Rich Woman Startup Plan

Alas, many people may be offended by urban writing like this, but the author's writing is really good. Come on!

The name of autumn winds around the mountains, and I can hear it everywhere along the way. I can't see the lights as they used to be, just because of the heavy rain last night.

Chapter 40 is halfway through starting a business. According to this progress, it will either be the normal ending of single (double) heroine in Chapter 500, or the unfinished harem in Chapter 500, or the harem in Chapter 3000. Of course, the premise is still this progress.

Ah, I feel like vomiting when I see this old-fashioned way of writing about university dormitories 😒. When I was not in college, I didn't say anything. After I got to college, I realized that the author's writing was really nonsense, and he also had dormitory friendships. In our country, I just want to say that it is basically impossible. There is also the issue of dormitory numbers. There are at least tens of thousands of people in a university, and there are basically more than a dozen dormitory buildings. How can it be possible to just have a dormitory number?

Either be a scumbag to the end, or have a single female lead. This kind of heroine's personality is so different, and the hero still wants to play pure love, but also wants to play in the harem, which is disgusting. It's like being a pawn and wanting to build a memorial arch. I read a book of this type before, with two heroines, and the supporting groups of the two heroines almost started to fight. Although they both gave birth to a baby in the end, what can they do if they are completely different from each other? Their personalities obviously cannot tolerate betrayal.

Oh my god, this is not going to be a single female protagonist. . . If there is a single female protagonist, there is no need to mention anything else. . .

Yu Jie

Fortunately, I gave up early, otherwise I would have been poisoned. I gave up directly from the chapter where I slept with the second female lead. The subsequent development was indeed not what I expected. This book with a single heroine is quite good, but with two heroines I was immediately persuaded to leave it.

After seeing over a hundred, I couldn't stand it anymore. There is a saying that pure love will definitely be much better than it is now. According to Chang Ge's character design, it will be good if the male protagonist is not stabbed to death.

How about this

This book is a sweet story about pure love. However, the protagonist is a minotaur. A minotaur also engages in pure love manipulation. Isn't this disgusting? And they also want to forcibly clean themselves up. For example, one paragraph reads: (System: The current tool cannot be forcibly untied. Either the tool will go bankrupt or the business will be successful). So the protagonist started to operate, and the perspective given to the readers is: It's not that I want to be a scumbag, but the system allows him to continue to be scumbag. The protagonist himself is innocent. Damn, you are an LSP, and you are worthy of being pure and sweet?

This is Brother Yao

How is this Brother Yao?

Xu Xiaoxiu

The writing is okay, the characters are good, the plot is crappy, and the pacing is terrible. A clean and tidy female CEO who has made tens of millions of dollars in three years goes home with a stranger. After meeting her for a few times, she wants to be taken care of... Her mother lives in a small house and gives away 5 million... A cool school beauty who was pure and innocent during college wants to take the initiative to ask the protagonist to take care of her... Not to mention mindless slaps in the face like birthday parties. The game scenes and a subset of online scenes are also very slow. It makes people feel that the growth of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is incredible, and there are too many jumps between plots... Reality does not require logic, but novels do, otherwise there will be drama. Actually, I feel that the author is bound by his own settings. Because he wants to make money with the system, he needs to quickly conquer it. But what if the protagonist doesn't have that ability? The heroine had no choice but to give it away. If you don't write anti-routine articles, it may be much better to write ordinary daily articles.

I hope the author will persevere. The initial idea does not have to cater to the readers. Of course, the ending must be good. Here are some poisonous points from the reader's perspective. First, Brother Yao found out that he had been betrayed, and it was no longer meaningful for the male protagonist to stalk him. If it were forcibly rounded out, it would seriously affect the impression of the entire book. Secondly, I noticed that the plot of being discovered by Brother Yao seemed to lack foreshadowing, and it was very sudden. Once you enter the Shura field, it is hell-level, and it is really difficult. Moreover, this period is when Brother Yao's emotional line is about to break through. I personally think that the plot is handled improperly. The third is with Xu Yunxiu. If we don't fast forward, the plot should be about confirming the relationship with Brother Yao, and then thinking about what's in the pot after seeing what's in the bowl. This is the way of a scumbag. But it's fast forward, and Brother Yao also knows it. Real love is definitely not stalking, which is disgusting. But if you don't act at this time, you may lose Brother Yao. Therefore, on the premise of respecting both parties, it is crucial to seek forgiveness from Brother Yao. This is also the most poisonous part in my opinion. A responsible scumbag is better than an irresponsible scumbag, right? Although they are all scum! Finally, I hope the author can see it. The above is just my humble opinion. I hope it can serve as a starting point. Thanks

You don't have to write if you don't want to. Updating every day is like squeezing out toothpaste. Can you take a break and write well📖?

Alas, I still want to believe the author. But you can't live without a little bit of news. If tj really wants to say the cleanup, everyone will still understand. I believe I'm not the only one who supports the author greatly. Come on! 🥺🥺

To be honest, if the author corrects the previous poisonous points, the number of readers will at least double. If he insists on insisting on his own way, the novel is written for everyone to read and discuss together. If such a big poisonous point is not corrected, it will be a big problem. The character of Brother Yao is so good, the only selling point of this book, the rest is just like that. There are not many people who write similar articles. This kind of article is not about who is better, but who makes fewer mistakes. Things like class reunions and the constant borrowing of money are very big traps. There are hundreds of books that have died in them. Previous people have proven that it is a big trap. If you still insist on jumping down, isn't this looking for death? If the book is well written, no one will praise it, but if it is not well written, many people will abandon the book. If you are at a disadvantage, you have to hit the wall. There is no need to step into such a big trap in order to reflect the personality. The most taboo thing in novels is the brainless villain. This trick can send away all bookworms with more than 600 hours (over 16 years old).

Sure enough, the author can't handle this kind of writing.

It has been three or four years since I graduated from high school. I just had some free time in college and suddenly thought of this book. Now that I think about it, the author should really 4️⃣