Ska Town

The short story unfolds with the "disappearance" of the heroine Sally. It does not mention Sally's condition in writing. Instead, it uses the male protagonist's psychology and environmental changes to promote the plot of the story. It can be seen from the depiction of the environment and the use of words that the author has certain writing skills, but the plot is somewhat incomplete due to the length. The character of the beggar in the article is a bit blunt. The series of actions of Sally's mother at the end are intended to show her difficulty in accepting Sally's death. However, this plot appears a bit abrupt. It is recommended that the story be unfolded according to the psychology and perspective of the male protagonist Hatton. As a short story, on the one hand it is short in length, and on the other hand it is the depiction of the plot and the polishing of the story itself. Just some suggestions, please correct me if I'm wrong.