It Begins After Humanity’s Destruction

It's very interesting to watch, and I'm very curious about what the ending will be like after resurrecting humans. I'm afraid that in the modern era, poisons will start to be introduced in the future. Some immortals are actually around me, my neighbor has lived for billions of years, my classmate is the Emperor Yan and the Yellow Emperor Dayu, my son-in-law is the source of myths, and there is a mythology museum in my xx home! If you really write it like this, it would be extremely poisonous.

According to current scientists' predictions, the sun only has a lifespan of 10 billion years. Your two reincarnations add up to almost 9 billion years. The sun is dying.

The author, in fact, speaking in the tone of someone coming from the future, for example, xx does not know what will happen in the future is not suitable for use in a novel. Although this can be refreshing for a few seconds at the time, your interest in it will be seriously reduced later. For you, because you have to formulate a story, you know this, but the reader does not. There is also the discovery of the sun bow arrow, and the discussion on how the wooden man keeps pointing to one place. These were more interesting at the time, but later they became seriously less interesting. You can actually write more, and then write it as a side story later when the book is finished or almost finished.

Isn't it about restoring human civilization? Why is there only Chinese Mythology now? Western mythology does not

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the author's use of various blunt coincidences to restore Chinese mythology is too forced. Deliberately letting the protagonist encounter something similar to the myth every time, too many such coincidences will appear very false and blunt. And without the interference of external forces, the development process of life that was reborn after the earth was completely destroyed was actually similar to the original development process of life?! Later, they forcibly re-created the extinction of dinosaurs and meteorites destroyed giant creatures. Then only monkeys developed intelligence and became humans. The difference between creatures with completely different life bases becoming humans was not written at all. Without looking at the previous chapters, it is not even possible to tell the difference between new humans and original humans. The author can only say that the setting is forcibly created. It would be simpler and more reasonable to directly write that the protagonist travels back to the primitive era and relies on Goldfinger to actively create myths. 😥

It slipped away. What I wrote in the early stage was okay, but in the later stage it seemed too deliberate and false. Looking at the early stage, I still wrote about different civilizations, but this is the result!

Chinese mythology? Plus or minus 5,000 years? Three bodies? …I wanted to see the development process of a new human civilization that is different from humans, but the result is some familiar elements, nothing new (well written before the age of mythology)

The first dozen or so pictures are definitely excellent, but the myth of coincidence at the end is too fake.

Don't make the protagonist too smart. The author's IQ is only so small, and it will be difficult for readers to read the novel he writes!!

The way to destroy a nuclear weapon is to detonate it, are you kidding me? 😅