The Fate Witch of Konoha

Destroying Konoha in front of the weasel and killing his brother is the best revenge.

It's a good setting, but it doesn't have the feeling of revenge and darkness. The behavior should be more extreme and crazy, and the psychology should be more deep and calculating. For example, he revealed his hatred for Itachi, showed off his crazy and hard training, revealed some information about the opening of the Mangekyou Sharingan, kept it crazy and extreme, and made the third generation think that the protagonist can be cultivated as one of the weapons against Itachi. There is also Sasuke, oppression may be more useful than warmth! It's just your own opinion, don't argue, thank you very much!

If you're single, you're single. Don't get into those things that you don't have. It's really disgusting to give Sasuke a baby after you get it.

The writing is okay, keep up the good work, I just hope it won't be like those novels in the future, where no famous person is killed, and there are a lot of bonds, and you have to think twice before doing things.

The creativity of this book is very good, but the thinking is too different. After reading Chapter 49, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It's okay to write a female protagonist if you want, and it's okay to treat other people as tools, but I really can't stand the idea of ​​giving a girl who I have had close contact with to someone else. Some Tauren fans may think it's great, but I really can't accept it. Just order and delete the book and leave, otherwise it will only make me feel entangled\ (_o)/.

After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist would betray Konoha! Unfortunately not!! Has the author ever thought about it? What qualifications do you have to stay in Konoha? What right do you have to prevent Danzo from killing you? Sasuke is protected by Itachi in Konoha! What does the protagonist have? The fact that you didn't die on the night of genocide means your eyes were opened... Maybe it was a kaleidoscope? Do you think Danzo would think so! And come to dig out your eyes?

I want to spray all the people in this world who give girls away. Giving away girls is the most disgusting. Giving away girls when you are married is disgusting.

I don't understand why a bunch of people are saying not to kill Sasuke, and I don't understand your thoughts. Sasuke is not a child, nor is he the only remaining member of his race. He is the enemy's brother! I don't understand how you can still treat your brother normally just because he is a child. Let alone a child, even the whole family will be killed. Those are not innocent people, they are the whole family of enemies.

I couldn't understand it at first. Xiao Li's character design was OOC because Sasuke was powerful and restrained his physical skills. The protagonist was so powerful in the first year, but after four years of cheating, he basically didn't make any progress. Facing Orochimaru, he was reluctant to use the Kaleidoscope. He was beaten to death by the Orochi and still planted two strawberries. It was really useless. Is this also called a cheater?

Looking at the comments, it seems that giving away a girl is very poisonous. You can leave it alone if you are single. If you insist on giving a man, you underestimate the possessiveness of men. I may not like women, but you can't give them to others -_-||