Revitalizing Shuhan: Starting from Tianshui Qilin'er

It is suggested that the author should not set up a main palace for the three heroines. After Xiao Weiwei helps the big man, the red and blue lines of the game will be neutral. The three heroines will compete in front of Yin Xiang's tomb as the ending.

I'm not saying that writing this way is necessarily bad. In history books, the heroine is never important. What is the most important feature of your book? What attracts people to come and see it? Is it because you write well or because you write creatively? You may have misunderstandings about your level. In Three Kingdoms books, you may not be able to be ranked in the top 100. Even if the Three Kingdoms works are still being serialized, you may not be able to be ranked in the top 10. I don't know about others, but for me, when I first discovered this book, it was like a treasure. I have always wanted to find a fan work of Jiang Wei's biography, but except for a 100,000-word eunuch book in Fantasy Sword, I have never found any. In the biography of Jiang Wei, among the three heroines, Cao Ling is the most popular, followed by Yang Lan. Zhuge Guo is just Jiang Wei's follower and sister in most people's minds. Few people regard her as Jiang Wei's wife. There is no way she was still a lolita when she appeared. By the time she officially joined our army, the plot of Jiang Wei, Yang Lan, and Cao Ling had already unfolded a lot, and nothing would happen without her.

Results of the Third Northern Expedition Wei lost the entire Liangzhou and lost nearly 200,000 troops. Among them, 100,000 casualties were suffered in the battle of Licheng, and a general of Qin Lang's level was killed. The Shu Kingdom also suffered 200,000 casualties, but it gained the important strategic location of Liangzhou. However, the 16th Battalion was completely wiped out by the Wei Kingdom, and the Shu Kingdom was also seriously damaged. From the perspective of casualties, it can be said that the two countries are basically tied, but from a strategic perspective, the change of ownership of Liangzhou has increased and decreased, and the gap between Shu and Wei is narrowing.

One year after meeting in the grove...

Liu Bei spent his life wandering around and fighting countless defeats. He had never even seen the prosperity of the Han Dynasty, but he never forgot to restore the Han Dynasty. Zhuge Liang has been struggling to survive in the flames of war since he was a child, but he resolutely came out of the mountain because of Liu Bei's three visits to the thatched cottage. Even at the last moment of his life, he always said, "Don't forget the legacy of the late emperor, and do your best." The worst one is Jiang Wei! 😭 He has never even met the late emperor, but he is the man who most firmly inherits the legacy of the prime minister. Liu Bei never leaves the Han Dynasty, Zhuge Liang never leaves the late emperor, and he also never leaves the prime minister. Even after Liu Chan surrendered in the end, he insisted on secretly resisting the uprising. Although it failed in the end, he also dragged two traitors on his back. It can be said that he died tragically with good intentions.

The post-Three Kingdoms era has entered a stage of comparison between defeat and defeat. It just depends on who is more thoroughly destroyed. In fact, Soochow is the most thorough. Shu was destroyed first because of Deng Ai's unlucky luck. He developed a navy to destroy Soochow first, and fighting Sima Jin was a waste of effort.

As graceful as a frightened dragon, the clothes are as beautiful as the snow, as graceful as a swimming dragon, as if it is home after death.

It seems that there are hundreds of chapters, let me share your thoughts The author writes very well, and the readers are dizzy after reading it. Many plots lack logic and cannot withstand scrutiny. Maybe the author has a complete plot in mind, but he doesn't realize it well. There are a large number of original characters in the book, who take over the main role. Zhuge Guo, Yang Lan, Luo Yu and Suning all have more roles than historical generals. This book is not the worst one in which Cao Rui was hacked, but it is definitely the most unjust one in which he was hacked. These include but are not limited to believing that all the people in the court are Sima Yi's henchmen, killing Wang Shuang's family, etc. This book can be exempted from the upper limit. It is true that there are no generals in Sichuan, and Liao Hua is the pioneer.

Is it possible for Yang Lan to appear? As one of the three major heroines, Yang Lan, disappearing would make the whole story look inferior. However, this book has obviously missed the time when Yang Lan appeared. It seems that the character of Yang Lan can no longer exist. In fact, this is not the case. The character Yang Lan first came from the Legend of Kong Ming, and was set as a female Qiang general who joined our army after being captured alive by Jiang Wei. The Yang Lan in Jiang Wei's Legend is actually a demon-reformed one, so you don't have to stick to the way Yang Lan appears in Jiang Wei's Legend. In the current plot, it is almost a foregone conclusion that Jiang Wei and Zhuge Guo will get married. This is not to say that it is not good for them to get married, but letting Jiang Wei's emotional line determine the winner too early is very detrimental to this novel. I will talk to the author privately about the rest.

Murong Xue

Duan Gu's writing is very exciting, especially the first confrontation between Jiang Wei and Deng Ai, where thunder from heaven touches fire from earth. It would be better if there were no rocks to hit that part.

When I stayed up late playing Jiang Wei Zhuan, it was full of passionate memories ٩(๑òωó๑)۶

One Lu, two Zhao, three Dianwei, four passes, five horses and six Zhang Fei. Huang Xusun Tai was the Marquis of the two Xia Dynasties, and Zhang Xu Pang was the Gan Zhou Wei. The sharp spear Zhang Xiu and Wen Yan are brave but their fate is too tragic. Twenty-four generals from the Three Kingdoms defeated Deng Ai and Jiang Wei.

Guoguo meets Jiang Wei for the first time

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This chapter says 50,000. Is this a hell-level mission?

Wei was a native of Jicheng, Tianshui. When he was young, he liked Zheng Xuan's theory. He was good at making friends with heroes and was good at both civil and military affairs. The county called him Qilin'er of Tianshui. In the winter of the fourth year of Jianxing, Marquis Wu attacked Wei and fought in Tianshui. The governor of the county, Ma Zun, abandoned the city and left. Wei had no choice but to be captured by the Han army. After being captured, there was only the Han Prime Minister in the Chinese army tent. Wei Zao was confused about his attack on Wei, so he asked: Bei died in Baidi, and the Lord Zen was cowardly and incompetent. Why did he raise an army to attack Wei like this? Liang said to him: At that time, the late emperor visited the thatched hut three times and expressed his wish for this life: Han and traitors are not at odds with each other, and the royal family is not at peace. This is the reason why Liang attacked Wei. Meng De, a traitor to the Han Dynasty, served the emperor in name only to disobey his subordinates, but in fact he intended to usurp the Han and establish himself as king. The four hundred kingdoms of the Han Dynasty, Zuo, were destroyed by Zi Pi. Alas, the late emperor ascended the throne in Chengdu, but to inherit the kingdom of Zuo of the Han Dynasty. What a pity, the White Emperor left and never returned! Listening to what he said, Wei Xin responded to what he felt and said: It's like this. Wei was impressed by the charm of the late emperor. Although Wei was not talented, he hoped that the Prime Minister would not abandon him and was willing to become his disciple! Liang smiled and said: "Very good, Jiang Boyue is a sergeant in Liangzhou!" Kongming made six Northern Expeditions, with mixed success and failure. He died in Wuzhangyuan in the winter of the twelfth year of Jianxing. After that, Wei inherited the legacy of the Han Prime Minister and worked hard for the Han Dynasty, through fire and water. For thirty years, Wei Wei spent his whole life fighting against the Qiang, defeated Longxi, and retreated to Taoxi. Fei Yi, Zhang Yi, Qiao Zhou, Liao Hua, etc. In the imperial court all turned against Wei Wei and resorted to violence. Little did he know that Wei Wei's move was only the wish of his ancestors, the Han Prime Minister, and his ambition to conquer the Central Plains. In the country, Wei Jiu made nine expeditions to the Central Plains, defeated Guo Huai and Xiahou Ba in Longxi, retreated Wang Jing to Taoxi, and fought against Deng Ai and Hou He. Although he suffered defeats, his sincerity and sincerity truly marked the resurgence of the Han Dynasty. Sigh, the successor is incompetent. King Sima Wen raised an army to attack Shu, and Wei and Wei fought at the Jiange Pavilion. General Ai sneaked into Yinping and arrived at the gate of Chengdu. The Han Dynasty was destroyed, and Wei was heartbroken. When Ji Han was destroyed, Wei often cried bitterly to his queen: "We are ashamed of your majesty. The aspirations of the prime minister and the emperor failed to come true." So, when Wei saw Ai Youhui's tit-for-tat confrontation, he and Hui raised an army to rebel and restore the Han Dynasty. He was already old, but he still wore armor and went into battle. It was just the last chance for the Han Dynasty.

Build a building to record Cao Ling's stardom

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He practiced martial arts under Xuan Gu, and went down the mountain to suppress the White Wolf for three years Xianbei invaded and plundered the border, and took the initiative to fight against Xianbei In order to defeat Xianbei, the enemy saw through his father and died in battle He was not afraid to go on an expedition in the face of danger, and personally led 5,000 bloody battles against the enemy Beheading the Wolf King in formation was shocking on the battlefield, and he was famous as the god of war in the world

The fight between Deng Ai and Jiang Wei is really the pinnacle of similar scenes in this book. Heroes cherish heroes.

Regarding Cao Hu's rebellion against the Han, not to mention his performance in the Third Northern Expedition, he rebelled without a reward. His family members were all in Yizhou, and he had no reason to rebel. It is nonsense to hold him responsible for the death of Guan Xing and others in the Third Northern Expedition. The Puppet Wei has already learned the lessons of Meng Da's surrender and rebellion, and Jiang Wei's rebellion and false surrender. At present, they dare not use it against Han generals. He is unrealistic and will not be of much use as an undercover agent. If the three loyalists in Huainan will rise up in the future in the Puppet Wei, and expect him to cause trouble in the Puppet Wei, that would be an overestimation of his ability. It is even more unrealistic to kill his family members in Yizhou to win the trust of the pseudo-Wei. From the beginning of Liu Bei, no rebellious civil and military members have been exterminated. If it is done, the pseudo-Wei will not believe that he really surrendered. The plot of Cao Hu's rebellion against the Han is not handled well in the post-production, and it will become a failure of the book. At present, the court has no voice on his rebellion, and many chapters have passed. This does not make sense. In the third Northern Expedition, Zhuge Liang captured the Hexi Corridor and paid a higher price in casualties than the pseudo-Wei. The country's national power was already small, but he still dared to play spies. Are he really not afraid of actually surrendering and revealing the true situation of his family to the pseudo-Wei? How to place this spy in the Puppet Wei? It makes no sense to lurk for a short period of time. The Puppet Wei does not dare to put him on the front line. Instead of lurking in the rear to defend Sun Quan for a long time, he has to submit a surrender certificate.

I can't stand it at all. I won't talk about the writing style. You need to have basic logic, right? Chapter 5: You just finished eating at the street pavilion and fought with others. When you returned to camp, Zhuge Liang told you apologetically that your mother had been arrested? Can Zhuge Liang fly or can you fly? There really is no logic at all, right? Zhuge Liang has come to the camp to tell you, will Jieting still lose? Why didn't you write that Zhuge Liang teleported away and was stabbed by Cao Pi?

Introduction to the factions of the Daliang Kingdom in 260 (2) Western Movement Faction: Advocated expansion of territory to the west and temporarily maintained peaceful relations with the Han Dynasty. However, they also believed that Liu Chen's victory over the country was unfair and that Great Liang should no longer recognize the status of the Han suzerainty. Faction leader: Yang Lan Faction core: Gan Wei, Yifan, Shangguanyuan, Jufu, Liu Yin, Gundam, etc.

It's hard to reach 50% progress. I don't know if I will be able to achieve a fourth-level star by the end of the year

It's so fake. Zhang He had just arrived and Ma Su felt like he was going to die before he even started beating him? Didn't he know that he would be surrounded when he went up the mountain, but he felt that he would definitely win by being so condescending, and he couldn't stand it any longer.

How is your ending different from that of a eunuch?

How do modern people travel through the Three Kingdoms without a golden finger?

… "Your Majesty, it's bad! The outer city has been breached!" Cen Hun, the young eunuch, rushed into Sun Quan's palace to report the news. At this time, Sun Quan, who had been seriously ill for several days and nights, was lying on the dragon bed in his clothes and taking a nap. When he heard the news that the outer city of Jianye had been destroyed, he was so frightened that he rolled out of bed. He shouted in shock: "Where is my army?! Where are Lu Kang, Zhuge Ke, Song Jin, and Li Sheng?!" At this moment, the young eunuch Cen Hun had already fled. He left the emperor alone and fled for his own life. "The situation is over, and my country will fall into the hands of the descendants of big-eared thieves! I am ashamed of the people of Wu!" Sun Quan cried out in despair.  … Night has fallen, Hannan's cries of killing against the rebels are getting closer and closer, and the inner city of Jiankang is about to be breached. Sun Quan summoned the harem and his children, and then said to everyone: "The king and ministers of Shu have an sworn hatred with me. The big thing is over and it falls into the hands of the enemy. You have no choice but to die..." Before Sun Quan could finish his words, Queen Pan Shu got up and ran away from the door without her life. Sun Quan drew his sword and chased after her, saying, "You deserve to die!" The sword thrust forward and hit Pan Shu in the right shoulder. Pan Shu did not fall down immediately. Sun Quan struck again with his sword, and Pan Shu fell to the ground. She still had her eyes open when she died. At this time, Sun Quan was almost crazy. He was already extremely ill and waved the sword in his hand as if he was reflecting back on the light. He first stabbed several palace maids around him to death, and then like a mad dog, he killed all the harem and children present who had no time to escape from the palace. After leaving the palace, Sun Quan saw the eldest princess Sun Luban who fell outside the door while escaping, "Why did you want to be born in the emperor's family? Who told you to be born in the emperor's family!" Sun Quan suddenly raised his sword and stabbed Sun Luban with a ruthless sword. Sun Luban's chest was bleeding profusely and he fell in a pool of blood. Then Sun Quan killed the prince Sun He, the fifth son Sun Fen, and the third daughter Sun Luyu in the harem. Mrs. Yuan committed suicide by hanging from a beam. "Die well! Die well!" At this time, Sun Quan leaned on a big pillar and called out in despair: "Children, I hope you will never be born in the imperial family again in the next life." "Your Majesty, something bad has happened. The inner city has been destroyed and the Shu army has advanced. Your Majesty, I will escort you through the encirclement and gather all the Qinwang troops to regroup. Lu Kang, Song Jin, Li Sheng and others still have an army of 300,000." Sun Quan, who was leaning on the pillar, woke up. , He took Ding Feng's hand: "No, Chengyuan, I understand that the Kingdom of Wu is over. As the emperor, I have to do what the emperor should do. The world has been in chaos for hundreds of years, and it is time for the people of the world to return to a peaceful world." Ding Feng wanted to persuade him again, but Sun Quan stopped. "Come on! Capture Jiangdong's blue-eyed child (Sun Quan) alive!" The Hannan conquest rebels who broke into the inner city rushed toward the Wu palace like a tide. In this earth-shattering cry, the descendants of the Han heroes who died in Maicheng and Yiling were at the forefront.  …

Deng Ai: In the first battle at Xiaogu in Suiyang, Wei Yan returned with a disastrous defeat. In the second world war, Chencang was the enemy of Wei Yan. He defended Chencang and attacked the Han camp. There were many ingenious plots. Due to the small number of troops, he failed this time and was not able to evacuate. Wei Yan entered Chencang and learned that Deng Ai would not rob the people's rations. He sighed that Deng Ai was a real hero. However, Deng Ai was unexpectedly brave and did not completely retreat. He set up an ambush in Duangu in the enemy's territory. Before Jiang Wei The line withdrew to Duangu, the ambush was exhausted, and the Huben camp suffered a heavy defeat. General Mi Wei died from random arrows. Unfortunately, although Deng Ai was talented, his generals were brave but did not mess with Wei Yan. Both generals, Deng Ai, were killed by Wei Yan. Evaluation: Deng Ai was courageous and resourceful. He often had great plans when he first came to the battlefield, but his strength was insufficient. Therefore, he was defeated by Wei Yan three times. If he had the same strength, the outcome would be unpredictable. However, even though his troops were not large and his generals were not strong, Deng Ai was still able to defeat the Han army to severely inflict heavy losses on the powerful Tiger Army. He was also able to kill the brave general Guan Xing in the defeated Jiji Formation. This shows that he has both bravery and strategy. I look forward to Deng Ai's appearance next time.