People in Fuyuki: Sign in at the Beginning: Flowing Water Breaking Rock Fist

I don't quite understand why some authors always like to make the protagonist poor at the beginning? This is a supernatural world, not a daily entertainment story. The protagonist is positioned from the beginning to become stronger, not to make money. It does not mean that the protagonist must be a billionaire or a well-off family. Logically speaking, it is indeed very easy to make money when the protagonist has supernatural powers, but there is no need to write this kind of story. How does the protagonist survive with only more than a thousand yen? That amount of money can buy at most two cheap lunch boxes, which is simply outrageous.

The basis for writing a comprehensive comic world view is to make choices. It is not a mess, adding everything in, and adding everything at will will only collapse. It needs a work whose world view can be integrated, that is, in the same world without the protagonist, the plot will still develop according to the original plot, and works that do not affect the development of the main line can be integrated. This is the prerequisite to ensure that the author does not collapse, because in this way the author can better grasp the direction of the plot.

It's so messy, Xingyue, unknown drama, Ghost Academy, One Punch Man

Saints actually mix with these worlds. This world is really miserable.

Don't join the Holy Grail War. Maybe that's what's shown in the animation. ๛ก(ｰ̀ωｰ́ก) That can roll out at a similar level is terrifying beyond your imagination. This is a comprehensive dark world that is also rated. The martial arts master level must be above the mercenary level, and the magical magician must be above the martial arts master level. Not to mention the higher ones. Veterans who can survive similar assassinations have different levels of terror in different professions.

The Moon Demon Forbidden One-Punch Saint is a combination of a lot of things. It's a miracle that no one has come to tear it apart as of now.

There are a lot of typos, but you can still read it, but the author feels that it is true... I am a military blind person. Is it okay to hand the gun to others with the safety off? Are you not afraid that others will beat you to death with their golden fingers?

Why does Himura Kenshin use the reverse blade pill? Because in the anime he is called Executioner Battosai! The master of Iiheliu. Killing is already instinctive when holding a sword, and his swordsmanship is unparalleled in the world. The Backblade is just a form of atonement for his sins. Who said a gun without a tip can't kill someone?

Just by looking at the introduction, I knew I was going to hit the street...😂😂😂

Author, look at your introduction. If this book doesn't hit the streets, I will live broadcast eating sex.

If you can't even avoid assassination by mortals in the future, let alone the Holy Grail War. The assassination I'm talking about is the clown-level kind.

Before signing the contract, I wrote one chapter a day. After signing the contract, I updated it twice a day, once at 12 noon and once at 8 pm. In order to gain some exposure, thank you all.

Others don't know, but I feel very comfortable watching it.

Also, this system doesn't give skill memory, I'd like to know. Why can you use the steps you just got right away? ! ! !

I wrote it several times while grabbing a bento... It's completely meaningless. You just sign it and leave... You still have a mission in the Holy Grail War. Why waste so much time on a half-price bento... Familiarize yourself with the environment and think about the next step, sort out how much of the world you know, what events may happen, how can you make a profit, is it better than sitting here and watching others grab the bento?

This kind of world fusion can only be described in one word, chaos. Good writing is okay, but poor writing can turn into **** if you can't control it.

Is there no change here? Stein does not appear in the front 😅

It looks okay and interesting, but it's a bit messy. It feels like I'm writing a short story in segments. It's obviously a fusion world, but when writing other stories, some other characters will be hidden. However, this is also the difficulty of writing a fusion world in a comprehensive comic. You can try it. Try to use some emphasis on the story to cover up the phenomenon of some characters disappearing. And when writing this kind of novel, it is most taboo to think about which paragraph to write. This will affect the continuity of reading; But the novel is still very good, I hope it will get better and better

Hey, I like the subject matter, but I don't recognize ten or nine of your anime characters.

Hurry up and update it, it looks so good