My Shadow Can Evolve

The hundredth chapter of this book is a watershed. Before the hundredth chapter, it was just a fairy grass. After the hundredth chapter, it became more and more poisonous. First, the character of the protagonist was established in the first hundred chapters. It collapsed after being threatened by a heroine who didn't have many scenes and I don't know if it was the heroine. Then the protagonist suddenly put away his pets. The poisonous dragon was said to be very powerful before. As a result, the protagonist If you mess around with it casually, you'll be more obedient than a dog, and there's more than one poisonous dragon. You'll also get a lot of pets later on. From the medicine garden onwards, the main character is basically as strong as a hundred and a dozen, and the shadow becomes less and less present. The whole book starts to sell sheep over others. Anyway, I couldn't hold on after seeing one hundred and forty, there are too many poisonous points.

There was a golden finger and he was beaten, but he didn't say a word if he didn't complain, and later he took the initiative to work hard. Even beating the protagonist himself felt that it had no impact. I don't think this is a question of whether to abuse or not, and whether to tolerate it or not. This writing is so mean... To put it bluntly, the shadow is the same as the suit. I suggest that you, the author, stop writing in a hurry. Go and play "Venom", "Iron Man", and "Spider-Man" dozens of times and take a good look at how people use the suit as a physical aid to withstand damage.

It's a pity that the story of The Queen Who Escaped fell apart, the supporting characters took over the spotlight, and the protagonist had zero improvement in more than ten chapters. If your rhythm is like this, then I suggest you just read this book as a eunuch. Now the chance of becoming popular is infinitely close to 0. These dozen chapters seem like torture. If you really want to write this book well, follow the example of a son-in-law and delete these dozen chapters and rewrite them. Delete or abbreviate all plots in your plan where the protagonist does not upgrade. Maybe there is still a way to save it. Of course, you can also open a new book directly. Strictly speaking, it would be better to open a new book directly. Various recommendations may be mixed in. Remember not to make this mistake next time. Originally, the few climaxes of the protagonist's escape have already attracted more and more people, but you succeeded in killing yourself 🙂 If you don't know how to write a long rhythm outline, I recommend you to search Zhihu for the article "Snowflake Outline is a Tool", which ranks first, and study it.

It's great, but I suggest the author pay attention to the fact that people can bully people when they awaken their abilities. Some people just abandon the book when they see this. For example, I almost didn't make it through.

I read your replies to other people, and I suddenly realized that you have a problem. You write novels to please the public, not to please yourself. If you just want to please yourself, why bother posting it on the website? Wouldn't it be nice to send it to a friend?

Really, it's ridiculous to have superpowers in the early stage and only want to kill people, but you don't have enough to eat and don't want to get some food. And you can control shadows. How can others see that you control shadows? Did anyone else see the protagonist's game controller? Why can you suspect the protagonist just by seeing the shadow? If you create a plug-in and the protagonist is always in an embarrassing situation, this is to persuade him to quit. And how can others confirm that it is a shadow when they see a shadow? A group of black things, and passers-by immediately guessed it was a shadow? Wouldn't the protagonist change into a black cat and a black mouse and pick up random things, and change into a common animal to protect himself in public? Wouldn't it be possible to transform into a cat in front of people and lure them over to mislead them and then run away? Anyway, the protagonist is too stupid and it's too tiring to watch.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt it was a bit forced. You can obviously find opportunities to kill lone people in the mines, then you will have food and ores!

This is a sadistic novel, at least for now, and it's not my cup of tea. It's a bit unbearable for me, but it's good for those who like to read a bit sadistic main text.

Since writing the book, I have had a bit of mixed feelings. Some people have been criticizing me in the comment area, calling me trash, telling me to stop writing, and so on. Most of them have been deleted by me. I have read them all, and there is no ban or anything. First of all, thank you for your comments. I agree with you, but for other things, I will not accept it if you criticize me. There are also eunuchs who cannot be eunuchs. There are no important factors, surprises, etc., And they will not be eunuchs casually. Only after signing the contract and writing a new book will there be progress. This is my opinion. As for food, some people say that I am weak and that my writing is not very good. I admit these problems, and just like my author's name, I am not acting, I am a real food. But I dare to say that I just want to say that I want to write better than all of you, not to mention anything lofty. This means that I can become famous, become a great god, earn a lot of royalties, etc. . I apologize to some readers in advance for disappointing you because of poor writing, but I can only hope that you will like the next one, and there is no way to change anything in this one. Once you write it, there is no way out. If you change some vocabulary and typos, it won't matter. Changing the plot will be very troublesome. If there are too many changes, the author will ban the book in the backend, and there will also be a problem of stopping updates. So if you make a mistake, you can only make one mistake to the end. I hope that the next book will make progress. As for books that are completely recognized by people, I don't think they exist. Not to mention that there are a lot of people in the comment section of the great masters who are complaining. Just look at the comments and you will know that some readers completely want me to go east, and some people want me to go west. That's it. . . . It will be difficult to handle. Therefore, what satisfies people is always only part of the book. I have mixed feelings, I want to say something but don't know how to say it, anyway. Thank you to those who came here to watch it. No matter you were poisoned by me halfway or you finished reading it, thank you anyway. In the end, I didn't act, I was a real person. I don't mean to be irritating, I don't mean to be poisonous. In fact, all my author accounts are like a veteran who has written more than 7 million words. It's really hard to control the rhythm and coherence. All I can say is do your best. 😞

Your start is too frustrating and has too many poisonous points. I didn't even have enough to eat and kept getting into trouble. Give you a start. The shadow can move freely and can change at will. First it turns into a spike to kill people, then it turns into a cat and bites a few bites, and then it turns into a pretend escape in front of people. Who would suspect that it has the ability to kill people at this time? Isn't the protagonist hungry? How about turning into a cat and mouse to steal some food? What about killing the guards, causing chaos, and encouraging the slaves to defect? Look away from the protagonist, kill people to create chaos, use shadows to set fire, the slaves defect, and the protagonist takes the opportunity to escape, so that others will not stare at you and chase you alone. Isn't this a perfect start? Is it much worse than being chased after you don't have enough to eat?

My writing skills are not strong enough and I am half-assed. I say I am looking for a chance to escape but in the end there is no development at all. I suffer from being beaten and I feel like a doormat if I don't fight or fight. Do you still want grades when you write like this? Stop dreaming

I feel that the biggest incongruity of this book is that the protagonist is too cowardly. Among thousands of slaves, only the one who receives food is chosen. If he dies and is lost, will someone investigate specifically? It is not realistic, and the evolved shadow of the protagonist can be independent on its own, just like the clone. So why can't the clone kill people or cause riots? Even if it is weak in the early stage, it is not the reason for being insulted by others. It cannot attract attention. The author may have thought that if no one goes to collect the food after becoming the dormitory leader, no one will be found out, but it is like you found a group of ants and then found a few queens to observe life. Even if you find that the queen is missing the next day, will you look for it again? Such slaves are as dispensable as ants.

Readers definitely don't like the fact that the protagonist is as useless as reality and wants to do all the things they dare not do and cannot do. It's like punching dudes, stepping on gangsters, having dozens of younger brothers go out, and everyone has to call them boss. Or carry out assassinations everywhere and control people's lives.

I just have a question! How can people who are exploited and exploited in every way at the beginning and who are hungry every day have so much energy to cause trouble? It's so awesome to make something out of nothing.

Shadow abilities should have these, right? The fog turns into a ball of black mist, and others can't hit you. Shadows can be used as means of transportation, turning into cars, bicycles, boats, horses, etc. Author, have you seen the kite plan in Three-Body Problem? Just turn the shadow into a nano-scale thread and spin around the enemy a few times. Just spin it quickly and he will be dead. And the shadow can be used as armor, just like Iron Man's armor. It is attached to one's body and can also allow the shadow to simulate the hunting of animals by tigers, bears, wolves and other beasts. By the way, you can let him simulate Spider-Man's ability to spin silk. In fact, there are many functions, just think about it yourself! Author, didn't you say that? If this shadow becomes bigger, its strength will become weaker, so I have a solution. Split into two small shadows equal to one shadow, then there is no problem. The ability of two shadows is stronger than that of one shadow, and it is great to work as a team! The author, think about it carefully, this shadow is very awesome, it depends on whether you can develop it.

Shapiwen, if you like the protagonist who is a loser and a loser, you can watch it.

It seems that the protagonist has not really used this shadow ability at all. Why can't he use such a perverted ability? Let me teach you! Compress the shadow to an extremely small size. If it can be compressed to the nanometer level, it would be even better. Just let the shadow enter the body of a living creature and expand instantly.

It felt okay at the beginning, but since I escaped from the mine, it has collapsed. I have a golden finger, and the performance has been garbage. It has been almost 100 chapters now, and the protagonist is still garbage.

When you are drunk, you have to light a fire and grill the fish on the way to escape. Will you die if you eat it raw? Are rats not allowed to be eaten in the mines? If you can't eat, just write it down and you'll have to be hungry.

I don't have anything to say, just one sentence: Did you collect the fee too early? Everyone else has 100, but you only have 70 left.

Author, I really want to ask you, have you read the novel? People who read novels just want to be happy. Let's not talk about whether it's fun or not. Anyway, in the early, middle and late stages, I still feel like that. Alas.

It's okay! I've read Chapter 80. Is it possible to harvest leeks reasonably? It's so reckless that the author will die faster.

I think basically all time travelers want to return to Earth, regardless of whether they have power or not. What's the use of returning to Earth if you don't have the strength? What's the use of having the power to return to Earth? For the powerful, it is completely possible to concretize an earth environment to deal with the protagonist, a mortal who has turned into earth for a hundred years, or the memory is not time travel at all but changed at will. Then is there any point in going back? So it is not time travel that is the protagonist, nor is it the ability of the time traveler, the mind, and the insight. Other worlds are just as powerful, but the time traveler has one more memory than others, and is not as good as the reborn person. It is meaningless not to return to the earth. Strength is the fundamental

To be honest, this book is not very good. It has a lot of flaws. There is a setting problem. The author insists on being the dormitory leader according to his own understanding. I can't help it. But think about your middle school and high school. Not all bosses speak according to body type. The most important thing is to look at ruthlessness. At least that was the case in our middle school at that time. At that time, my deskmate was the boss of the biggest gang in our grade. When I was young, I was also in another circle. Really, size and strength are one aspect, but it is more about ruthlessness. If you dare to be ruthless in a fight, you will be powerful. You are relatively thin, but if you dare to use white knives in and out red knives to make others afraid of you, you will be the senior in your grade. The ones I know who are more powerful in the grade are generally average in size, and the rest are average in size, and they are not considered to be the best in size and strength.

When writing a book, you still need to tell the story clearly and smoothly, so that readers can understand and be fascinated by it, rather than the author replying to the reader to explain the rationality of the plot. This is a bit putting the cart before the horse.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is like a mouse, only evil, and the fights are basically instant kills, which is similar to watching Invincible novels, but not as exciting.

When one person achieves enlightenment, the whole universe is buried with him! !

Doesn't the author update every day? It's very interesting. Come on.

It's not too toxic, but it's not that exciting either. It's a bit boring.

As a dark novel, it's not bad. It has no principles and no bottom line, but the last two chapters are very poisonous. It's back to Blue Star!