I Can Enhance Martial Arts Manuals

I just took a look at it, and I think it's okay overall. The main character is a time travel and rebirth. How come the original father is so skilled, but when being served by a maid in the shower, he says he is not used to it. This is a split personality, or not integrated well. Logically speaking, the protagonist is reborn after time travel. Since it is rebirth, the original body is dead, otherwise it is not time travel and rebirth but the awakening of the past life. Also, the protagonist is too reckless towards monsters and should collect more information on monsters. Moreover, the author's writing about the predecessor is too useless. First he said that the predecessor loved martial arts and practiced immortality, but then he said that the predecessor had not even read a book explaining basic martial arts. This is really (~_~;).

Author, I suggest you revise your introduction. There is something wrong with this introduction. After reading it, I am very dissatisfied. I suggest you not write about your qualifications. You can only modify low-level exercises, but there are plug-ins that can upgrade your exercises. This is so stupid. If you upgrade your exercises, won't your qualifications still be low? Might as well write, why only practice low-level exercises but not high-level ones? Hey, luckily we have a plug-in for the system! Upgrade! Bin~The low-level Fuhu Fist is super evolved, and the super-god Meow Meow Fist! Look, wouldn't it be more interesting like this, and there is no such thing as qualifications? Like your introduction, if the title of the book is changed to I can increase the qualifications infinitely

As for the bathing part, I guess it will overwhelm most people.

Your writing is too discouraging. It feels like the protagonist is like a cowardly loser. He has no opinion and a bad personality. For example, the maid and the brothel girl are fighting and jealous. The protagonist here is cowardly and like a loser. They should not be forced to be with them. Are the protagonists sleeping with each other? Let me talk about the protagonist here. He has no domineering attitude at all. Is he still a warrior? The problem is that it doesn't matter here. When he went to propose marriage later, the protagonist didn't have any opinion at all. He was clearly arranged and persuaded to quit like a fool.

Monsters are rampant in the palace! Specifically waiting for the protagonist to take action? The face of a country! Why did the master go there? The city received a mission to eliminate demons. The master didn't take action before, but the civilians didn't care whether they lived or died? Specially waiting for the protagonist!

Man, this routine is a bit old. It was fine before and now I really can't stand it. The protagonist has a golden finger but doesn't know how to make good use of it. He has been wandering around in various cities for so long, bullying any sect disciples who come to him. After being bullied and defeating the opponent, he even revealed his real name. He was taken to the police and beat up the whole family. His father was also strangled and threatened the male protagonist. If it weren't for that nianchi, I wouldn't even want to talk about it. I was so poisoned that I died. Also, the practice of Kung Fu does not absorb the spiritual energy between heaven and earth, but absorbs gold,????? Or is there a lot of metal between heaven and earth, but it can't be absorbed??? Is this the earth-level technique??? Write the outline carefully and then continue writing, otherwise you will enter the palace sooner or later.

These exercises, martial arts, magic weapons, and elixirs are not as expensive as food. A sect's spiritual stone cannot afford half a month's food. This currency system is amazing.

I've probably read a few chapters, but it's actually quite well written. But I don't know why, but now when I see the academy, Tianjiao, I feel a little disgusted.

After reading about thirty chapters, I felt like the price of goods collapsed. This is similar to the ancient emperor's "why not eat minced meat". The author is still gritting his teeth in the comments. Really emotional. Forget it and leave, I can't stand it anymore.

What the hell? After raising dozens of chapters, he became a Zhutianliu? I'm so speechless, and I'm so speechless.