Wandering Around the World Starting from Liaozhai

How can it be original? I can't even copy it from the original work.

The author is begging online! 😢

The black-skinned protagonist in the first chapter persuaded me to quit because of his strength. I was not interested in reading it. The author should do his best.

It is said that martial arts is not as good as immortality. Cultivation of immortality is Tao. Isn't practicing martial arts not Tao? Just like many people now say that Chinese martial arts are fake, why don't people in the world say that karate and Japanese swordsmanship are fake? You must know that karate and Japanese swordsmanship also evolved from Tang Shou and Tang swordsmanship. There is no right or wrong in Tao. People have different levels. If you are not good at it, don't say that you are not good at martial arts.

Mainly looking at immortality. The shock brought by immortality at that time was far inferior to other novels.

After reading a few chapters, there are three poisonous points. 1. The protagonist's face is black, literally, like a black man. 2. Traveling through The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, I met a man who said he was better than my master. Just by looking at the title of the book, you can tell that a Chinese ghost story in the main world cannot defeat martial arts in cultivating immortals. There are only a few great masters in the original book. Other great masters and Wu Poxukong can't sense you? No change in dynasties? You can just magically modify tens of thousands of Shattered Voids and cultivate them in secret. 3. The Legend of Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty has a sect that is not found in the original novel, and it has the skill of cultivating immortals. The author, please just say that he got the God of War catalogue. It's not that you can't stand the magic reform, but it's completely illogical for you to suddenly appear a sect that is better than cultivating immortals and has immortal cultivation techniques. Poison, poison, poison! ! !

If you write about martial arts, just write about martial arts. If you want to cultivate immortality, just cultivate immortality. Don't get mixed up and look at me.

Every time this author fights, the protagonist has to beat himself to death before he wins. I'm speechless. He burns his essence and blood at every turn without taking time to recover. When he encounters an enemy similar to himself, he burns his essence and blood. After taking it,

The author has never read Huang Yi's novels. His novels are all connected, The Legend of Bianhuang - The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty - The Sun and the Moon in the Sky - The Broken Void - The Rain and the Clouds. The magic transformation has gone too far, and there are remains of Guangchengzi in the Temple of War in the Broken Void. Shatter the King Kong and fight back against the sky. Do you need to read the original novel when writing fan fiction now?

If the author wants to express that the protagonist's personality is like Ye Hei, that's it. What does the author want to express by directly assigning dark skin? The race of the people has changed. Why don't you just change your name to an African and go all over the world?

It is best to write about two or three complementary or connected worlds in this kind of astronomy. Otherwise, if you have Guo Jing and Yang Guo who are the strongest in this world, you will be powerful in martial arts and immortal martial arts in the next world. A lifetime of training in one world will not be as strong as the next world in a few months, which is meaningless. Another example is the world of A Chinese Ghost Story and the world of Fighting Spirits Transformed into Horses. They are completely unrelated. There are too many worlds written about and they are too confusing. Most people will only read the ones they are familiar with and like. The world of Zhutianwenxuan is very important.

At the beginning, the protagonist changes race and becomes black.

When I went to the Tang Dynasty, I helped Yang Guang, and when I went to the Qin Dynasty, I helped Ying Zheng... Is there political correctness in this online novel? 🤔 The key is that the routine is the same, it is really impossible to read 😒

Good guy, originally the story about Dark Wind was pretty good at the beginning, but then the more I wrote about it, the more I read it, the more my mother's heart became, and I became a human nanny, that's all, I stopped reading.

The following chapters are all repetitive. I'm wasting my money. Damn it.

You will kill the sky at every turn. The way of heaven has offended you. You must fight against it. It will be extremely painful.

If you want to live forever, it would be easy to slay the dragon in the storm.

Mortals have changed too much. There are hundreds of races in the spiritual world, and the two races of humans and monsters in the spiritual world are just small races.

After investing in this book, you can go and invest in it, and it's time to make a profit!

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Good guy, I traveled through several martial arts worlds to a place like mortals and went directly to the spirit world. Looking at the catalog, I was able to kill Ma Yuan who wanted to sacrifice his blood to the spirit world? Can I practice the ancient demon world again? Your main world and those two martial arts worlds are really awesome! In this case, what's the point of writing about mortals? In fact, if you can't control it, it's best not to write about mortals. Basically, no one who writes about mortals will be happy without losing their combat power 😅

Are there any duplicate chapters if I subscribe on September 21st? ? ? ?

How many days do you walk through time and space every day?

Author, please tell me, how many days have these five people been gone?

Why is it that only the first bit is a new chapter and then it is repeated all the time?

This is repeated after two chapters.

I subscribed later, and after more than ten days, it was still repeated. If you don't rush, who will? I said I had enough, and I started reading it, and the result was so disgusting to me.

It's not without reason.

The main character in this book has a double standard. He breaks into other people's territory at night, steals things that others don't give to him, gets beaten and injured by a group of people in battle, and calls others hypocrites when he fails to show off, saying this is wrong and that is wrong.