Draw the Bright Moon

For the first book, I thought about it and decided to write about time travel. But I just want to borrow the ancient setting, and don't want to travel to the ancient dynasty. I hope everyone will like it. Also, if there are any typos, please let me know and I will humbly correct them. 😊

Not bad, I have a small suggestion, that is, your paragraph may have too much text, which seems a bit cumbersome. I suggest it be shorter. Of course, it depends on your habits. You can listen to it or not.

Created a Huishu Mingyue reader group: 1051799116. Welcome everyone to continue to follow and support. 🤝

I changed my name. The previous name was difficult to understand. This is simpler.

The beginning of the article still feels a bit delayed, and what I want to talk about is too late There are also some small problems with the paragraphing.

Believe in yourself, the early stage of a good story is also very important, and I can accept all the foreshadowing. A popular work caters to readers, but why can't a good work choose readers? The most important thing is, don't cut it. For now, I will keep chasing it. Come on!

Come on big 🙂

Invested, no big issues at the moment other than the paragraph score. The plot hasn't unfolded yet, I'll take a look again

It is very disadvantageous to write online articles using physical writing. Of course, new authors are inevitable. In fact, it can be regarded as a writing practice work. If you really want to write online articles, try to change your writing style and learn how to write. What does the author intend to write in this book? If you have a specific classification in mind, there is a direction to study, such as similar masters and classic works. If you don't plan to continue writing online articles in the future, you can write as you like and practice writing article copy instead.

What is this male video? My female channel recommendation votes are all moldy

Please don't invest in this book! Because I heard a lot of people say that the style of this book is more like a physical book, I reflected on it and it seems to be a little bit different. Although I don't know what a physical book is like, everyone said that there must be something wrong with it. Therefore, there is no hope of signing the contract! Don't waste your investment opportunities! But even though I haven't signed a contract, I will still slowly write and update it, but I feel a little bit embarrassed about having to invest. Haha, I pinned it to the top, I hope readers who are lucky enough to encounter this book can read it!