Journey to the West: at the Beginning, I Mistakenly Identified the Jade Emperor as My Nephew.

The first ten chapters are very good, but in chapter 18 I start to imitate Cao. In his previous life, he must have been a male who escaped from the pig factory.

The author is still new, and I feel that the advantages and disadvantages are obvious. The writing style has the flavor of storytelling and is quite humorous, but I feel that this style is not very popular at the beginning. You may consider not dividing it into half-sentences and half-sentences. The Sleeping Wife is a bit toxic, and the characters are very casually created. All the characters are just tools used by the protagonist to show off. One moment the protagonist wants to go against the will, and the other moment he says that he just needs to keep Taoism. Why modern time travelers understand Taoism so deeply is not clearly explained, and the writing skills need to be strengthened.

I insisted on reading the first five chapters, but I still couldn't stand it anymore. Even if the protagonist knew nothing about the preciousness of the things given by the system, nor the identity of the Jade Emperor, he couldn't help shouting at his nephew who came to seek refuge with him, and punching and kicking his nephew in front of the guests. It was too much. It stands to reason that the protagonist is also a monk after time travel, but his behavior is like a gangster who is eager to communicate, which is both perfunctory and vulgar. Does the author think he is humorous when he writes this?

It is not recommended to test poison if you have low poison resistance.

Is it fun to swear all the time?

What did you write? It's fine in the front, but then there are a lot of magic changes in the back, especially the monkey transformation. Once you change, you can't change back without spiritual power. What do you think it is? The art of changing emotion and reason requires spiritual support, and I cannot understand your brain circuits and logical thinking.

First of all, the protagonist is too ignorant, and secondly, the intelligence is too powerful. Haotian reacts so much every time and he still doesn't know anything. Then there is the shaping. The character shaping is too casual. Think of Haotian and Daluo Jinxian. They are pretentious, that is, aloof. If you casually recognize your nephew as a master, you will definitely die. What do powerful people care about in the ancient times? Face! If he beats you to death, your Taoist robes and other things will eventually belong to him, right?

Is it true that the author uses a lot of swear words in his books 🙂 Is it the same in life, or is he letting himself go in the novel 🤓

This book is written to amuse fools, and the system still has a short temper.

All I want to say is that the tauren should die soon.

The writing style of your chapter titles and content is simply amazing. The comparison is too different.

How come I didn't write it wrong and identified the Jade Emperor as my grandson?

Sophisticated, the novel I bought 10 years ago probably had this idea and plot, a combination of meat and vegetables, and the evaluation was You can read it when you pick it up, but forget it when you put it down, It is recommended to read more new books, grasp the trend, and follow the trend is also a good choice. It is too easy to encounter the poisonous points according to the previous thinking. Readers are picky Or translating abroad is also a good choice,

I read Chapter 20 and found out that the protagonist is Cao Thief?

Chapter 20: I was eagerly fed by the author and was persuaded to quit.

The author's mentality gives you the feeling of being invincible,

Don't look at it unless the shield is full! !

The writing is so messy, it upsets people who read it, and gave up 886

The editor Zi Liang is a good guy, and I am willing to try my best to be a good author

Is the heroine a Jade Rabbit? The world is full of wonders and wonders. In the past, there was Ning Caichen and Xu Xian. Later, Emperor Beifeng came out of nowhere. Now there is another one. I really admire him 🙏👍 and must see it.

The first part was okay, but the part where I turned into a monkey was really unbearable.

Looking at the introduction, it looks like the Tongtian book

Are you kidding me about being the Lord of the Three Realms and the Jade Emperor with quasi-sage cultivation?

Hey, a pig gives birth to 100 sons, how many will survive in the end?

It's okay in the beginning, but after Chapter 13, I get a lot of curses. I don't know what the author is thinking...

And can shrimps, soldiers and crabs achieve the level of cultivation in the Mahayana stage? If you can cultivate to the Mahayana stage (half-immortal), you must have a backing. Maybe one of the ancestors is an official in the sky and is a popular person under a certain powerful person. Even if you are not a famous person, you will not make enemies everywhere. Moreover, the next stage of the Mahayana period is to overcome the tribulation and become an immortal. There are few top-notch beings in the world. He's not considered a nobody anymore. He's qualified to visit the Dragon King, right? For the Dragon King, he can be considered a good friend. As long as the other party is not an enemy, it is okay to meet him. It is not a loss to the Dragon King if the opponent is developed, and it is not a loss to the Dragon King if the opponent fails to overcome the tribulation.

The Ming matchmaker was getting married, he sharpened his sword for six years, wrote a book to amuse his mother, lightning struck the sky, the clouds were white and the mountains were green, he went up the mountain to hit a tiger on the forehead, he wrote a book about ancient and modern eunuch writers. List of Professional Eunuch Writers

This author's writing style is not very good. I don't recommend you to continue reading.

The rabbit is so cute, I have to pay for the enoki mushrooms

Come on, I've already invested. I hope I'm not a noob writing about hegemony.