I Have a Ninja Game

It was okay to read at first, but as I wrote it, the logic became confusing.              ，，， There are still a lot of chapters where the protagonist gets confused, and the more he writes, the worse he becomes.

The main thing is that I can't accept the fact that the characters are summoned to reality.

It's fine if you write slowly, but can you update it first?

How should I put it? I feel like a lot of the stuff I wrote is boring.

Ninjutsu? Haha, but some low-grade things, one or two are still regarded as treasures. Is there any ninjutsu written in Naruto? Sharingan, Byakugan, etc. Are all pupil techniques and blood. The wooden shield sounds nice, but it is also blood. No matter how the Hokage brags, blood is supreme. Without a complete system, how can it be stronger than the source of blood? Don't talk about the eight gates, wasteland and the like. The eight gates are purely physical skills. You don't dare to use them if you don't have any body. The roots of wasteland are pokes. The more advanced world has the underworld. How dare you use it without fear of death?

I just saw the published chapter. I am a bookworm of 12 years now and I think it's okay.

It's as plain as water, calm, and basically doesn't feel anything when you look at it.

There's too much nonsense. Every time I do something, I have to read one or two chapters of bilibili. If there were less, I wouldn't be so into it.

😅 After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I don't know what the pig's feet are doing!

It's too complicated to write, it's a mess, it's a different world, add a game space, and add a system

The previous style was very good, but after the update, the store was changed to that way, and half of the sense of expectation was lost. Maybe you are afraid that the protagonist's power will grow too fast and collapse, but when you think about it like this. It's already broken. I felt so happy to have changed this book, but now it seems too bland.

Don't appear to be a goddess. If you have a female character, you can slowly express it in words. Otherwise, the word "goddess" would be so embarrassing

This book has so few votes. I wonder if you have the confidence to write it down?

After reading the first chapter, I didn't want to read anymore. What a mess of settings. It's better to just use that kind of Naruto redemption system novel.

I feel like the author hasn't even graduated from junior high school. There are all kinds of grammatical errors and inappropriate word choice. Reading the book may be okay, but listening to the book is like listening to a fool telling a story.

The author gave me a boost and I will test the book. Don't worry about me because I have read a book about a smorgasbord of dishes. My physique is guaranteed.

It's boring, there are so many scenes of passers-by

Could the author write more? You only have over 710,000 words in more than 300 photos, which is too little.

Work hard slowly, progress does not come in one step, but is accumulated bit by bit, and it will gradually get better.

Write slowly, don't care about other people's opinions, just treat this book as practice, and the next book will be better.

The beginning is well written, but in the middle, it gradually loses touch with reality. The campus plot disappears after the trip, and it directly confronts a large organization. The writing is also understated, and it is difficult to tell who is who. 250 Of the 400 chapters are mainly about the plot in the game. The real world of Naruto might be interesting. A ninja game also requires a lot of energy to write. I don't know if you are writing a game guide or a novel. The real world is so good. You can write whatever you want. Currently, there are only four people who can be famous in the real world. They are too far away from the main line. I hope you can write more realistic plots and your strength should not increase so fast. We don't think you are just one step ahead, but you are constantly in conflict with plot characters and plots. When necessary, improve your strength and pretend to be cool.

Happy New Year, author. In the new year, there will be new achievements, so you have to update quickly 😊

Since everyone has mentioned it, I won't say it anymore.

It was okay at first, but later on I kept recruiting the Nara clan, which looked tiring.

If you travel to Japan, you can still watch it, but China has ninjutsu, which is too weak.