness was greatly compressed), after the special training. . . Good guy, the barbarian was abused at the beginning, I won't say much more about the rest, I know how to read it. Finally, I have to say that this is an online game article! ! !

Yes, I will continue to follow this book I like this kind of simulation game article the most Come on, author! How about giving me a reply?

The author is not suitable for writing multi-character novels. It's too messy and might as well be a running account. I suggest just writing the protagonist and occasionally interspersing other characters. Otherwise, it will be too tiring to read. The world structure is okay, but the literary love is too bad.

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Three years of being a soldier was in vain. One month after he was dismissed, the new manager disappeared, and the seafood girl disappeared even faster. After all, no one might know if a seafood person dies.