Saiyans Starting from Konoha

I have some suggestions after reading this article. One, don't weaken the protagonist. All Saiyans. In their minds or our minds, Saiyans have extremely high strength, so don't make her weak. Afraid of this or that. Two, don't mess with cause and effect, it's fate. The early stage can be compared to the later stage of the plot, and then the plot can be changed. Don't be like running water. Three, don't force your wits down, this is the most disgusting thing.

It's still great, with reasonable combat power. The low-level Saiyans are fine at this time, and the Explosive Ape is even better when he fights the four tails. Occasionally, he still needs to show off his high combat power. The combat power does not need to be detailed. We just don't like to watch the protagonist and the soldiers fight until they are half dead and have no harvest, especially the invincible type. It's nothing if you can't abuse others. You can change the map in the later stages of Naruto Over. After all, Saiyans... After a long time, you will be too good if you can't get up. People don't like to watch it. Once you get up, the plot of Naruto will continue to be boring. Changing the map is the best, but it is actually quite difficult. Invincible style is difficult to write. Come on, author, just follow your own ideas. The current plot is still okay. In the end, the novel still depends on the plot. The most important thing is whether it is interesting or not, and reasonableness is only the basis.

Compared to the two recent Saiyan books in Marvel, it reads much smoother, which is a good review.

The Saiyan body is not weak. From Goku's body being bullet-resistant to fighting with his body when fighting, his body strength is not weak. In the movie Hulk, the laser destroys matter in Long Chao. Heart disease is a problem within the body, and it is also said that it is a special heart disease. It cannot survive outside the universe. The key to the Dragon Ball system is mainly the energy system, which usually does not have much evolutionary effect on the body. However, if you remove the energy, you can find that the characters in Dragon Ball are still very strong physically. The upper limit can be compared with the movie version of Superman.

Let me tell you here, Saiyans are very strong, blowing up the earth is just like playing. Don't write Saiyans like weak chickens. I didn't see Goku resisting bullets at the beginning of Dragon Ball. Don't write Dragon Ball as Naruto or you are still training to death. The current combat power of the protagonist is at least 3000, because there should be more than 1000 and he will have almost 3000 combat power after being resurrected from the near death. Finally, don't lower the destructive power of Saiyans.

All the Dragon Balls that crossed over to Naruto Pirates were all forcibly weakening the Dragon Balls. No exceptions. . . . They are all Saiyans who don't practice ki, shock waves, or hand-to-hand combat, so they go to learn ninjutsu and cultivate chakra. . . . . I've even seen Kaguya Daidoki beating up Buu, killing Cell instantly with six strokes, rubbing Frieza to the ground at the Kage level, and Piccolo being unable to defeat Kakashi. . . . . . All kinds of forced insults to readers' intelligence. . . . . . Most of the authors haven't even read Dragon Ball. I just think that Dragon Ball is just a taijutsu version of ninja, and some people even think that Infinite Tsukuyomi can completely defeat the Super Series. . . Anyone who has watched Dragon Ball is unlikely to have this illusion. . . To put it simply, the time travel from Dragon Ball to Naruto is simply a dimensionality reduction attack. It is true that this kind of time travel is really difficult to write. After all, Super Saiyan can destroy the entire ninja world with one finger, so the only way is to forcibly weaken the Dragon Balls. . . Otherwise, I'll give you a slap in the face. . . As a kid, Goku was already the strongest in the ninja world. . . .

I just want to ask two things. When the teacher of the Ninja School said that he was going to test the protagonist's strength, why did the protagonist beat him until he vomited blood? The teacher didn't say harsh words or make things difficult for him. It was just a normal assessment, beating others to vomit blood. Secondly, the protagonist was sleeping in class because the teacher asked him to stand. The protagonist not only left directly but also said, "Who the hell is he?" ? ?

It's just that the quality of the protagonist is so bad that he is like a dog, and he doesn't know how to respect teachers. You don't have to listen, but you should respect him and say to a serious and responsible teacher: Who is he? It's really yours

I am a Saiyan, my fighting power is three million. Now I have transformed into a Super Saiyan with a combat power of 150 million. I am competing with Hiruzen Sarutobi. As expected of the Third Hokage, he can keep up with my speed. Moreover, I was hit and my body hurts a little. 👍👍

I am a Saiyan. I have been practicing with weights for more than a year and have opened the system. But I can't beat the Jonin. The clones created by the Jounin Shadow Clone Technique are all Genin. But each fist is as powerful as a bullet. Although you can't seriously hurt me, you can hurt me? ? ? ? If we press a genin, it will have an attack power of 5. This jounin is a hundred times that of the clone. So Shinkuna's attack power is 500 Demon Piccolo only has 200 combat power. Any qigong bomb has the power of a nuclear bomb. Who told me that the Saiyans in this book were not destroyed? ? ? ? ? Don't tell me that the protagonist will be weaker than Wukong after graduation?

Even the young Goku was able to defeat Jonin

I feel like the protagonist is very arrogant after he has blood. I don't know whether it is intentional or unintentional. He must not be polite and give people a kind heart and treat him like a donkey.

No matter what the protagonist is, don't be a teacher. If you are weaker than you and the system is different and you can't learn anything, it means that Kushina can't hand in anything and still has sex for nothing. It's disgusting for the protagonist to call her a teacher if she is a generation above you.

Come on 😎 But don't leak the power system casually, let alone teach others It's normal for people to be selfish. If you casually reveal the details and teach others your own power, then there is no need to write it down. That's it anyway.

There is no need to find the teacher, it is of no use, and it will be very troublesome to protect her from death in the future, and your plot advantage will be gone. Saiyans will become invincible after a few years of training, so they can just go out and wander around. There is really no need for bonds. The more bonds there are, the more weak they are….

Turtle Immortal surpasses the moon with more than 200 combat power 🤫

The most annoying thing is to wear the name of Uchiha, be the dog of the village, or develop alone, arrange a teacher for such an important matter, a completely unmatched one, or a Jinchuuriki, even if you think about it, you will not agree, and the emotional leader teacher will only be a sparring partner? If you don't need to teach anything, why do you still need it? If you don't use your own advantages, you will sacrifice your own strengths. If you don't know, you might think it's just romance.

Let me tell you a very straightforward question. You are writing a book in China instead of Japan. Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to get money and resources from some big names? If you write about it, Japan's Internet Harmony Department will not be able to control you. Can you add some IQ to the supporting characters?

I haven't watched it yet, but as a Dragon Ball fan! All I can say is that there is really nothing interesting to see when Saiyans go to Hokage! Sun Wukong was judged as an inferior warrior when he was born with a combat power of 2. When he was a child, he could barely defeat the ape-turned-turtle immortal, and he had to blow up the moon! Calculated, Kame Sennin's combat power at that time was at least similar to that of Ben in his heyday!

Naruto writes about Saiyans? The author is awesome. It should be because the author thinks he can grasp it. Just the system of Naruto? Compare it to Dragon Ball? That's awesome. Don't talk about suppression. Just watch the first episode of Dragon Ball to know how the combat power compares.

Just struggle suddenly and continue being an eunuch.

In fact, you can practice slowly. In Dragon Ball, Goku needs to practice for several years before he can reach about 100 combat power. When Piccolo has about 300 combat power, he only explodes. In Saiyan Attack, Goku only has more than 300 combat power. I think the six levels can be set at a few hundred combat power. Don't think that a few hundred combat power is easy. Goku will only have a few hundred combat power without cheating for more than ten years.

It's been a month... A eunuch?

Goku who is fifteen or sixteen years old really can't do anything to Naruto who is fifteen or sixteen years old.

I'm exhausted. Updates are slow to begin with. I've been raising them for a few months, but when I saw the results~🙃I was so moved that I cried at chapter 30, okay😭

I just read the second chapter, and I suggest the author also write that there are spiritual tree fruits in the system mall! Or seeds will work too! After all, the spirit tree setting in Dragon Ball is almost exactly the same as the Ten-Tails! They are all planted on the planet to absorb the life of the planet, and the spirit tree fruits produced will increase the combat power several times once eaten. After all, Dares could not beat Sun Wukong in the early stage. After eating a few spirit tree fruits, he directly defeated Sun Wukong who had 10 times Kaio Fist (you must know that every time Kaio Fist is doubled, the combat power will be increased several times)! Sun Wukong had no choice but to use vitality bombs to kill Dales!

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It's rare, it's been updated again

The Saiyans are invincible even if they are wild. The writing is not interesting at all and I can't stand it anymore.

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