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Why is it that after reading several books, the main character has an unconventional style? Is this popular now?

I suggest deleting the first four chapters. I recommend it in various ways. I have seen this book in the book list more than a dozen times. Every time I read the first chapter, I feel so awkward that I stopped reading it.

The author probably feels that the introduction he wrote is full of character 😒

How nice it would be to give Qin Shihuang the imperial armor instead 🙂

This introduction... Fuck

The first half of the introduction is very cool, but the second half is very cool.

Build a group building, and everyone can talk about whatever characters they want to see! This book will not be finished, it will continue to be written, maybe three years, maybe four years, maybe a long, long time. The author just wants to build a world that I like and love!

After reading a little bit, the protagonist is imbecile, it's over

I skipped the first four chapters, and then fell down when I entered Brother Zhun for the first time. Before I even fought, he said that Ultraman can destroy stars! ! You destroy Gil and throw all the Ultramen into the sun, not even a hair is left. What a fairy tale! !

It looks okay now. I hope there won't be a female protagonist.

At first, I thought Dagu was a Shining Tiga type who came to help, but in the end, a Dagu who didn't graduate went to Brother Zhun's final set, wasn't he looking for death? At this time, shouldn't Dagu be confused and think about why he is a giant? The little alien beasts on Brother Zhun's set seem to be all the same. The ultimate boss on other sets seems to have an immortal setting. It's an exaggeration for an ungraduated Tiga to defeat one.

Now that I see this kind of introduction, I have no idea of ​​​​reading it. Maybe I am tired of this type 😊, there have been many main lines like "Fan Tian, ​​Destroy the Sky, and Questioning the Sky" in the past.

I came quietly and left quietly. I estimate that the first few chapters will dissuade many people.

The only flaw of this book is fellow Chen Dong. Chen Dong's books don't take the rules of the world into consideration. You are inappropriate for putting the supreme rules first. The force value of the other side of deep space will not be weaker than that of the Zhetian trilogy. Look at the last Shi Hao, Ye Fan, Chu Feng, how long it took to restore the people and homes that were destroyed, and where is the face of the rules of time, destiny, and life? They can see through the essence of a person at a glance without using any skills. The force value is inconsistent with what you wrote. It is recommended not to write fanfics about him.

Why am I so confused when I read it, I don't even know what it is writing? I can't stand the first three pictures.

Read a few chapters. . . How should I put it? The biggest problem with this book is the narrative method, which felt very stiff to me. It's like reading prose

Don't read the first 2 chapters, I'll be confused after reading them. Start reading the 3rd chapter.

I saw a lonely@. . . . .

The writing is too high-end. As a kindergarten graduate, I am really not good enough. I need at least the first grade of elementary school to understand it.

What's the fuss about? I'm Shennong, wait for me when I come back.

What world does Zhang Ziliang belong to? It feels so depressing looking at it

There are many typos, and even after I clicked them, I didn't see the author correct them, which affects the reading experience.

It looks very good, but it says the update was two days ago. What the hell is that? I just added it to the bookshelf and jumped on it.

It doesn't look good, it's boring, and the copy ended as soon as it started.

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?