Global Pet Evolution

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First of all, I would like to thank the big guys who voted and invested, and then I would like to say sorry that this novel is a failure. As of now, I feel that there are still big problems in writing, and I still need to improve. I did some digging myself and summarized some problems: The first one is that the plot is not story-driven enough and there are too few conflicts. The second one is that it really does not reflect the content of the book's title. It should be an upgrade and hegemony style among pet beasts. The third is that the advancement of the plot is too rigid, the fourth is that the vocabulary still needs to be improved, and the description of the environment is a flaw, the fifth is that the main line is a bit unclear, and the sixth is that the portrayal of the protagonist feels a little lacking. There are other problems that I haven't discovered yet. If anyone who has discovered them can come here and scold me 😭 Get ready to sort it out and open a new book 😢

After reading the first one or two chapters, I feel pretty good, but since you have arrived in a new world, you don't have to keep emphasizing martial arts. It's about beast control or beast control. You can practice martial arts every day as a way to strengthen your body. There is no need to talk about martial arts all the time. In the world of beast control, it is too different and does not fit the name of this book!

It's very well written. Come on, don't be fooled.