Douluo God of Justice

It's boring. The protagonist needs to be aloof and aloof. And he has to have a relationship with a woman for no reason. How could the gods in the previous life not understand the cause and effect of disturbing people? Mother-in-law, mother-in-law, naughty. Where did Dou Yi come from? I also recommend watching it in the early stage, decisively. I lost interest after Chapter 20

The current Douluo novels can't say that, no matter which version of Yang Jian is on the Douluo Continent, he is countless levels higher than Douluo Continent, and he inherits the divine throne at every turn. Compared with the weapons of the five great god kings in the God Realm, Yang Jian's three-pronged two-edged knife is not even worthy of carrying shoes. There is also Yang Jian's third eye, which is not natural. It was split by a catastrophe. And use eighty-nine mystical skills in Douluo Continent. A single turn of Xuan Gong can kill Douluo.

Yang Jian in my mind

I still can't feel calm. A lot of comments these days are about all kinds of poisonous points. What I want to say is that if you take a closer look, I think most of what you said is correct. Of course, I think it is. After all, everyone sees the problem differently. I really put my heart into this book. I update it three times a day. There are a few new authors who can do it. How should I put it? Read more. It's only a hundred thousand words and it's still early. This period is also a kind of improvement for me. I will strive to make it better and better in the future, at least I will not disappoint the book friends who support me. Thank you again to all the readers who support me. Also, if you think it's not good, or there's something toxic about it, can you please tell me. As a new author, my endurance is still very weak. If I really feel that the writing is terrible, then I have no choice but to say goodbye. But can you please not make me feel bad before you leave? ! !

It's just that she was too kind to San Sheng Sheng and her family in her previous life... San Sheng Sheng said that she was flattered by her love mind, and there was something wrong with her outlook on life.

I think the author's subject matter is very hurtful. In the original work, Yang Jian is a tragic character who is unparalleled in the world. Don't try it easily if you don't have the writing skills. The dog-tailed Diao is ugly, but it attracts hatred. All the novels about Yang Jian that I have seen use him as a supporting role, and he is still the kind of shocking one. Now, there are supporting characters with powerful charisma that arouse the admiration of the protagonist (except Shui Changdong is the protagonist, just understand the meaning) Go to Douluo Continent, academic style, known as the Douluo that breaks the void of one hundred thousand kilograms, can this indigenous god withstand the sight of the true king (not the eye of the sky), is it worthy of Douluo? The water here is very deep, can the author grasp it...

If you can't write anything well, you have to write about Yang Jian, the Erlang Shen. ? It's better to go to this low-level plane to reduce the dimensionality. No matter what you write, you are destined to be criticized🤫🤫

I don't like Xiao Wu! What's the point of the 100,000-year-old rogue rabbit! I don't know how much I have gone through during the estrus period!

Don't abuse Yang Jian! No matter what you say, Yang Jian is doing well, and the monkey is the one who suffers.

Not to mention Yang Jian, Roaring Sky Dog can conquer the Douluo God Realm alone.

It was okay at first, but in the middle, I went to Shrek, and then the main body sect appeared again. The main body sect had no Douluo at all, and even brought Ning Rongrong, who was a mess

I can only say that Yang Jian and his sister are ungrateful

Nowadays, Douluo time travel stories are about finding some awesome weapons and using them as martial arts spirits, or various awesome characters traveling through time, and then these weapons and characters are whittled down again and again. Most readers will feel uncomfortable if they are whittled down again and again.

I saw that the introduction said that the author came in after reading "Life is Long and Hateful". But from the 50+ chapters I read (some of which I can't stand anymore), the author has not read that book. Or maybe they only know the title of the book, after all, it is said to be the first book written by Xie Yuwen at the starting point. In that book, Chen Xiang split the mountain to save his mother. Yang Jian's serious injury was not the end, or even just the beginning. What followed was the beginning of depression. In the end, Yang Jian sacrificed to save Chen Xiang and the others. Chen Xiang and the others saw everything Yang Jian had done for him in the mirror. Finally, Chen Xiang became the new Emperor of Heaven. So if I really wrote it after reading that book, then the beginning of this book should be when Yang Jian's soul was slowly shattering on the altar and the remnant soul traveled through time, and the Roaring Sky Dog was not there, so they could not travel together. . Personally, I understand that if you don't like it, don't spray it.

It was originally very good, but what kind of woman did you write about Ning Rongrong and what kind of woman did you want? It's really poisonous

This version of Yang Jian is the worst. In order to use the Sky Eye on his sister, which caused his mother's accident, the whole family blamed him, and then he was tricked by his family all the time.

Goodbye brothers and sisters, six years old, level 26, twelve years old, level 30, raised 4 levels in six years, with 20 levels of innate soul power, reduced to the same level as Tang San. I don't want to see how easy it is to see later. This Erlang Shen came from the plane in the ultra-low-level iron barrel. I am afraid that the realm of Journey to the West is the highest quasi-sage. The highest level of Erlang God here is probably a golden elixir, not even an immortal, pull the crotch. Insulting, Sayunara, what I wrote before was so good that I wanted to vote for it. But now I'm here, forget it, I'm not worthy.

To be honest, it looks a bit awkward. Yang Jian almost never smiled in the original text. The mood here fluctuates greatly, but according to the introduction, it is indeed an alternative continuation.

The heroine Zhu Zhuqing has a good personality and a good figure. Dai Mubai is trash and not worthy of her. I support grabbing Zhu Zhuqing.

The protagonist's weakening is a bit serious. After all, I really can't control Erlangshen's setting. The setting is too weak to be suitable, and it's too strong to continue writing. Everything else is fine,

Who is Yang Jian? There is no doubt that the God of War in heaven is super strong. With this strength, you let him cultivate the martial spirit? Even if he dies, as long as his soul remains alive, even if his past strength is even less than ten percent, it cannot be suppressed by the rules of a low-end plane like Douluo. So why should he awaken his martial soul and practice according to Douluo's rules? Just rebuild the skills from the previous life. Even if the spiritual energy is scarce, as long as the foundation is successfully established and the golden elixir avenue is achieved, defeating this Douluo plane with ancient fighting methods is not a piece of cake. Why should you lower yourself to follow the Douluo rules and waste time cultivating that broken martial spirit?

Do you think Yang Jian will be so weak when he is born? According to the combat power system, when Yang Jian was ten years old, he could fight with the gods of Douluo World, or was it the kind of crushing kind?

Those who say that Yang Jian is very strong don't have to worry about it. I remember that Sanshui created a great god circle in the God Realm. The main gods of several god systems are the protagonists of Sanshui's previous novels. One of them is the Eastern Immortal World system, which includes Sun Wukong and Yang Jian. Therefore, the Heavenly Emperor of Heaven is only at the level of the great god circle. So how tall can you expect Yang Jian to be?

The big world of Douluo World can be compared with the prehistoric times 🙂

You can borrow the settings of "True Lord Douluo Appears as Saint" and "Support Qian Renxue to plunder the heavens". The protagonist of True King Appearance is not a big shot like Yang Jian, but Yang Jian's son, so that Yang Jian will not appear too weak. The two books, True Lord Appearance and Supporting Qian Renxue, do not have too many bbs in the Douluo world. The former goes directly to the Douluo original world, and the latter goes directly to the heavens. You have added too much to Douluo Yi's world in this book, and the Noumenon Sect will look very unpleasant.

I was really fooled by your Noumenon Sect. I thought I had traveled through time. Accepted

Don't even look at who Yang Jian is? Forcefully join the Spirit Hall? Still apprentice? Aren't you afraid that the big boss of Xuanmen will wipe out Douluo?

The more down-to-earth Douluo Chuanyun is, the better

This shouldn't be about teacher Luo Xiang talking about the outlaw Zhang San

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