Ji Tiandao

What kind of crap is written! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Second, let's stew pork ribs to worship heaven 🙂

It's such a short day and I still want someone to watch, gkd🔪😏

The setting does not enlarge the crotch. The writing is not very good. Many dialogues in the plot seem like a small theater. A very embarrassing little theater. It is recommended that the author practice basic writing first. . . . .

The writing is too procrastinating and has too much paraphrase. Is this moment necessary three times? Is it a progression or a transition? No meaning

Well, to be honest, the setting is actually pretty good. But don't write uncommon characters. Is the first character of your book title pronounced "ji"? Also, the names in the article are very difficult to pronounce, and the sense of immersion suddenly dropped. There are still golden fingers, which are worthy of rewards, but be careful not to start slowly, otherwise if the plot is not exciting, you will be abandoned directly. Today's readers will not give you dozens of chapters of foreshadowing.

Ah ah ah why can't I vote? I'm trying to gain experience and get votes. Thank you for the votes you gave me, Nai Ni Let's work together to update the article~

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