Basic Deduction Method in the World of Ke Xue

It felt good at first, but then it became more and more boring. Every time I encountered a case, it was a violent crackdown. I licked the Haihara sisters in various ways, changing positions and continuing to lick. It was a different mentality (I am sure I am not a reader, every reader has a favorite anime character). The protagonist looked like an anti-social lunatic and gave up.

The plot has been a bit irritable recently, and it just started violently breaking the plot. The protagonist is getting further and further away from the detective, and he is becoming more and more like Kyogoku Makoto.

Current progress: Chapter 8 1. In the first three chapters, the number of words in each paragraph seems a bit too much. Basically, two or three paragraphs will fill up a page. A large section doesn't look very comfortable. I am quite a scumbag and can't give any good advice... What I mean is that words don't need to be crammed into one paragraph. (I personally try not to exceed a certain number of words in a paragraph. If there are too many words in one sentence, I will also divide it into paragraphs. Occasionally, a paragraph can be used. If the whole article is like this, it will feel very tired.) —————— Then I found that starting from the fourth chapter, the paragraphs look quite comfortable... What is this called... Yes, although I don't understand it very well, but I read that someone said that the three golden chapters are very important. 2. Problems with typos and punctuation marks. ①There is no [,] or [:] after [said]. ②A considerable number of paragraphs have no punctuation marks at the end of the sentence. ③There are really a lot of typos. I'd better correct them if I can. (Flower growers say that they really can't stand seeing worms growing on seedlings, and the same applies to novels) —————— Then I discovered that you are really efficient, Sakura, so I pointed out that it was changed soon after. 3. As for the plot, it is quite satisfactory. I don't quite remember the sequence of the original case, but this one should be quite exciting. Cracking the case... We don't understand it very well, but I can see that... It's a little too fast, which doesn't mean it can't be done, it just... How can I put it, it's equivalent to supplementing Conan: read the beginning - skip the process (pull up the progress bar) - solve the case at the end. 4. Generally speaking, there are problems with the writing style, but it can also be seen that there is continuous improvement. 5. Then, come on.

Well, I hope the author will write all the clues when writing, making it seem as if the protagonist has foreknowledge and locks in the prisoner without even looking at it. I don't know if you can write your own thing. I'm waiting and watching, and I'm optimistic🤩.

I found that there is a trend in Qidian now, which is all about movies without female protagonists. Is everything going to be reversed? Are there too many harem stories in the previous ones? Are men now wanted to be written off as having no desires or desires? If a person has no desires, is he still a human being?

Regarding the introduction, I want to say one thing. Kudo Shinichi is not like Sherlock Holmes at all. What he admires is Holmes' ability in detective work, not his moral character, style and personality charm. The only similarity between Kudo Shinichi and Sherlock Holmes is that they are both detectives.

I don't know if the author has encountered something unsatisfactory and is in a bad mood. In the recent chapters, the protagonist Xiuji's character seems to have suddenly become a lot more arrogant. He speaks all kinds of rude words, both in words and deeds. Moreover, the description of the investigation of the case is becoming more and more brief. I can't give specific details, and I feel a lot distracted.

No CP? Then I'll add a bookshelf first~ I'll wait for 100,000 words before reading it - if there were no eunuchs at that time~ (seedlings are not easy)

It doesn't matter if there is a female protagonist, as long as it's not Haibara Ai

How should I put it? The feeling that the protagonist gives me now is due to the plot. The protagonist's particularly awesome reasoning ability feels like the author has not written it.

The biggest bug in Conan is that Conan has become smaller. Of the relevant organizations in the world, only the black organizations are interested. The FBI, CIA, and MI6 turned a blind eye and cooperated with Conan to rejuvenate his youth. I don't believe that the 731 troops were brought back by the United States after World War II to nourish their lives, and they have no interest in rejuvenation. Comparing the various behaviors of Sera's mother after she became small, I really want to say, it's really Ke Xue.

Personally, I suggest that Mariko is very good as the heroine. She matches the protagonist's personality, and she is also very sensible and will not be deceived by the plot. Later, when Xiao Ai comes out, do you want to take it home and keep it as a mascot? What a good pet.

In the first chapter, this book gives people a good feeling. It clearly explains the background setting of the protagonist and gives the protagonist a good personality, but the subsequent development is completely streamlined. The plot connections are not arranged well, and there is no detail at all, and it becomes a sketch. In the first seven chapters, not counting the golden villa, three cases were solved: the secret room murder case of Okino Yoko, the Italian gold coin, and the world's best sacrifice. Moon Shadow Island only took three chapters to complete (chapters 8-10). This is considered a very important case in Conan and can definitely be written longer. The protagonist's character is a detective, and handling cases can highlight his character, but his premise is that he is an individual, and daily connection is also a good way to highlight his character. I currently don't see what the protagonist "wants" or what the protagonist's future purpose is. The collision of red and black, the shadow of Sherlock Holmes on the protagonist, and Conan's reaction to the protagonist are not included. A few original cases are forced on, what does the basic deduction method have to do with it? To be honest, some Conan fanfics need to systematically advance the plot, so that the plot connection is not so rigid, and the protagonist can become the pressure that readers want. The author assumes that the protagonist is an ordinary detective who is proficient in script killing. Writing this will test your writing skills and plot arrangement. I have only read 10 chapters so far, but these ten chapters almost only allowed me to review the original plot of Conan. Come on, author _(:з∠)_

You can try Yuanzi, I haven't seen Yuanzi yet

Oh my god, Tanejima Shuji? ? A senior from Li Hai University? ? Is this article comprehensive enough for Internet King? ?

After reading more than a dozen of them, I would like to give you some advice: sort out the lines. There is no definite line, so I just jumped here. Moreover, the relationship between the characters develops too fast. It doesn't take long for Mao Lilan and Yuanzi to develop into friends who have been friends since childhood.

No heroine! ! Favorite hehehe

I still prefer Akemi Miyano as the heroine. Although Shuichi Akai has been eliminated, Shuichi still has Judy. The most difficult thing about Conan comics is the death of Akemi's sister. I really hope to arrange a good ending for her.