
Become Zhang Tie in Mortal Beginning
凡人之开局成为张铁
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- Completed
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- 129k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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After being introduced by his third uncle, Han Li entered Qixuanmen to take the assessment. Han Li failed the examination and was accepted as a registered disciple by Doctor Mo together with Zhang Tie. Doctor Mo taught Han Li and Zhang Tie the unknown formula (Changchun Kung) Han Li started, but Zhang Tie didn't. Han Li continued to practice Changchun Gong, and Zhang Tie changed to practice Elephant Armor Gong. Han Li got the Sky Palm Bottle. Zhang Tie was killed and was made into a puppet "Iron Slave" by Dr. Mo Han Li met Li Feiyu and used "painkillers" to relieve his "marrow-sucking pills" Han Li discovered the purpose of the Palm Sky Bottle's ripening elixir and began to refine the elixir. Han Li's Changchun Kung Fu broke through to the fourth level. Doctor Mo returned to the valley and had an enmity with Han Li, who was forced to take the "Zi Chong Pill" Han Li practiced the Changchun Kung Fu while practicing the martial arts "Blinking Sword Jue" and "Luo Yanbu". Han Li has achieved some success in martial arts and has reached the sixth level of Qi training stage. Han Li went to the appointment to fight with Doctor Mo. Han Li lost and Dr. Mo won. Doctor Mo failed to seize Han Li's body, and Han Li destroyed his remaining son, Tong Yuanshen. Han Li obtained the puppet "Quhun", the first eight levels of the Changchun Gong, Doctor Mo's letter, the Cloud-winged Bird, and several spells. Han Li was poisoned and needed the "Nuan Yang Baoyu" to detoxify him. Han Li inherited Doctor Mo's medical skills and became the Qixuanmen's miracle doctor. Han Li practiced "Fire Bullet Technique", "Wind Control Technique", "Heavenly Eye Technique", and "Object Expelling Technique" Han Li's realm reached the eighth level of Qi Training Stage The Wild Wolf Gang attacked Qixuanmen and set up a "Death Contract Blood Fight". Master Jinguang appears and uses the talisman "Flying Sword Talisman" to kill mortals. Han Li killed people to seize treasures, and obtained the talisman "Flying Sword Talisman", the talisman "Vajra Talisman", and the Immortal Order (Huang Maple Valley) Han Li bid farewell to Qixuanmen, bid farewell to his parents, and left Jingzhou with his "Quhun". …………(To be continued)
The house is rented for 700 a month, plus water and electricity, it's about 750 a month. There is a balcony, so you can enjoy some fresh air and inspiration, hehe. It's a little expensive, but the rent here is not low, alas... Come on, code, full-time code, there will be more updates on the shelves, there is no way out! Full-time support required! Increase the number of updates starting from June!
Clear Thoughts & Stars Holding the Moon
Wuhu, my thoughts are clear and my obsession is finally gone! Now, I can write my book with peace of mind. They are all mine😭😭😭
To grasp the theme, grasp the theme! The last book by Mo Juren failed to grasp the theme, and this one is nonsense again. For example, why are you talking so much about catching a traitor? The plot that should be reduced must not be increased. After all, you are not original. Fan fiction must stick to the cool points (don't pretend to be cool, just keep silent and make a fortune).
I was shocked by the "Five Lightning Whips" in the first chapter! It can't be serious, this is not a subject suitable for comedy!
I came to recommend it, I need more support from everyone!
The recommendation is finally here, now I rely on everyone's support! The recommendation time will start on 6.7 (Next Monday). At that time, I hope that everyone will vote and collect, so that I can advance to the next round of recommendation 😁😁
I'm guilty of not coding today. Definitely tomorrow!
Dianniang (5.29-5.31) And the badge "Stars holding the moon"
[Event Theme]: Dian Niang (5.29-5.31) And the badge "Stars Holding the Moon" [Event Requirements]: Duan rewards the book 10,000 times [Event Period]: 5.29-5.31 [Event Reward]: None [Event Description]: It is the first time to do the event and I can't do it, which is super embarrassing. Anyway, I'm so vain that I want the badge "The stars support the moon!"
New book issue, please support! Please collect it! Please vote!
New book issue, please support! Please collect it! Please vote! Because it is not an internal investment, it is still a question whether it can be signed, so during the new book period, everyone is supporting it. Now I code two updates every day, post one update, and save the extra chapters. This book will not get lost. Please support me! How far Zhang Tie can go depends on everyone, please! I will code carefully!
Sorry, I read a chapter and a half and died from poison. The writing is so bad.
Work related - plot supplement system
Well, this "Mortal Becomes Zhang Tie" is a fan novel of "Mortal's Story of Cultivation to Immortality". Some old readers may know that Zhang Tie is not my first mortal fanfic. Before this, I had played the fanfic of Doctor Mo and Giant Mo. Unfortunately, due to various reasons, Giant Ink pounced. But, it's okay. Failure is the mother of success! Giant Mo's attack gave Zhang Tie more experience, allowing Zhang Tie to avoid the pits that Giant Mo stepped on. Without further ado, let me briefly introduce the system of this book - the plot supplement system. 1. [System Source]: The inspiration for the plot supplement system comes from the author's "Ink Fragrance Bronze Stiff" animation, "Self-Rescue Guide through Books" It happened to be the National Day holiday, and I realized this, so I started the Mortal Time Traveling Through Books opening stream. 2. [System Introduction]: The plot supplement system was originally about the book traveler entering the novel world and changing his fate against the will of heaven. The system will bring corresponding plug-ins to the book wearer. The person who wears the book only needs to consume plot points to get assistance from the system. 3. [Plot Points]: There are five ways to obtain plot points. 1. Change the mentally retarded plot 2. Ensure the protagonist's satisfaction 3. Improve the villain's IQ 4. Supplement the plot that has not been revealed 5. Develop new plots 4. [System functions]: Let me briefly introduce the currently open system functions. 1. Improve the skills: Consuming plot points can speed up the proficiency in comprehending the skills. The skills include: secular martial arts, immortality cultivation spells, magical powers and secret techniques, etc. The more complex the skills, the more plot points are consumed. 2. System package: The book wearer has a unique inventory that can store various things and cannot be seen by others. It is equivalent to a top-secret storage bag. Every time the book wearer advances to a higher level, the size of the system package will expand accordingly. 3. System space: System space is the correct usage of this system. There is a space in the body of the book-wearer, which forms a "small world" of its own, which can accommodate the spiritual objects of heaven and earth and is protected by the laws of space. 4. I haven't thought about it yet, but I thought of adding it... Note: Because it is a fairy tale, if data appears frequently, it will affect the reading experience, so I will summarize it in one stroke, so please don't be too precise. 5. [System Origin]: Everything has a certain reason and will not happen for no reason. Just like holding the sky bottle, traveling through time and space is so magical! The same is true for the plot supplement system! Later, I will write about the cause and effect of the system gradually. It may take a long time, but I will write it one day and I will definitely not finish it! ………… Finally, I hope everyone can read and subscribe. Thank you for your support! (Whether I can marry a wife depends on the old men!) ————The code-writing boy sincerely
Let me slow down and play a little longer. When the time comes, I will update.
Don't worry! Don't panic! Don't be afraid! Wait for me to work full time!
Well, the resignation date has been finalized, it is the 25th of this month. On May 25, I will come out of the electronics factory, and then concentrate on coding, becoming a "full-time novelist" with a slim future but full of hope Let me briefly talk about my situation. I entered the online writing industry in March last year, and I have been working on it for more than a year, and I can be considered an "old punk" During this period, I had a total of 2 pen names, published 16 novels, and accumulated 1.45 Million code words. Among them, 4 books were signed and 12 were not signed. Zhang Tie is my 16th novel. I will take it seriously, so don't worry. After working full-time, I no longer have the pressure to go to work and can spend more time coding and studying every day. Although the possibility of making money is not very high, I love writing novels. I like to write novels. It can also be said that I am both good at writing and good at writing. Currently, I am alone and do not plan to socialize anymore. I just want to be in a free "doghouse" and write my favorite novels. Writing novels is my hobby and my profession. Come on, coders! (That's right, just like playing games!)
I have a few books on The Eunuch, and I say that I am serious about writing books every day. I'm sorry to everyone, but you are so good. When it's time to say goodbye, you shouldn't trust the Chief Eunuch.
Self-guided one-day tour, I am exhausted!
I was so full, and I didn't know that I didn't get back my money. I was so full 😆😜
Don't worry, I'll update it later tonight. It's a bit difficult to switch styles. I'm trying my best to switch...
Go to Shenzhen to find a big factory that works on Saturdays, and the salary is 6,000 a month. Then I code at night, just one chapter a day.
The website short message has been received, please feel free to invest!
I have received a site short notice today, so you can invest with confidence. I will take the time to work on the contract these days. It is expected that the contract status will be changed next Monday. After changing the contract status, you will have to maintain 2 updates per day. (Mandatory 2 updates, I can do it!) Because this book is a seedling, it urgently needs everyone's nourishment. Everyone, please try your best to vote for Zhang Tie on weekdays and support Lao Tie so that Lao Tie can go further. In addition, Zhang Tie also needs "protectors". He hopes that capable book lovers can support Zhang Tie with rewards after signing the contract to impact the ranking of the new book issue. In addition, when Zhang Tie is recommended by the editor, please continue to support him, so that Lao Tie can reach the next round of recommendations without being rubbed on the ground by other books. (Please collect it! Please vote! Please comment!) If this book can hit Sanjiang, please put it on the shelves and reward yourself with the Silver Alliance! ! !
It's not bad. If the pace is slower, more detailed, and the IQ is more online, it will still be good.
It feels good to read books for a while, and it feels good to read books all the time. Ahhhhh! I am used to pigeon books! Pigeon pigeon! This... Is really terrifying! Unconsciously, I became addicted to pigeon books. I don't even know how I did it. "Three Kingdoms Simulator" failed again. Then I opened another book, "The Age of Kings: National Heroes" ...... Although that book hasn't been updated yet, I still feel that it will be improved 😭 I'm dead, old guys!
The plot is gradually advancing, veterans, don't worry.
The plot is gradually advancing, veterans, don't worry. If nothing else happens, one chapter a day. Now it's time for Zhang Tie + Han Li VS Doctor Mo, which is also the climax. This book will absorb the experience of Giant Mo. The ordinary part will be written in about 50 chapters. (Including Jiayuan City) We already have a clue of the follow-up plot, all that's left is the coding. But I am in a factory and go to work every day. I don't have much time to code, and I am really powerless. (I really want to update more code words, but I really can't do it. Forcing updates will only disrupt the rhythm and affect my normal work the next day.) And for coding, you need to enter the code state, so that you can write good articles. (Current coding speed: 2000 words/2 hours) In addition, the current writing style is really crude and embarrassing, so everyone will make do with it for now. (Writing can only be done by reading more, learning more, practicing more, accumulating more, and the most important thing is talent. However, I have no talent, so I can only go to pieces.) I will make progress while optimizing the previous article. Writing in the end is not easy, I ask for your support! (Recommend a few mortal fanfics from the same period, you can read them if you are interested.) 1. [Mortal Senior Brother Lu] Reason for recommendation: The writing style is okay. At first glance, it seems that the old author does not respect martial ethics and wears a new vest to bully me, a newbie. You can go and read it.
The author can write, and it's best if he can get up. It's really stressful, so he can take time out to work part-time delivering food every day to earn some rent and food expenses.
Extra chapter (1) Friendship between Zhang and Han
Recently, Han Li used the Sky Palm Bottle to ripen many elixirs, and then sold these elixirs to other monks. But because Han Li sold so many elixirs, many people spied on him. In order to avoid these troubles, Han Li held the Sky Bottle and asked his senior brother Zhang Tie for help. As soon as Zhang Tie saw the Palm Heaven Bottle that Han Li had delivered to his door, his eyes narrowed slightly, and then he had something wrong. Then Zhang Tie said to Han Li: "Han Li, listen to Brother Zhang's advice, this world of immortality is very dangerous, and the water in it is very deep! If you took the small green bottle, I'm afraid you won't be able to hold it. But Brother Zhang is different. Brother Zhang is stubborn. Brother Zhang is not afraid of these dangers. Let Brother Zhang keep this bottle for you." After hearing Zhang Tie's remarks, Han Li immediately wiped his eyes and said that he would give the small green bottle to Zhang Tie for safekeeping and leave all the trouble to Zhang Tie. Some time later, Han Li never expected that Zhang Tie would actually take a small green bottle to ripen the elixir in broad daylight, and then sell it to people who were watching for the elixir. Moreover, the elixir is sold at a cheaper price than Han Li sells it. When Han Li's wife Nangong Wan found out, she said to Han Li: "Han Li, go and persuade Tie Zi and ask Tie Zi to return the bottle!" However, Han Li shook his head and said that the routines in the world of immortality were too deep, and he said that he could not persuade Tie Zi. "Don't let me try to persuade you, I really can't persuade Tie Zi!" (The inspiration comes from the "Pang Ga Friendship", I understand it, it makes me happy, hahaha! I hope it can make everyone laugh, hehe.)
Go back to work! Normally, I insist on updating it every day, and treat it as practice. Regardless of the results, I should summarize more experience and check more information. If you can persist in writing for three months, you will consider your future path. If you cannot persist, it means you are not suitable for this industry.
Recently, I have been reading the original title of "Mysterious Resurrection" (Horror Resurrection) Entering the world of "ghosts". I just saw the latest chapter of the series, and I still have more to say (I was so scared that I hid under the covers and read horror novels, and I was really convinced!) The name "Ghost Eye Yang Jian" is well-deserved! Next, I will open another fanfic and follow the setting of horror recovery to write a "ghost" story. A mortal can also write this book. Write two books at the same time! As for subscriptions, royalties, etc., I don't care anymore. I just want to write the novel I want to write. Don't care about grades, fame or fortune. That's it, start writing now. Writing "Mysterious Resurrection" first, and then "Mortal Fans" If nothing else, the series will be updated in the evening! (Writing a ghost story is very scary! I hope I won't be scared to death!)
I really hope that it will be written like a mortal, with high IQ. Han Li has a treasure and can concentrate on practicing. Although he does not take the initiative to play complicated routines, the IQs of various supporting characters are higher than the last. The first few mortals, whether it is Doctor Mo or his wives and concubines. Write more foreshadowing. Being able to write well will really make people feel comfortable.
I would like to give some suggestions to the author, and incorporate more life insights such as joys and sorrows into the novel, otherwise the novel will have no spirituality, be too bland, and be meaningless.
Plot discussion post (1): Get the bottle plot
For posts about the plot, everyone can say whatever they want, I will see it... Well, I will give a brief explanation about Zhang Tie taking Han Li's Sky Palm Bottle. 1. Han Li's Five Elements lacked gold and pseudo-spiritual roots, and without the ripening elixir from the Heaven Palm Bottle, he was completely useless! 2. If it is just a ripening elixir, let Zhang Tie hold the bottle. Zhang Tie has read the original work and knows how to use the bottle. 3. Zhang Tie will help Han Li, but Han Li will not be abolished! 4. During the foundation building stage and the elixir forming stage, Zhang Tie and Han Li will share bottles to ripen the elixir. 5. I haven't decided yet, let's see everyone's opinions.
I just read some of it, and I have a big problem. I feel like the author wrote it without even thinking about it. He didn't even prepare the plot point of the protagonist. He wrote some plot points at the beginning, but he didn't clearly explain the purpose of this thing and how to get it, and then it disappeared. At first he said he wouldn't take the bottle, but later he bought it for 500 taels, and the author said he would give it back later? The protagonist also wanted to raise Han Li. I really didn't know what to do with it, and I didn't know what to do with it later. Either change the front, take away the bottle at the beginning, kill Doctor Mo when it grows up, let Han Li go back and give him another sum of money, and Han Li still has several levels of cultivation, let him go on his own, and then slowly write the story of the protagonist. Otherwise, how can you keep Han Li cultivating like this, share golden fingers, let go when it's time, Han Li, a mortal fellow, is not that important, there is no need to keep it with you, the key point must be clear, mortal you and the plot are really worthless.
Planning
After I became full-time, I started typing and saving manuscripts. Two updates a day starting from 6.1 (Mature authors need to save manuscripts) It is expected to be on the shelves in 7.1, And three updates a day will be released at that time (there will be a burst of updates on the first day!) It is expected that starting from 8.1, A total of five chapters of 10,000 words will be updated every day, lasting for one month (at least 150 chapters coded in the month, hehe) Starting from 9.1, It depends on the subscription If the results are not good, I will have to consider joining the factory again... The plan is to write 400 chapters/1 million words before 10.1, So updating is not a problem, please support it 😭 (After it is released, I hope everyone can subscribe and support as much as possible!) Life and dreams are indeed a problem. But I will always love novels!