Hong Kong Island Survival Diary

The logic is not rigorous enough (1) After learning the first dungeon for less than a few months, I became very familiar with supernatural beings when I came back, without considering whether there are differences in the world. (2) The writing is too dry, and the important battle of tactics is brushed aside in one stroke.

What kind of rubbish did you write? I started writing about relationships with other women. I behaved like Duo Wenqing. Suddenly after a one-night stand, I felt like a different person. What kind of nonsense did I write?

I hope the protagonist of this book will not make the same mistakes as in ghost movies. For example, if you know that some characters are cheating on you but don't take precautions, you will be stabbed in the back in the end.

It would be better if you could make notes about the movie characters involved.

Today's novels basically follow the same routine. In the early stage, they strive to maintain the character of a saint. If a beautiful woman is brought to bed, they will not go to bed, just to maintain the ambiguity. In the middle and late stages, it transforms directly, just like a bull in the countryside smelling a cow in heat. There is that kind of lottery system. No matter how you draw at ordinary times, it is useless. When you encounter difficulties, you will draw whatever you want. In ancient times, if you were from a poor family, there would be a little Y-head who would never leave you, and you would be as beautiful as a fairy when you grow up. When you start a small business, you are bound to meet noble people. They all vomited.

The character of the main character is really unattractive and I can't get rid of the strong diaosi vibe.

I have never seen this kind of author, who likes to complain so much? After reading this introduction, I have no interest in this novel at all. No wonder my grades are so bad.

After more than thirty chapters, the plot of "Drive High and Go Low" becomes less and less effective as you write it.

After reading Chapter 50, I have three personal poisoning points. 1. Entering the dungeon consumes your lifespan. The dungeon is smelly and long. The second one is twenty years? 2. Ami. 3. Help skilled women who don't want to do good things to do so!

Here she persuades her foster daughter to be a good person, and there she climbs into the widow's bed. This is such a double standard. You don't want the ones delivered to your door, you have to spend money to go whoring. You said you're afraid of delaying others, what does your system do for food? It's all about self-pleasure, okay? Author, what do you want to express? There are a lot of incomprehensible words in the novel, which made me confused!

Why must it be eliminated? ? There are so many Hong Kong movies where you can learn Taoism without having to go to extremes! !

Everyone knows the plot, but the protagonist doesn't. Isn't it embarrassing?

This introduction. Perfectly avoiding all the cool points

I have never seen a time-traveler with such a bad stocking, not even a woman? When you meet a woman, you even forget your mother's last name, right?

Either you don't write about the movie world, or you'll get trolled to death. In many books, the author writes that the protagonist enters the movie world without knowing anything about the plot, and the results are very poor 🪖

From the introduction, I expected this book to be a hit.

No useful character is given to the protagonist, but a bunch of useless characters are given to him. There is nothing interesting about it.

Those who don't like stallions can leave like me, and those who like stallions can look forward to it.

The plot is mysterious and the protagonist's character is not likeable

Well, in fact, you can't invite real gods by asking for gods, they are just ghosts...

I'm going to put it in a bad way. You are so greedy when writing a book that you want every element. I want to add everything from urban, supernatural, cultivating, harem, and infinite flow, but I don't have the ability to take care of them all. If you like urban pretentiousness and picking up girls, it's not fun enough, and the supernatural is not scary enough. In the middle stage, you can basically crush it with power. Cultivation to Immortality is like an outline and it can be upgraded after a few sentences of sleep. The unlimited flow copy is written in a tasteless way and is basically a retreat place. In the end everything is sparse. From the middle stage when the protagonist became invincible, there were fewer and fewer people, and now there are no chapter reviews, because you have forgotten the title of the book.

Good people and good deeds are fine, but not the Madonna bitch, not the Qiongyao-style Madonna, or the dog-licking Madonna.

I find that you are always confronting us readers. You don't have heroines like Li Saifeng, Ye Qianwen, etc., But you insist on making wives and talking about life with female ghosts. What are you doing? Can you be more serious?

I particularly like novels with this theme, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

......... In the beginning, it is a magic method to fight ghosts, which is looked down upon by the folk teachings (orthodox Taoist priests/monks>faculty/witchcraft>magic methods>out of horse/debut, it is probably such a chain of contempt, I don't know who despises the other in terms of footwork and debut, but I know that out of horse and debut is at the bottom of the contempt chain)

It's the first time I see a 3-opener. It's so brave.

This book is good, why are so few people reading it?

It's the system again! Can you explain it in the introduction? ! I hate system texts the most! How many books with good grades are systematic texts? !

That doll is from that movie? Which actor played it?

The resurgence of spiritual energy that started from Hong Kong TV Station next door is very well written