After Rebirth, My Ex-Wife and I Battled Wits and Courage

Changing the title of the book will double the number of readers 🙂

Your protagonist is so passionate, why don't you change the name to "Rebirth: I'm such a scumbag"

This book should be renamed: I Was an Honest Person in My Last Life and I Want to Be the King of the Sea in This Life

Support the harem, the author gives me a shout out

Didn't he say in the first chapter that he wanted a divorce? I wanted to cut off this relationship, but in the 20th chapter, it started to be ambiguous again. I don't understand? The male protagonist is too fake

I'm convinced, did the author have someone report him? Why is the new book missing?

This time I will be Shennong. First of all, this is a harem story, pure love warriors run away! Secondly, the logic of the harem is a bit clever. In the setting, the person who has a crush on the protagonist becomes a clear love after being reborn. The future star in the setting also has a good impression of the protagonist. Again, the protagonist is a scumbag and blatantly rides two boats. This is somewhat in conflict with his personality before rebirth. In short, it's okay to have fun, you can treat it as a pastime, don't take it seriously.

After reading two chapters, the writing is acceptable, the rhythm control is weak, and the rest cannot be given an objective evaluation at the moment The specific performance is as follows The female protagonist told the driver some false things in the car to try to make the male protagonist change his mind What is particularly interesting is that As I said before, if the male protagonist is with a woman in the unit, then She goes to make trouble every day When there is a car accident on the next page, she is held in the arms of the hero. There is no panic at all, only a trace of regret, and she thinks about giving the hero a child It is not that the heroine cannot regret But the author's rhythm control ability is weak, the heroine can turn, but the scene described to the reader is too stiff If you want to describe the heroine's nostalgia, you should intersperse some small gestures of the heroine's nostalgia For example, when crying to the driver, you use the tone of the victim's anger, but secretly look at the hero. After all, the heroine no longer has to bear the price of the hero's anger, and now the heroine is the humble party If the author wants to express the heroine's regret You should not describe the inner activities of the heroine, which will make the readers very confused Your story has been told from the male protagonist's perspective until the car accident is approaching, and suddenly the heroine's heart cannot resonate with the readers For example, you can write With the pain on his back being scratched by her fingers that were so hard that they turned white, Ah Kun tightened his head behind her shoulder. He tried his best but clumsily to stuff her whole body into his arms Vaguely, it seemed that he only heard one sentence from her, if. ． ． I can give you a child. ． Just fine. ．

This is just for practice, don't have high expectations, and be careful to work hard from now on. The title of the book is related to the battle of wits and courage in the early stage. In the end, the ex-wife is the least lovable one, so your book is half as bad (the cousin still suggested that you just ignore it and stop writing it)

Take a look at the author. The only thing wrong is the title of the book. The content of the book has nothing to do with the title. At the same time, the cover should be changed. At the same time, there should not be too much love. It is best to have some free time, be alone, reflect on what you are doing, and show confusion. Also, making money by writing novels is a bit poisonous. Give up this routine and see if the previous chapters can be revised. Define the protagonist as someone who was restrained in his previous life and enjoys life in this life. There are also some singles who don't even have girlfriends, so they just point out random things, confuse the superficial and the deep, and have insufficient discernment. As for the ex-wife getting back together? Well, no getting back together at all. Do you know what getting back together means? How difficult is it to fall in love with someone who doesn't love you deeply, and think it's too fast? This single guy is really rich in ideas, and the key is that he is hooking up with other people at the same time. Don't you understand what this means?

I have always had a question, why can urban literature open a harem so blatantly? Won't a man have to marry only one woman in the end? Don't tell me about those people in reality. They are rich, and the girls they raise outside are originally young and cannot have status. Did you only marry one girl in the end? As a kid... You only let others know that you only have one wife, and don't let others know that you have several wives? I believe that women basically want their men to talk about themselves outside. It is impossible to be together, and others don't know that he has a wife... (Personally, my thoughts may be too strange, please be gentle...)

The pace at the beginning is too fast, there is no emotional foreshadowing of the characters, and the impact of the characters is not full.

It was okay before Chapter 76. In Chapter 76, the author dug a sinkhole here. He couldn't have written it without ten years of cerebral thrombosis.

Seriously, a woman who gets divorced every year, and has been doing so for eight consecutive years. I really don't know how the male protagonist can stand it.

It was you who wanted to separate at first, and you separated, and now you want to coax me back with true love. It's not impossible for Qin to come back to power, but he has to be tortured hard.

There's a tricky point. First, it's been more than ten years since you graduated from high school, and you can still remember so much high school knowledge? ! The second is the attitude at the beginning of the time travel. I don't want to type anymore. These two points are the most important.

Dear brothers, this is my humble work, please appreciate it. I don't know that the heroine I painted looks like.

Not in charge, all booked. Stand as evidence

Use this,

Black hey hey

What's going on? Just save it and then lose it?

The author adds some details 🥺🥺🥺

The basic skills of this book are still acceptable, and the writing, plot, and twists are all on the pass level. But the details, aura, and characteristics that determine whether you will be forgotten or become a god are really lacking, and old bookworms will find it boring. If the author wants to make a living as an online writer, he still needs to work harder, which is not possible now.

What's wrong with the new book? I've been keeping it and it's suddenly gone.

Give me a boost and add 4 for your recommendation vote

Can anyone tell me if this book is about a harem or a single heroine?

I gave my only recommendation and two monthly passes. The author hopes to update more

What is this sudden direction? ?

Do you still need to update it? It's gone. It's gone. It's gone...