Digital Immortality Game

Is this an old author? The writing, plot, and setting look like a newbie writing a book. The only thing that feels like the author has something is a few common sayings. Obviously the previous article said how many centimeters the protagonist's height shrunk to, but later it said how many meters the monster grew? What's the point of shrinking? Wouldn't it be better to just let the monster grow this big? As for the emotional scenes, they were written casually and sparsely. If you don't know how to write them, you don't have to write them. He said they were brothers since they were young, and they said they were still brothers after five years of not seeing each other, but suddenly they start to care after not seeing each other for a few days? What's the foreshadowing? Fun? Make up the word count? Then there is the plot advancement, with various narrations explaining what this is and what it does, cock blood, and other common sayings. It takes half a chapter. The overall plot is not coherent. It is rare to forget what the protagonist is doing after reading one chapter. It feels like the supplementary settings alone take up a third of the page.

I feel like an ant the size of a medium dog. In fact, the protagonist can be killed in a few seconds. Author, have you ever caught ants? Do you find ants particularly difficult to catch? It's very fast, isn't it? If the size of the ant is enlarged to be the same as that of a dog, and the ant is extremely strong and can lift hundreds of times its own weight, then it is conceivable that the protagonist will be torn apart in a few seconds.

By the way... Why do foxes like to eat chickens and eggs? ? ? ?

This setting feels like something I saw when I was a kid.

It's quite confusing, so why isn't it enjoyable to read?

After reading Chapter 51, I will complain again: ① You killed a wild boar and exorcised ghosts by yourself earlier, and the village chief over there had already reported it. There must be a record of you, Li Yunlong, on it. If you go and test it, good guy, you are completely an ordinary person ② You said that you want to make time to prevent others from finding out that you are strong, and then secretly become stronger. What's the point? ③The protagonist is found to have become stronger, will the country harm him? Will you force him to do anything? Will he be put in a cage, sliced ​​into pieces, or thrown into prison? ④ Can the protagonist become stronger by sneaking around? Can he be stronger than the country? What does he want to do? Are you a serious citizen and a soldier, so you don't trust your own country so much? ⑤ I keep talking about going abroad, which is nonsense. Moreover, in your previous setting, the experience of killing monsters in non-dungeons is almost zero. The previously known dungeons have covered 50-60. There are no causes and consequences for going abroad. What is the point?

The front was okay, but when I went to the countryside to exorcise ghosts, I felt something was wrong. When the city was still blocking news, Mr. Yin and Yang was generally able to deal with ghosts. If something goes wrong in the village, wouldn't it be normal to call the police?

Wait, the fox can actually become three meters tall. Wouldn't it be great to stroke its super big tail?

It's not my fault. One thing I want to ask the author is, since the system comes from such a distant universe, why is it that the training system for the protagonist is a Chinese profession and there are no more advanced universe system professions? This is really a failure. Since the system is written about a system that comes from the universe, wouldn't it be better to just let go and write about it? I feel like there is something wrong here, and of course it may be my own problem.

It's such a long chapter, I couldn't bear to separate it, but I couldn't bear to buy it if it's so long 😏

To be honest, I read a book of the same type 10 years ago and I have forgotten the title.

Ha~ Isn't this the online novel "Data Game" written n years ago? Is this a remake?

5 Points at level one, 500 points at level 100, and 150 points for an initial awakener. If you reach level 200, he is also garbage.

It's obviously a Taoist priest in the God of Killing System! No wonder the statistics are mediocre. Warriors only feel good when they punch to the flesh.

It's very tiring to read, it's a good subject matter, but the dungeons take up too many chapters, 70 of the 90 chapters are dungeons. Although I'm trying to grab time to improve my strength, I'm just tired of reading it.

Suddenly many masters appeared. It didn't feel like they had just recovered, but as if they had recovered for hundreds of years.

Strength, agility, physique, good physique, whether the strength is strong, whether the speed is fast, strong strength, high load capacity, can carry heavier things, is agility also a manifestation of strength, strong strength can jump high, run fast, such as parkour, such as running, the feet quickly push the ground to give the body a reaction force, so how to link the physical agility is a question, after all, this is a reflection of reality, not a game or novel, and in reality, the person with strong strength does not have all the muscles 💪, and has a particularly good physique. Therefore, if the force sensitivity is high, it is impossible for the physical constitution not to show up.

Why join the country. Isn't it okay to brush monsters by yourself with a golden finger?

Approval. . . . . If others practice 007 every day and you kill ants and cockroaches, they will level up. Drag them out and beat them to death. Jealousy has changed me beyond recognition.

After reading the last few pictures of the limited edition, I feel like the author is going to finish writing it.

Why is the idiom "smile" so popular recently? Writers don't distinguish who this idiom is used for. This is used on women. For example, the sentence "rolling a look" was originally an action verb to describe a woman acting coquettishly, but now it has become a common word in online novels regardless of gender.

I have a book, and I just saw someone tweet a chapter, and then it came over, and then it was finished? ? ?

If I don't write about a good real-life online game, I'll have to do some Taoist priest catching ghosts, I can't stand it

Suddenly I feel that this system is very scary. The protagonist buys/sells something in the system mall once, which reduces the upper limit of the spiritual power of the universe. How scary, nine times out and thirteen times back!

Can't we upgrade to level 100 first? How long has the protagonist been delayed now? If he had this time to concentrate on upgrading, he would have been level 80/90 already. Moreover, the protagonist has a copy, so it's not like the conditions don't allow it!

If there is a spiritual revival, insects and mice will definitely be the most terrifying. The protagonist is a bit,,,,

To be honest, it is best for this system to cooperate between shopping malls and the country, and the protagonist is a soldier.

I originally thought that the author was going to open a double chapter, but when I saw the latest chapter, I realized that you were going to have an ending! The origin of the system has been explained, and the realm is almost holy. When are you going to finish the book? Next week? How are you preparing your new book? Let's write about the heavens. At least you can skip to some worlds you don't like!

Hello fellow, here are the monthly tickets + recommended votes. It is not easy to read the books of the fellows for the first time in so many years at Qidian Reading... The reasons for the fellows can be traced back to the source 😃: 1. Yudong County, 400 kilometers away from Yuzhou City; 2 , Nanmenchang to Xiaobei Street 😏; 3. Daxi Township: It should be on the other side of Shidi, about 60 kilometers away from the county seat. Line 319: It should be the line from Youyang to Hong'an. The old road should be in Hong'an, 40 kilometers away from the county seat. 4. Di Guniu, this name is consistent with ours. I can't tell which town the author's hometown is, but it's definitely not our town. Above, right?

You don't learn martial arts, you play Taoist priests, and you play with spells. Please write slowly and say goodbye.