I Share the Blood Bar with the School Beauty

"Beatrice, the praiser of God. Why don't you help the one who loves you and is extraordinary for you?" - "Divine Comedy·Hell" When we are young, at that age when love begins, each of us will meet a "she" who can impress us deeply. At that moment, the spirit of life hidden deep in my heart began to tremble. Yes, you fell in love with her, and even though you have come into contact with her thousands of times later, deep down in your heart you still cannot forget this initial emotion, and this experience will be something you will never forget. The hero and heroine in the novel, from the beginning of one's fanatical pursuit and the other's crazy escape, to being able to fall in love with each other later on. From being forced to come together at first to truly loving each other later, this is a long and wonderful process. The author uses the supernatural phenomenon of "symbiosis" to provide a different cause for the love between the male and female protagonists. They can share each other's happiness with each other, and they can also share each other's pain with each other. Whether they are poor or rich, sick or healthy, they can face it together. However, while "symbiotic", they also have to face pain and troubles, as well as all kinds of troubles that come one after another. During this long process, they grew up together and spent the rest of their lives hand in hand. Perhaps, "symbiosis" should be a curse that deprives others of their freedom, but this is more like a divine blessing. This is a gift from the gods, not a curse from the evil ones. Personally speaking, I actually sympathize with the male protagonist's experience. In fact, I have also had a similar experience. I once fell madly in love with a girl, became passionate and obsessed with her, but what I got in exchange was the other person's indifference and avoidance. Just like the beautiful love tragedy between Apollo and Daphne in the poet Ovid's "Metamorphoses". She carries all my happiness and beauty in my heart and I will never forget it. After leaving her, I felt like I had lost my soul and became increasingly depressed. Like a terrible nightmare. It makes me completely unable to escape. Perhaps the same is true for the male protagonist's longing for the female protagonist in the story! I have also fantasized about "symbiosis" before, imagining the fusion of each other's souls, and in a sense, this work just satisfies my reverie. Love is so beautiful and desirable, but it also has too many regrets. On the one hand, love is an extremely irrational emotion. Just like in the story, Zhou Song, who was born in a big city and has a good family background, is crazy about pursuing a country girl from a remote village. True love can never be measured in terms of quantity and price. It is a completely emotional emotion in itself. We cannot know the specific reasons why boys love and pursue girls, because this reason itself is ineffable. Love makes people irrational or even unreasonable, making them unable to clearly see and analyze the situation. But on the other hand, love also brings countless beautiful memories to human beings. From the god Apollo's pursuit of Daphne to the human poet Dante's admiration for Beatrice, love stories have spread countless good stories for future generations. Love is no longer just for the reproduction of the race, but also has a deeper and transcendent connotation. This is both a desire and a gift that makes us humans unique. As we grow up, time has erased the recklessness and impulsiveness of our youth, and also diluted the original stubbornness and persistence. Maybe, in our hearts, we don't want to recall the past, or remember the "her" at that time. However, our pursuit of love and beauty has never stopped, and it should not stop. Time may dilute feelings and memories, but true love will transcend time and become eternal.

To be honest, I really couldn't stand it at first. I generally don't like to post book reviews, no matter whether they are good or bad, but I really couldn't hold back this book. As for the first part, the male protagonist's character really made me feel cheap and particularly disgusting. I think the heroine's reaction at the beginning was normal and reasonable, but after that, I couldn't understand the heroine's operation, and I felt that there was something wrong with the heroine's character. But in the follow-up, starting from the chapter where the male protagonist's personality begins to change, I think this is a highlight. But if people who have just entered look at the front, a large number of people may be persuaded to leave.

Why are there two main characters in the character sheet?

I've read Chapter 6 and can't read any further. This kind of life is not something I can aspire to. Let me briefly comment on it. A very good novel, the story in it is very real, as if it would really happen. But it's too real. I don't dare to watch the real thing. Even though I know that the lover will get married in the end, I still don't have the courage to watch it. Give it 100 points Above

I feel very tired, I'm reading anyway

What is dog licking? Love someone who is not worthy of love, love someone who does not love yourself. It is not difficult to understand the male protagonist's dog-licking mentality. He has a crush on a girl but cannot get close to her. Over time, the female protagonist's advantages, mixed with the male protagonist's thoughts about her, gradually leave reality and become a perfect intention in the heart. When you love a perfect person, and she does not love you, her shortcomings will not matter at all. The significance of symbiosis to the male protagonist is not that he can control the female protagonist, but that it gives him the opportunity to truly get close to his own goddess and change the image in his heart from a god to a human. The so-called bravery is to understand that the world is not beautiful and still live bravely. True love should also be able to love a person who is not so perfect. I have enlightened, Amitabha

Why do you picture a fat man to picture him with lots of meat? The best part is given to Fatty. I wonder if the author is Fatty, right? To be honest, it looked okay from the beginning. Fatty and Yu were so different from each other when they came out. You don't have to write about the harem, but there is really no need to write about it. Fatty, I really don't think there is anything that parents will like. It can't be sincerity or the merits of Buddhism.

I couldn't sleep at night and found this book. I first took a look at everyone's comments in the comment area. When I saw the comments like "Seven-year bookworm, this book is absolutely beautiful", I decided to read it seriously. After all, the title and label of the book all have supernatural powers. Especially when I saw several female characters in the characters, I was ecstatic as a lover of urban supernatural powers. After reading the first volume, I decided to share my thoughts after watching it (purely my personal opinion) The description of the heroine is very real, so real that it makes people feel a little uncomfortable, because I have met a materialistic green tea girl in real life, but luckily I didn't get into it too deeply. Of course, the female protagonist is definitely not materialistic, but when she was wandering between Du and the male protagonist, her thoughts were definitely not simple. She even said that if the male protagonist hadn't been bound to share life with her, the female protagonist would have accepted Du. Du's driving role in the plot can be replaced by other methods, but the interaction between Du and the heroine made some readers hate the heroine. Maybe the author did not have these thoughts when writing, but as a reader, the heroine is really not lovable. If Du was taken out of the plot, the first volume would not be so uncomfortable to read, but with Du, I feel that the male protagonist is just relying on a shared that makes the female protagonist unable to get rid of this lump of dog skin plaster. Originally I wanted to talk about the supporting characters first, but after thinking about it, I couldn't talk about the supporting characters without talking about the male lead, so I had to talk about the male lead first. The male protagonist did not grow up at all in the first volume. In the description of the first volume, he was just a loser. Maybe the author wanted to focus on describing the growth process of the protagonist, so he suppressed the male protagonist very hard at the beginning, but this intensified the discomfort and returned to the old topic. The male protagonist in the first volume was so useless that I thought he was kidnapping the female protagonist to gain every opportunity that was not his. The two female supporting characters also like the male protagonist in the first volume for no reason. It is difficult for me not to complain about this. The plot is really well written by the author. The climax of the plot from birth control pills to the hospital is intertwined. However, again, my understanding is that when the male protagonist does not love the female protagonist, the female protagonist will die. Is that true? Therefore, there were two situations where the female protagonist's condition worsened when the male protagonist achieved enlightenment. The end of the first volume seemed very sweet. The two of them settled their differences and kissed each other tightly. After reading it, I had to ask, "Why? Why are they together?" I didn't see the growth of the male protagonist. I only saw the female protagonist calling him to her side when she was about to die to make him change her mind. Can it be understood that the heroine discovers that she will die when the hero doesn't love her? Then the first volume can be replaced by one or two chapters: "The heroine discovered the shared secret between the two. In order to not be affected, she decided to tell the hero and become a couple with him to ensure that she would not be coerced by him." Right, maybe I thought too bad about the female protagonist, but the plot of her wandering between Du and the male protagonist had to make me think so. Don't talk to me about the plot behind it. You can't treat the first volume as a novel. I am not saying this to attack the author. I am just expressing my thoughts. I still admit the author's writing style. It is true that the plot makes me unbearable, but it is also true that the plot structure is good. I wish the author can write better in his new book, just let it go for a while before reading it.

Yu Panwang

Well, if you want to write a coming-of-age story, you don't need to make everyone look like nt. Taking each person individually can persuade a bunch of people to retreat and raise Gu.

I thought the plot was too bland. Ah, the lack of tension is that the protagonist is too ordinary, does he have special skills or something, and the whole plot focuses too much on the supporting characters, which made me very annoyed. In several chapters, the protagonist has very little role. The main reason is that I feel that the author failed to grasp the reader's mentality. I read novels to pursue spiritual pleasure. I am not here to read the story of another ordinary person as an ordinary person. This will make me have the urge not to open the book. In addition, the emotional lines of several people are too strange, and I feel a little uncomfortable with it. There are even kissing scenes in only a few chapters of meeting and acquaintance. I don't know what other friends think, but I think it is too strange. 🙂🙂 This is the first time I have written so much, so I contributed it to this author.

Finished reading part one. Although this novel is very poisonous, it is very addictive. I like every character in it. In fact, the real beneficiary of this bound symbiotic golden finger is the female protagonist, while the male protagonist is dragged down by the golden finger. The male protagonist lives in an apartment in Shanghai. He is handsome. He is originally a cheerful and good-natured person. Apart from being good-looking, the heroine really has nothing that is worthy of the male protagonist, especially her "brain". But isn't there something wrong with the male protagonist's mind? This is the kind of person I am talking about, but I am a beautiful woman, but I am a thief. Then I discovered that more or less every character that appeared in it was not normal. The author wants to use a group portrait approach to write about the growth experiences of these people. Come on, author, the writing is good. I hope I can post more candy in the future. I will read the dog food article after reading it for a while now to soothe my depressed mood.

I really like the setting of the female protagonist. I have a crush on the guy named Du, but because of symbiosis, I have to be with the male protagonist. It's really unlucky.

Although it's not a harem story, I think it's okay to add one or two more beauties to give the male protagonist more emotional experience and give him more choices. The more cruel the better, and then it's still Yueling after all, eh, it's perfect.

I happily followed it for four or five days. Let me share my feelings. 1: The first volume at the beginning is definitely a big cancer and can dissuade a large number of readers, because now is an era of overflowing cool novels. In the fast-paced life, people who read novels hope to release their "nature" in novels. And this article, from the beginning, gives people a great sense of reality and a sense of contempt for the cowardly male protagonist. (It's the feeling that I was abused in real life, and I was abused again in your novel, and the dog-licking is rampant) ps: Of course it's not that the logic is illogical, it's just. . There will be many people who don't like it. After reading Peiying 2: There is no foreshadowing (of course, it may be that I am relatively ignorant). In the second volume, it makes no sense to enter the dreamland, which makes people deviate from the topic. I don't know what the author is writing, at least let the readers know what they are reading. When I read the second volume, I can't tell what type of article this is. It's a mixed bag, reasoning, science fiction, and love. Romance, tomb robbery, and other types of stories all appeared, but I lost my direction immediately, and my interest dropped immediately because I no longer knew what the author wanted to express, and finally ended hastily But there is no lack of good aspects The context is clear, the plot flow, and the writing is good. At least there is no such thing as being wrong, and there are no major logical problems. When writing about scenery, the language is beautiful enough, and the response questions are relatively clear. Each foreshadowing and character portrayal are still very unique (in fact, the male protagonist can also be special in some aspects) Finally, I hope the author can see it, and I hope the author can spend every day happily, don't rush to finish the manuscript, and pay attention to his body. I will continue to read it every day when I have time, thank you!

It's been a while since I read a novel like this. I don't know what words to use to describe it. At first I thought it was a story about dog licking. The plot is not cliché, but it lacks a sense of reality. At least I don't have a sense of empathy. I won't comment on this factor here. I wanted to give up for a while, but I still read on patiently. In fact, I wanted to know whether there would be a twist in the plot later. From this perspective, this book has attracted me, although it requires a certain amount of tolerance. Until the later Symbiosis, I want to call it a game I played recently, Two Players, which is very similar, but I feel that the plot and description are not deep enough. I feel that the plot has touched human nature. Whether it is a dream or these small scenes in reality, there is a very strong sense of drama. I made it up in my own mind, in the ward, suspicion, and on the overpass. Tang looked at the two people below, which is very picturesque What really made me interested in pursuing it was starting from the dream at three o'clock in the morning. I felt that it started to have a hint of horror, which made me start to read seriously and start thinking. As of the chapters on the shelves, from suspected dog-licking articles, to connotative articles, to science fiction thriller elements, I am really interested. The other two pairs that seem to have no plot role, the interweaving of dreams and reality, and the impact of dreams on reality, I am looking forward to it!

It is very well written. Many people said that the golden three chapters are not good. I couldn't understand the first few chapters. I read them all day long. From yesterday to now, I think the best written chapters are actually the first few chapters (the first two volumes are actually very good). This book is not for the impatient, and the reason is that there is nothing difficult to understand at the beginning of the first line. The many language and emotional descriptions in the book show that the author has really worked hard to write this book. In fact, when I saw the title of this book yesterday, I thought it was just an ordinary cool novel. With the setting of a shared health bar, I read it with the attitude of giving it a try in an urban novel where the heroine does whatever she wants. Unexpectedly, my interest was piqued after reading a few chapters. Although the protagonist was very decadent at the beginning, and I didn't like it either. He was not easy to talk to any girl when he saw her, but I really liked the series of stories with the heroine that followed. The hero was decadent but the heroine did not give up on him (although it was a deal). She reminded the protagonist on the phone every day, which made the protagonist change. This kind of male-female duality I prefer the plot where the two parties work hard for a certain goal. This is what I think of love/love (although the heroine may not necessarily be sincere). Later, when the heroine becomes ill, the hero stays with her and helps each other when encountering difficulties, which makes the two people get closer and closer. I also feel very happy. The detailed description and psychological description of this book are really good. The delicate psychological description of the characters in the book made me think that the author was a woman. I always thought that ordinary male writers could not write this feeling. It was not until the later plots that I gradually realized that female writers should not write like this..., But I like it. The writing may be a bit messy, but the general meaning is this

I feel like this book is suitable for winning prizes and not suitable for distribution to the starting point.

6. This book is a literature about youth and illness. I spent a few cents to review it.

I stayed up late and read for two hours... I saw chapter 44 and then jumped to the latest chapter... I think online writing is very important in terms of tone and perspective Readers bring a's perspective to see b's story And bring b's story to see b's story There is a big difference between the two (the above and below are all personal opinions) What I understand about the web The writing is not obtrusive. The way to write group dramas is generally Write a first, then b, then c, and finally abc appears on the same stage An inappropriate example is Jin Yong's Tian Long Ba Bu Duan Yu in the first volume Xiao Feng in the middle volume Xuzhu in the second volume But he is one of the three protagonists and it doesn't look like a group drama I think the main problem now is... . The symbiotic growth of the a-line is very interesting The growth line of the old poisonous man and the little fat girl in the b-line feels very abrupt to me, like in the first episode of House and Girlfriend. I don't know what to do with this line... It's not interesting at all (compared with the a-line) The c-line is the growth line of Fat Brother and Yu Sister, and Yu Sister has an intersection with the a-line, but Fat Brother... I even feel that this character It's a lot redundant, and I feel like the perspective is not handled well... It's hard for our readers to take in the ending after they know that they are going to be together (this line is even more boring, and it is all supported by Sister Yu's character) Finally... This is indeed a novel that is more challenging for readers I will wait and see for now I hope the author can write interesting and exciting things in the future

To be honest, the first few chapters are really easy to watch. I started reading the chapters where the two people finally got married, and then went back to the first few chapters. Maybe the author thinks it is a necessary growth contrast, but it really doesn't work. The male protagonist was poorly portrayed in the first few chapters, and the growth through a female friend and a book is a bit baffling. How can I put it, the latest chapter is indeed a bit sweet, but most readers may not see it.

The emotional portrayal is relatively realistic, but the author has a foot fetish? He often describes what socks the heroine is wearing.

Because the silver boss came over, he raised his paws

Personally, I think symbiosis is a good plot development point, but when combined with gods and monsters, it's a bit nondescript (I can't say it can't be used at all, I just hope there can be less words). Like the climax in the church, it seemed to push the plot to its peak and fill in many pitfalls. However, the actual reading experience is not good. To put it bluntly, it is smelly and long. I would rather see the male protagonist grow during this period. However, more than a hundred chapters later, after the male protagonist and the female protagonist ended their symbiosis, they still looked like a FW, and their emotional handling was as childish as a child. I know that everyone has a spiral progress process, and people do not grow up overnight. But in the novel, I don't want to see this. Do you want to experience the real frustration again in an online article? To understand the difference between online novels and classics, the author has certain ambitions and wants to reflect a certain social phenomenon. However, online novels cannot allow the procrastination of the plot, the long-term powerlessness of the protagonist, and the random mixing of various elements. I think this is also the reason why the book's performance is not very good.

After reading the latest chapter, I looked again at the category of light novels and daily love affairs. I said that I believed in your ghost.

From the male protagonist, I feel like I see my 18-year-old self. His feelings are simple, bright and hot, and she is everything in life. I didn't deliberately remember her trivial personal preferences, I just thought of her in every ordinary moment of life. She likes to eat this. She said she wanted to eat this last time. Boys can really become very "childish", completely unguarded, and will take credit for trivial things. Please praise me. The female protagonist Yuan has a soft yet strong personality. I still believe that she still has true feelings for the male protagonist. She also tries to get along with the male protagonist, trying to change some of her own personalities and let go of some of her attitudes. The reason why the Moon God's daughter's bewitchment was effective was because she had doubts in her heart. After the symbiosis is resolved, parts of the self that were previously buried will rebound. Two people with incompatible personalities took jujube pills. In other words, the male protagonist still needs to grow up, and being childish is really annoying.

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I still don't know what type of book it is, but I always feel that except for a few flaws, it is a hit. Certified as a bookworm after seven years, except for my weak writing ability, my appreciation ability is still good.

Disclaimer: Fanfiction does not represent any plot development or plot setting. Fixing the hole: Yuan Yueling's perspective (it's easier to write than the male protagonist, weird) Chapter (1) The future can be expected If watching the distant mountains roaring in and roaring away on the train is a kind of enjoyment, then a journey that lasts almost a day will only make people feel tired. And I didn't. I was worried the whole way, worried about the broken dishes and my brother's crying that were still noisy in my mind when I got home. This happens every year, and this year will be no exception. The only thing that distracts me is the QQ messages from time to time. I really don't know why I was so soft-hearted and accepted him. Every day I am like a dog afraid of being abandoned by its owner, hugging the owner's trousers tightly and not daring to let go. Sigh~ "Be careful on the road, you are a girl..." "I have made so many trips back and forth by myself, it will be fine, don't worry (laughing and crying)." "The holiday is late this year, and as the New Year approaches, there will definitely be more scammers than before" "I know I'll be careful." ... "What are you going to do for lunch?" "The only way is to eat instant noodles." "It would be nice if the sharing was not cancelled." I just finished reading and the message was withdrawn. "It's all my fault, I should have prepared it long ago..." ... Just like this, we chatted one sentence after another until I arrived at the small town in Mongolia where I lived. Although this town is in Inner Mongolia, most people came here during the land reclamation period and finally settled down and became residents here. It also makes this small town in the rough Mongolian area have a bit of elegance south of the Great Wall. But since there are Mongolians and Hans in the town, daily ideological friction is inevitable. What I couldn't predict was that my parents would be one of them. After having a younger brother, the relationship between the parents took a turn for the worse. After enduring ten years of cold violence and eight years of quarrels, I finally escaped from this family with the best grades in school. But the winter and summer vacations every year in college have become my least favorite time. I had no choice but to prepare to flee again, this time to a foreign country and never come back. I did not notify anyone. I was carrying a small backpack by myself, as if I was just here for a trip and would leave in a few days. In fact, that was my plan. The only thing he didn't know was: I didn't go back so late this year, but it had been like this for the past three years. I didn't want to stay in that home any longer. It was completely dark when we got off the train. On the occasion of the New Year, the stall owner warmly greeted the customers, and each customer took several bags of stove-sacrificial candies with them when they left. "Daughter, you just came back from vacation?" "Yes, Uncle Zhou." "When are you leaving?" "On the eighth or ninth day of the first lunar month." "Is it so short?" "Yes, the school is strict, and there is nothing we can do about it. "It is good to be strict. Look at my kid, he is naughty all day long, it would be nice to have half as much work as you. Let's not talk about this anymore. I haven't seen anyone coming to your house to buy candies for the stove sacrifice. Here are a few bags, so take them. " "How can this be done... Sigh~ How much is it, I'll transfer it to you. " "No, no, I still have it at home. If you can't finish it and can't sell it, you'll have to put it away, so just take it. Hey, you. During those few days when you are at home, you can make up for my boy's homework. Is this possible? " I was speechless, so I had to take the plastic bag with the candy. When I got to the door of my house, I touched the flowerpot next to the door, but I didn't find the key.

Yesterday an author recommended this book, and I have read the latest chapter now. I feel that the author's writing is quite good, unlike people in the comment area and book circles who say it is poisonous. I have been reading novels for nearly ten years, and I can be considered an old bookworm. I may not be able to say clearly whether the book is good or not, and I can't tell what is good and what is not good. But my intuition will not lie to me. I think some people say that the male protagonist is not well portrayed and lacks a sense of empathy. I think that the character written by the author is actually quite real. He likes a girl and doesn't know how to express it. He silently follows others and only moves himself. When chatting with Fat Brother, he said that he realized that "confession is not a signal to start an attack but a clarion call for success" and "No one has ever told me this before." Who hasn't come from this time? Who is born to flirt with girls? What about bullshit? I haven't taken a Chinese class for several years, and my writing skills are only about this. I don't know what level this short composition is. Anyway, I think the author did a good job. Come on, author, although I don't have much money now, but if I subscribe to this thing, I will support you by watching the ads 🙂