My Shadow Can Evolve

There was a golden finger and he was beaten, but he didn't say a word if he didn't complain, and later he took the initiative to work hard. Even beating the protagonist himself felt that it had no impact. I don't think this is a question of whether to abuse or not, and whether to tolerate it or not. This writing is so mean... To put it bluntly, the shadow is the same as the suit. I suggest that you, the author, stop writing in a hurry. Go and play "Venom", "Iron Man", and "Spider-Man" dozens of times and take a good look at how people use the suit as a physical aid to withstand damage.

It's a pity that the story of The Queen Who Escaped fell apart, the supporting characters took over the spotlight, and the protagonist had zero improvement in more than ten chapters. If your rhythm is like this, then I suggest you just read this book as a eunuch. Now the chance of becoming popular is infinitely close to 0. These dozen chapters seem like torture. If you really want to write this book well, follow the example of a son-in-law and delete these dozen chapters and rewrite them. Delete or abbreviate all plots in your plan where the protagonist does not upgrade. Maybe there is still a way to save it. Of course, you can also open a new book directly. Strictly speaking, it would be better to open a new book directly. Various recommendations may be mixed in. Remember not to make this mistake next time. Originally, the few climaxes of the protagonist's escape have already attracted more and more people, but you succeeded in killing yourself 🙂 If you don't know how to write a long rhythm outline, I recommend you to search Zhihu for the article "Snowflake Outline is a Tool", which ranks first, and study it.

It's great, but I suggest the author pay attention to the fact that people can bully people when they awaken their abilities. Some people just abandon the book when they see this. For example, I almost didn't make it through.

I read your replies to other people, and I suddenly realized that you have a problem. You write novels to please the public, not to please yourself. If you just want to please yourself, why bother posting it on the website? Wouldn't it be nice to send it to a friend?

After reading the first few chapters, I felt it was a bit forced. You can obviously find opportunities to kill lone people in the mines, then you will have food and ores!

Since writing the book, I have had a bit of mixed feelings. Some people have been criticizing me in the comment area, calling me trash, telling me to stop writing, and so on. Most of them have been deleted by me. I have read them all, and there is no ban or anything. First of all, thank you for your comments. I agree with you, but for other things, I will not accept it if you criticize me. There are also eunuchs who cannot be eunuchs. There are no important factors, surprises, etc., And they will not be eunuchs casually. Only after signing the contract and writing a new book will there be progress. This is my opinion. As for food, some people say that I am weak and that my writing is not very good. I admit these problems, and just like my author's name, I am not acting, I am a real food. But I dare to say that I just want to say that I want to write better than all of you, not to mention anything lofty. This means that I can become famous, become a great god, earn a lot of royalties, etc. . I apologize to some readers in advance for disappointing you because of poor writing, but I can only hope that you will like the next one, and there is no way to change anything in this one. Once you write it, there is no way out. If you change some vocabulary and typos, it won't matter. Changing the plot will be very troublesome. If there are too many changes, the author will ban the book in the backend, and there will also be a problem of stopping updates. So if you make a mistake, you can only make one mistake to the end. I hope that the next book will make progress. As for books that are completely recognized by people, I don't think they exist. Not to mention that there are a lot of people in the comment section of the great masters who are complaining. Just look at the comments and you will know that some readers completely want me to go east, and some people want me to go west. That's it. . . . It will be difficult to handle. Therefore, what satisfies people is always only part of the book. I have mixed feelings, I want to say something but don't know how to say it, anyway. Thank you to those who came here to watch it. No matter you were poisoned by me halfway or you finished reading it, thank you anyway. In the end, I didn't act, I was a real person. I don't mean to be irritating, I don't mean to be poisonous. In fact, all my author accounts are like a veteran who has written more than 7 million words. It's really hard to control the rhythm and coherence. All I can say is do your best. 😞

Really, it's ridiculous to have superpowers in the early stage and only want to kill people, but you don't have enough to eat and don't want to get some food. And you can control shadows. How can others see that you control shadows? Did anyone else see the protagonist's game controller? Why can you suspect the protagonist just by seeing the shadow? If you create a plug-in and the protagonist is always in an embarrassing situation, this is to persuade him to quit. And how can others confirm that it is a shadow when they see a shadow? A group of black things, and passers-by immediately guessed it was a shadow? Wouldn't the protagonist change into a black cat and a black mouse and pick up random things, and change into a common animal to protect himself in public? Wouldn't it be possible to transform into a cat in front of people and lure them over to mislead them and then run away? Anyway, the protagonist is too stupid and it's too tiring to watch.

This is a sadistic novel, at least for now, and it's not my cup of tea. It's a bit unbearable for me, but it's good for those who like to read a bit sadistic main text.

Your start is too frustrating and has too many poisonous points. I didn't even have enough to eat and kept getting into trouble. Give you a start. The shadow can move freely and can change at will. First it turns into a spike to kill people, then it turns into a cat and bites a few bites, and then it turns into a pretend escape in front of people. Who would suspect that it has the ability to kill people at this time? Isn't the protagonist hungry? How about turning into a cat and mouse to steal some food? What about killing the guards, causing chaos, and encouraging the slaves to defect? Look away from the protagonist, kill people to create chaos, use shadows to set fire, the slaves defect, and the protagonist takes the opportunity to escape, so that others will not stare at you and chase you alone. Isn't this a perfect start? Is it much worse than being chased after you don't have enough to eat?

My writing skills are not strong enough and I am half-assed. I say I am looking for a chance to escape but in the end there is no development at all. I suffer from being beaten and I feel like a doormat if I don't fight or fight. Do you still want grades when you write like this? Stop dreaming