Hong Kong Monks

The sea is really all water. The name of the sea is Baidu🙂

After reading it, let's talk about it first. Everything I wrote before is from Baidu! After I changed it later, it got better, but what's the use of writing a Hong Kong drama like this? It's all about inserting the protagonist and not changing the plot. If we like Hong Kong drama, we like someone to change the plot or subvert it. Otherwise, what's the point? I just dabble and don't go into it. How refreshing is this writing? In fact, I like all the Hong Kong dramas you chose. Just watching you follow the plot like this or change it, there is no change from the main plot. Is it interesting? Maybe it was okay ten years ago, but now readers are tired of it. In the past, Mu Mu Liu just came out not long ago. From Mu Mu Liu, All Heavens and All Realms, to Integrated All Worlds, it has been developed for so long. There is no highlight in writing like this. It is more enjoyable. 🙂🙂🙂

I really like this fast-paced mode recently. It's a movie variety show. Why not participate like a bird's eye view? The shortcomings are, first of all, it involves a lot of TV dramas, and they are from a certain age. It would be a blur if I didn't tell the source. The other one is that it is a bit out of touch. Combining the first point, it is even bigger. After all, it is a Hong Kong comprehensive, and it is still necessary to at least participate and participate. In addition, the writing is relatively loose. You must know that online articles are too loose and it is not suitable to follow up. If you change the plot in one or two chapters, you will not remember anything at all after reading it the next day. Finally, I would like to give you some suggestions. Hong Kong comprehensive integration can properly integrate the relationship between the plot and characters. The police and the underworld actually overlap a lot, so they can be intertwined. As for the protagonist, as a master of cultivating immortals, he can change the plot more boldly, or use more famous characters to participate in less popular plots, so there is no need to appear too many small characters who pass by. After all, I don't know if other readers will be like me and like to look up the characters when they see them 😥

The three golden chapters are used to popularize science. This will cause the loss of many readers. I suggest the author take the time to revise it.

A good book that makes people complain

Too much science and too little plot

I'm sorry. I can't stand it anymore. The main character is mentally ill. He says he's afraid of trouble. He'll just ask for trouble if nothing happens. I'll spoil it one by one by meddling in other people's business. You can't even tell fortunes accurately. You still need to cultivate your mind. Aren't you afraid of divine punishment?

Although the beginning is a bit shaky, the plot is pretty good. And the way the protagonist deals with ghosts is also very good. To cultivate Taoism, you must first cultivate your heart. If your character is not good enough, and you only cultivate your magic power, you are just cultivating immortality. But in the later stage, I hope that the wronged ghost will appear and help the wronged ghost to redress his grievances, and the evil ghost will just beat him to death! Come on update! !

There is no main plot. I wander around all day. When I see a character in the plot, I run over and tell others what will happen to me in the future. It's so embarrassing.

Baidu Encyclopedia added a short story

It feels like the main character is mentally ill. He reveals the facts of the case indiscriminately, and you don't ask for anything in return. It's completely like a novice village guide, with no logic.

Author, are you writing a book or copying Baidu Encyclopedia?

Chapter 1 Tianyan Encyclopedia Chapter 2 Siheyuan Encyclopedia Chapter 3 Taoist Encyclopedia ? ? ?

First, too much of the content is popular science and Taoist knowledge, so I advise you to quit! Second, the protagonist is like a passerby from God's perspective, not participating in the plot. He always pretends to be a master, telling half and leaving half for others to guess! Discourage! ! ! Goodbye

I feel that the popular science is richer than the plot. The author can use this as a training exercise. Unless you have a deep love for Hong Kong variety shows, most people will not be able to stand it.

Crazy spoiler, you didn't get arrested by the police, you're crazy enough to commit suicide, and you can still farm in the temple. Are the rest of them NPCs?

My friend, find a factory to work in.

It's so well written, come and read it. Don't let me know anyone's pain. You can ascend to heaven in ten chapters

I feel that the protagonist is very troubled, so he just needs to concentrate on practicing Taoism. You are not the police or something, so why should you be so lenient? If you offend someone, they will retaliate, and those who benefit from it will most likely verbally thank you. Totally asking for trouble!

It doesn't interfere with the plot but penetrates the plot. It's not interesting.

After reading a few chapters, I was persuaded to give up. It was a spoiler, and only half of it was spoiled. Either you tell him everything, or you just talk about a few key points 😡 It makes my balls hurt to read, and I don't have the skills of an expert at all. Also, you are involved in the drama. Love must have a purpose, or a benefit. You have no intention of doing anything. It's a spoiler. It feels like it's just to intervene in the plot. It's too poisonous. If you have the time to mess with it, it's no good. It's better to go to the world 😅

I also came here to complain, and I saw many people complaining about science popularization issues, so I just wanted to say that it seems useless to complain. The author does not regard the readers as human beings at all, and has an attitude of whether he wants to read or not to entertain himself, so I will discard the new suggestions 😒😒😒

After listening to Chapter 7, without reading the comments, I felt that the protagonist's narrative was like a running account, and it came out one after another. Furthermore, let's not talk about your plot arrangement, let's just talk about the character of the author. Who do you want to be? What are you repairing? The pretentious avenue of flowing water seats?

It's too messy, and several symbols are fragmented. While the protagonist emphasizes that Hong Kong is governed by the law, he runs to kill people, as if he is schizophrenic. After reading thirty chapters, I still can't see the main plot. Those film and television characters look like guest appearances, and none of them are linked to the protagonist. In short, slipped away

After reading more than ten chapters, the writing was too messy. I went to change a book to wash my eyes.

This is the most disgusting book I have ever read! ! ! When you're full, go home and farm.

It's like looking at flowers in a car, seeing nothing at all

There is a sense of forcibly inserting the plot into the plot, and the rhythm of trying to kill people just after getting a little better.

I've been poisoned and slipped away. Change a book to detoxify.

What the hell is this messed up thing? East, west, north. This is pieced together.