Hogwarts: the Book of Laws

Give me a suggestion When fighting, don't always appear to be evenly matched and then kill in the end. Really, although the protagonist is very strong, he doesn't show it at all when fighting. To put it simply, he doesn't have a strong character. Looking at the original work, when Voldemort appears, he is basically an instant kill, and everyone else is afraid or something. The protagonist appears and is looked down upon or something. There are also 10 blood servants. When the first one awakened, he secretly read a book in the library of the protagonist's home. It shouldn't be written like this, it makes the protagonist very stupid. I don't know why these 10 blood servants didn't sign slave contracts, so I just let them stay in the manor. I thought there was someone watching, but it turns out there wasn't. Someone actually went to the library to learn magic secretly. Also, the protagonist should not always feel annoyed and have no idea why he is annoyed. Don't always have people touching the protagonist's tent. It will make the protagonist look stupid and get beaten up at the door of his house every day. Also, there needs to be a power ranking, as it doesn't reflect the protagonist's strength at all.

Slytherin! ? It's better to abandon the book!

If there is a situation in a novel where the heroine is scolded by the readers, the fault is never the heroine, but the author's writing style that is too crotch 😜 If a veteran writer can be made to hate harem novels, it can only mean that the creator's level has reached a certain level.

In Chapters 104 and 105, the protagonist goes to the house of a werewolf who lives in seclusion. The werewolf wants to drive the protagonist away, but the protagonist insists on leaving, which makes the werewolf angry and kills the werewolf backhand. If you can read these two chapters, continue reading. If you can't, leave as soon as possible.

Hermione's writing is very good. Two lonely people suddenly have support, and they are both worried about each other. I don't think there is anything wrong?

The book is still well written, the story and writing are very good, but the interaction with Hermione is really... I really can't like Hermione, there is something wrong with her thinking (personal opinion), I'm sick of it, I can't stand it

The protagonist is just a bitch. Everyone he saw before knew not to scream and ran away. However, on the same day, when he met the second group of people, the protagonist actually screamed to attract their attention. His IQ was so hopeless that even golden fingers could not save him. It grosses me out. Slipping away. Shennong is dead.

I feel like Hermione's plot brings down the tone of the entire book! It was quite enjoyable to watch at first, but when it came to Hermione's plot, I wanted to jump to another chapter, which was very uncomfortable! 🤫🤫🤫

The biggest flaw of this book is not the heroine Hermione, the biggest flaw is that the author starts to eat up the settings every two or three pictures.

I hope I won't become the dark wind. As I get older, it's heart-wrenching to see the dark wind.

They are all poisonous points, basically in every chapter. I wonder how some comments were generated?

The emotional line is too weak, the trust is inexplicable, is the protagonist an adolescent child? It is completely inconsistent with the image he created before. Does a decisive boss have to be an emotional idiot? No matter how talented Hermione is, she is still just a child now. Moreover, if you are in heat with a child or something, after being trained as a subordinate for a few years, you will be mature in all aspects, so why not accept it?

Sorry, sorry, it slipped away. The setting is a bit interesting, but when Hermione comes out, the protagonist and nm are crazy. Is it schizophrenia? If your temperament is severely split, if you are sick, seek treatment as soon as possible →_→

Another book with a good idea but ruined by the writing. I have to say that the subject matter of this book is very attractive, but the author is obviously not experienced enough. The logic of the whole text is confusing, and there are many inconsistencies. The writing style is also poor. The characters in the book have contradictory personalities and chaotic behaviors. The protagonist is completely schizophrenic. Hermione's writing ruins the three views and seriously lowers her intelligence.

The protagonist's ideas, life history and personality are completely incompatible with Hermione. These two people should not be together at all. Even if they are together temporarily, they will definitely be like Dumbledore and Grindelwald. The final outcome will be to kill each other and fall in love with each other as memories. If you want to force them to be together, you can only change one party, or gradually get along and find a balance point. But if you want the protagonist (or Hermione) to change his personality later, how to change it? Change the protagonist to persuade fans to quit the book, and change Hermione to persuade fans of the original book to quit 😰 The protagonist before Hermione appears The decision is still in line with the character. Hermione seems to be a different person as soon as she comes out (subway, old man, mobile phone) and the description in some places has gone beyond the scope of friendship. Author, please wake up and don't force the protagonist to become an LSP just because you are an LSP. It is illegal to smelt copper. Besides, the author only likes the skin of Emma Watson, not Hermione at all 😆 Although I think Hermione as the heroine is a poisonous point, I do not reject books with Hermione as the heroine. The two people must at least be compatible, otherwise what is the good taste of a bunch of industrial saccharine. When two people are together, they are either intellectually addictive or ambiguous. They are not developed yet and are so ambiguous 🤔 Goldfinger is still a bit interesting, and the plot at the beginning is also interesting. Except for the heroine, everything else is okay.

Who still remembers the protagonist's Golden Finger Book of All Laws? He hasn't appeared since he entered Hogwarts. Why are you writing this? Just to show off before entering school?

Author, if you want to attract readers, please at least revise the first few chapters. In the first chapter, I was poisoned by your dry writing and the incredible IQ of the characters. Who the heroine is is really not a black point, but what is reflected in the first chapter really makes readers dare not fall in love.

The only flaw of this book is that Hermione, Hermione, Hermione, two-thirds of the content are all daily dog ​​food between him and Hermione. Hermione is the heroine, but not the heroine. If I had known it was a love story, I would not have wasted my time. It would be better to rename it Harry Potter: Hermione, because the Book of All Laws has no use or description. It completely made me read the book normally from the beginning. I saw that I was tired of Hermione, she appeared too many!

It's really perverted for an adult to molest an eleven-year-old girl. It's still not as good as the heroine. Ever since I met Hermione, the tone of the whole book has dropped, and it's extremely embarrassing.

The beginning is okay, but when the protagonist meets Hermione, he acts like a bitch and becomes a licker. I can't stand it.

It's extremely poisonous, trust me, don't try it

Avada Kedavra is infinitely magnifying its dark side, which is full of killing. A child of just a few years old wants to use it. Do you want to eat shit?

I would like to ask what else the golden finger is used for. How good it was at the beginning. What is it written now?

The author writes in the first chapter that the poor people in the British capital were so hungry that they ate people in 1987. If you can accept it, continue reading.

The beginning of this book is good, Goldfinger is not too outrageous, but the main heroine is Hermione, and the writing becomes worse and worse after meeting Hermione. It is not as interesting as the main character at the beginning, and the main character actually starts running around haha. I looked at the catalog, and after the second grade, I don't want to read it at all. I came to read the Harry Potter fandom, not to see the main character's adventures in the wizarding world. Some people may like to see the main character running around, but I believe that many people who don't like it will follow.

Poro: I know that the protagonist has a great aura at the beginning and uses various magic to kill people. Hey, I just pretended not to know that there are people in the Muggle world who abuse trouble and kill people. I know who it is, but I just won't catch him.

The Golden Triangle, if it really can't survive even one episode in reality. Impulsive, arrogant, reckless. Look at Dumbledore's spellcasting in the duel with Voldemort, and look at how these idiots can live and how they deserve to live. The heroine Hermione is also something I personally dislike. It is undeniable that the actor Emma's factor is too great. Anyway, I don't think there's anything good about Emma 🤤

Goldfinger has no sense of existence, it would be better if there was no such thing in the first place

Learn a counterspell from the Book of All Laws

Do you want to use the system of Throne of the End of Law? That one is different! , The difference is quite big. But that system is indeed much more complete and integrated than your current one. Your current protagonist always feels a bit weird, so you'd better straighten it out.