Scepter as Salary

The name is very cool, and it feels very similar to what I want to write. I like the style of the introduction, but I always feel it is slightly flawed. I feel that in the first two sentences, there is almost no difference between the role of arcana in divine power and royal power. I feel that the level of the setting is a bit lower. In addition, the first two sentences are a turning relationship, but the third sentence is a parallel relationship. I feel uncomfortable Wait to read the content.

Tell me about the setting of your book. Actually, it's a bit of a Western fantasy? My actual suggestion is to substitute other world elements. If it is original, it will be difficult to achieve (it is just difficult, not without opportunities) There is nothing wrong with the writing style. The setting depends on people. I am not interested in this type, excluding others.

The writing is okay, but the identity of the protagonist is counterproductive to the development of the plot. According to the current plot, it is best to set the protagonist as a low-level noble or a declining noble. With the current protagonist's identity, it is more appropriate to take the path of rebellion at the bottom.

Good guy, the lawyer also writes books 🙂

I've finished reading it. It's the first time I've read a book of this type. I don't know why, but I always think of A Song of Ice and Fire. It's too little, so I don't see much of it, but it's very descriptive and has a strong visual sense 😁

Come on, look forward to it 😊

I feel like the writing is very good 🤓

After having a late night snack, come and take a look. Hey, it hasn't been updated yet! Then I'll be relieved. I haven't updated it yet.

I really like the environment described in the novel. It has the magnificence of a fantasy world and the beauty of World of Warcraft. I look forward to your story and worldview unfolding 🤭

It feels good. I don't like this kind of subject matter. I can't say whether it's good or bad.

Azhe, have you finished the book?🙂

Not bad, good, already voted, come on!

New authors may still need to gain some popularity with the title and introduction of the book... If there is another book, please @ and I will invest in you