The Dragon Clan: Drawing the Sword to Pull the Falling Cherry Blossoms

I really like this book, I hope it won't be discontinued

... The writing is good, but there is a problem. You always want to pursue the flavor of Jiangnan, and you ignore some things. The story is too poor. I suggest you read the book "No Money for College". Your writing style is indeed good, but you can't write like this all the time. These things are enough as the finishing touch. Writing like this all the time is firstly inefficient and secondly less updated. Come on

I'm speechless. The first few chapters were quite good, but I started to feel something was wrong in the middle. After reading more than 60 chapters, I thought I was reading a basketball article on the sports channel. Most of the chapter is basketball🏀, basketball, basketball, why should I write a Dragon Clan fan who likes basketball so much? This book might as well be called "I Play Basketball in the Dragon Clan"

To be honest, I can write about basketball, but can I not write as much as I want in one go? Not everyone likes basketball. For people who have no interest in basketball in the first place, it is difficult for people to continue reading. I gave up. I really can't stand it anymore, but I still hope that the author will write better and better.

Can this basketball fanfic stop inserting the Dragon Clan? Can you write a good article and write random plots about the Dragon Clan? I want to watch basketball! ! !

I crawled, let's just fight Deadpool. The basketball part really embarrassed me 🤔. After reading the first few chapters, I thought why no one would read such a good book. It turns out that there is a big hole waiting for me.

I've read Chapter 52, but I don't want to read anymore, I'm too tired. The writing is too pretentious and a bit bloody. It's obviously an urgent moment, but it's stuffed with a bunch of tear-jerking stuff. That's what idol dramas do, and it's a clumsy plot. I feel like the author is now indulging in his own description, enjoying himself and moving himself at the same time. The author has some writing skills but is immature. The writing style is a bit deliberate and a bit pretentious. It may be because, as others have said, the author is imitating an old thief, and then the tiger becomes the anti-dog. Personal reflections, just talking, just to start a fight.

There is only one request: stop writing about luxury brands in English. If you can do it, let's decide. Both Motorola and Amazon must be written in English. Why do fan fiction writers make this mistake? Guo Xiaosi's penmanship is enough to see. Not only are there no brands that are too confusing, but it also affects the perception.

Come on, come on 😡

The supporting character's reminiscences about basketball are too self-indulgent. A small accessory has so much ink, and a battle can have many twists and turns, but don't add so many memories that have nothing to do with the battle. It tries hard to find the flavor of Jiangnan, but it seems too contrived. Moreover, Jiangnan's writing style is sometimes disgustingly pretentious, so there is no need to learn it all. Others are okay, I really like those who complain about bad things.

If you're wrong, correct it and we readers won't laugh at you. Chu Zihang's fucking name is Su Xiaoyan, please change it!

If Eriyi is brought to life, Jiangnan is a pirated version.

None of the Dragon Clan fanfics are well written, so if you don't agree, come and argue!

How can I put it this way? Your book is really not suitable for the public. It all seems to be nonsense and has no content at all. It is no longer the novel it was before. It is like watching a short video and not particularly liking a movie. You basically just watch the two or three minutes of clips instead of spending several hours watching a movie

The heroine suddenly settled on Liu Miaomiao. People from completely different worlds would only be as tragic as Chu Tianjiao. Of course, with the pen in your hand, you can give him a halo. But Liu Miaomiao really doesn't need to be the heroine. I just saw her die and I still wanted to laugh for no reason, even though she will definitely be resurrected later 😅 Before, I was completely indifferent to Liu Miaomiao. After these two chapters, I suddenly fell in love with her. It's so embarrassing 😒 I shouldn't have read these chapters.

I couldn't understand it after the episode "Stars Extinguished" started. Zhuang Zhou: It was like a fucking dream.

It's too dull. It's not a problem to choose between 10 and 20 chapters while reading. The plot is still manageable.

To be honest, I can write it, but there is a big question, is this a basketball article? Why is there so much space about basketball, and inserting basketballs in the battle scenes is so dramatic. If you really like basketball, you can write a basketball article... It's not difficult, and it doesn't have to be a dragon holster.

There is too much emphasis on showing off one's saints in front of people. For example, during the spiritual enlightenment section at school, there is an unspoken rule in the dragon world, which is to try not to expose the things in the other world to the public. Both the forces on the surface and the forces behind the scenes abide by this unspoken rule. There are also specialists from the Enforcement Department who will deal with those messy hybrids. The protagonist is still very weak, and he can't just mess around without exposing a lot of his secrets.

Author, I think you have a serious illness, so you might as well just write an autobiography, or a Dragon Clan extra.

It really sucks😅

The stupid fruit on the stupid tree, you and me under the stupid tree This book is well written by the author There are two or three chapters in the middle about basketball that you can jump directly and compare with the drama The writing is all online The ending is a bit abrupt, and the emotional line is also very abrupt Looking at the main line of this book, there are only two climaxes, one Odin and one sixteenth generation brother It is worth reading, but I suggest that the Dragon Clan reopen the line.

The best dragon fanfic I've ever read, and it ended in a mess?

It's very good. Come on, author. Stop using the knife. I can't bear it.

Come onｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

I'm really speechless when writing about basketball. After all, it's a niche culture, not even a niche. There are more than 500 people in our school who can't even make up half a team.

Are you also from the Shimada family?

Ah, I can't do it anymore, it's too difficult

The portrayal of the protagonist was a complete failure. I feel that there is no such saintly person.