Big Dream

Good luck to the author, waiting for your update, it's so beautiful

The author has good literary talent👍

The writing is sharp, there are no typos, and the writing is fresh. It is a rare masterpiece that can become a god as soon as possible! Come on! Come on!

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The writing is great, the ideas are clear, and there is domineering between the lines, which shows that the skills are deep. If you break the lines and work on it again, it will be even more perfect.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​]​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: The author's writing style is great. As for the first chapter, although the storyline is a bit like the beginning of the Holy Ruins, it is not the same. The depiction of the scenery and characters is also exciting enough, so I personally think the first chapter is not much worse than Chen Laomo. But starting from the second chapter, I believe everyone is in the same confusion, but the author has already said that it is a foreshadowing for the future story to develop more exciting content. However, as a reader, I am still a little confused after reading this chapter. If possible, it is better to improve it a little, even if it reveals a little bit of meaning, it makes people a little daydreaming.              Finally, it is a little tiring to read it in sections, so some readers may not enjoy reading it. I hope it can be improved a little bit. The above is purely a personal opinion. As a reader, I am only moderately interested in this book. But as an author, I can only say that your writing is much better than mine. Come on, I'll give you a collection.

Let me reply in unison: Many book friends feel that the first and second chapters are very abrupt and difficult to understand. I can only say here that this is a suspense, prepared for the subsequent plot. You can take a guess and you will see it if you continue to follow it patiently. Many book friends have also reported that the current new books are a bit dull, but this is just the beginning. The book may be a little slow to warm up, but the subsequent plots will definitely be more exciting. I hope everyone can read it to the end. No matter what, this book will be written at least 800,000 words. This is just a current goal. I will continue to conceive it later and it will be wonderful.

Come on, the author will try his best to sign the contract as soon as possible.

Articles that like this kind of rhythm are my cup of tea. Kudos to the author!

The first chapter is a bit redundant. The pace of online articles should be fast. If you read it with inexplicable foreshadowing, it will be very discouraging What is the name of the protagonist, what is his family background, what problems did he encounter, how did he solve it, what did he get, and if what he got affects the protagonist, the story Continue to expand For example: Wayne went to the movies with his parents. They are the richest people in Gotham. They encountered robbers and their parents were killed. He got the idea of fear and revenge, which prompted him to step by step become Batman (Goldfinger, money ability)

Dreams seem to be what we have been pursuing, dreams and goals. I often hear people next to me say: "Go to sleep! There is everything in your dreams!" Forgive me, there may not be everything in dreams. I have tried

Stay Claw, "Our Ultimate Era"

It's nice to read and well written. I will continue to chase you. I will update one less chapter. I will just block you if you have nothing to do. If you don't believe me, give it a try.

I will write about it later... That medical student was a bit stressed at the end of the semester, so I will write about it later...!

Personally speaking, the description feels good, but it feels a little abrupt. There is not enough connection between the previous and next chapters. You can bury pitfalls, but not too many. Take your time and ensure the flow of the plot first.

It is still good, especially the description of scenery and environment. It would be better to pay more attention to the details of describing characters.

Has the author signed a contract?😏

Am I late? Finished?

Optimistic... Already bet,

Bet... Be optimistic... I will invest in you next time... 🙂