Alien Card Drawing and Demon Hunting

Oh my god, the protagonist met a girl in the early stages of growing up. He knew her for two days and thought it would be easy to be with her. The girl wanted to go with him. The protagonist thought that it was not possible in the early stage, so he made a 2-year appointment. You will be single after 2 years. I will definitely live up to you, protagonist. When I go out and see someone The army wanted to attack the girl tribe, and immediately went up to deal with the enemies. Later, I didn't know whether to deal with the army's backstage as well. Suddenly, it was love at first sight, and they made a two-year agreement to go out and deal with the girl enemies. This routine really doesn't work anymore.

Is it cold? ? ? Am I the only one watching?

Half of the posts are ads. So miserable😥

Miserable Author Miserable ξ ( ✿＞◡❛) Did the author poke some kind of MLM trap?ヽ(°▽°)ノ

Those who write this kind of articles are either very weak in the early stage and are all weak cards, or they are given a high-end card with infinite limits. Only by staying away from routines can you be close to success. Now not many people like to see you being abused in the early stage. Unless you are a great god and have a fan base, otherwise you will not be able to retain readers in the early stage. If you do not do well, you are a love eunuch.

.... Why do I feel that the protagonist all the unexpected incidents are all caused by himself? ? ? Also, if the witcher knights all have the same character as the protagonist No wonder they don't die.

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There is nothing bad about the writing. The only time I was stupid was because I was influenced by the enemy mage. But at the same time, it was nothing interesting. It was like a pool of stagnant water. I saw it was boring. It would be good for the author to pay more attention to it, but it was too boring for me to withdraw.

In the first ten chapters, there will definitely be a life-or-death crisis in the pig's trotters. I'm basically not interested now.

I saw Chapter 24, what is your level? There's no description of strength or anything like that? You can't write anything about the level. You can only see that the protagonist has cards of various levels, and there is no description of how strong they are. People watching are confused. You can watch the plot and everything, but you, who have no level, are confused when you see the battle.

Advantages: smooth writing, no poisonous points Disadvantages: no refreshing points

After reading these chapters, the impression is still good. It is not as vulgar as the current Internet articles. It is quite satisfactory. If it can be polished, it will be a good book.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

The layout is too big, it depends on the author how to shake off the burden, at least it cannot be a boring setting collection 😒

Daily introduction of poison 's

The running account is not detailed enough. This subject matter would be good if it was more detailed. The protagonist has cheats, but others don't have cheats. Consider the situation of other novices. The setting is very desperate, but there is no emotion involved. The protagonist has no goals and is empty. This is very important. After all, we are also the third knight of the order. Why do we feel so irresponsible, so shabby, so casual and reckless?

Why would Mao have to carry a burden? Why not just write in Shuangwen? ? ? The positioning is really messed up! ! !

What a strange author. He can't write novels well, and all his thoughts are spent on opening a trumpet account.