I Have a Ninja Game

It was okay to read at first, but as I wrote it, the logic became confusing.         There are still a lot of chapters where the protagonist gets confused, and the more he writes, the worse he becomes.

The main thing is that I can't accept the fact that the characters are summoned to reality.

It's fine if you write slowly, but can you update it first?

How should I put it? I feel like a lot of the stuff I wrote is boring.

I just saw the published chapter. I am a bookworm of 12 years now and I think it's okay.

Ninjutsu? Haha, but some low-grade things, one or two are still regarded as treasures. Is there any ninjutsu written in Naruto? Sharingan, Byakugan, etc. Are all pupil techniques and blood. The wooden shield sounds nice, but it is also blood. No matter how the Hokage brags, blood is supreme. Without a complete system, how can it be stronger than the source of blood? Don't talk about the eight gates, wasteland and the like. The eight gates are purely physical skills. You don't dare to use them if you don't have any body. The roots of wasteland are pokes. The more advanced world has the underworld. How dare you use it without fear of death?

It's as plain as water, calm, and basically doesn't feel anything when you look at it.

😅 After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I don't know what the pig's feet are doing!

There's too much nonsense. Every time I do something, I have to read one or two chapters of bilibili. If there were less, I wouldn't be so into it.

It's too complicated to write, it's a mess, it's a different world, add a game space, and add a system