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😅 The writing is too deliberate. The protagonist is a sinner. It is obvious that he can get rid of things once and for all and get moral points, but he deliberately ignores it, and not just once or twice. I have read more than forty chapters and deliberately ignored it several times without solving it. In the end, it is all troubles that I can't let go. Once or twice is nothing. The problem is that you do it again and again. Aren't you disgusting?

What a waste, this subject matter is so good, but the writing is sparse, and the character cannot be clear, whether he is cowardly or brave, you have written him as an idiot. When someone is being insulted, just that reaction, you say whether he is stupid or stupid, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why are you torturing me like this.

Is this the legendary incompetent rage? ? ? ? You talk about female killers, but you give up halfway? Chicken bar dropped? Withered?

It gradually deviates from the title and theme of the book. The length and setting of the ghosts and gods are not detailed. In addition to being invisible, the fights between ghosts and gods are all about slashing and energy release. The details are not included, and the battles are sparse! Now that I have switched to personal martial arts, I just write about martial arts in various ways. The article is quite long. I don't know if your martial arts in the later stage will have any bonus to the state of ghosts and gods? It is obvious that he is more powerful in the ghost state, but the extra points are all martial arts, which is quite incomprehensible. Also, the heart is gone at the beginning, but it can still supply blood, carry blood, and carry qi and blood to practice martial arts. How to fill this hole? According to the system, it is to keep you alive but not completely dead. You can change martial arts and secret martial arts into ghost and god skills. It is nothing more than a different use of energy conversion!

I feel like the main character's goal is not very clear. Isn't it good to just level up? Why do you still have to climb up to martial arts? I am a ghost and god, so I don't know what it's like to do this.

It's a waste of a good subject, I can't stand it any longer. I would like to give you some suggestions, and I hope the author can work harder. First, you can just write the system flow. This is completely different from the introduction. Secondly, the plot you wrote took so long to be laid out in just one city. Many of them are very stiff or too hard to put together. It feels like you suddenly thought of adding drama to the protagonist. Third, now that you have planned to be exposed, and people from the country come to your door, you actually resist. If you don't want to join, then just do it secretly, or if you want to take advantage of it, you can also try to join, and you can still mock them after the fight.

The events the protagonist encounters are all involving women, and they are approached in various ways. Turtle female doctor, the daughter of the Jia family. I'm done, I'm done

Hey, I originally thought I had found a good book in Shuhuang, but as soon as I started, I died. You said you slept with a female ghost. I thought you were still a human being, but you were exhausted and turned into a ghost. You can't even defeat a female ghost. You are talking about cheats. Open a new one. Isn't it just a gift package? I'll give you the person behind the ghost mission and tell you his last words and say a few words before handing over the ghost mission system to you. Excuse me, are you being used or not? You don't mind. I don't mind. You are the worst protagonist in the starting point.

Ghosts and gods are ghosts and gods, and they even go to practice martial arts. Advance to a higher level as soon as possible. Bring the ghost soldiers to rebuild the order of the underworld. Isn't it good to meet with the official? Do you want to become a human immortal in the end?

Stitch Monster, I read 100 chapters and plagiarized three novels. There are demons here, ghosts blow out the lamp, starting from the master of boxing.

Looking at the title of the book "The Strange One", I thought it was a fanfic of Mysterious Resurrection.

Can there not be so many swear words that affect the viewing experience?

The setting is good, but the plot is really not that good. It's an ordinary system-enhancing flow. After watching too much, it's really boring. The protagonist is set to be invincible as soon as he leaves the factory. The more I watch, the more bland it becomes. I gave up after Chapter 40. Enhanced flow, factory invincible, what else to write later, in order to highlight whether the protagonist has a super powerful BOSS for no reason, and then the protagonist's power is disconnected from the world, there are too many cases

I have been persuaded to quit. The subject matter is good, and the setting is okay. I just don't know why the author went all the way to practice martial arts. How to carry the blood when the heart is gone. The heart is the only way for the blood. The road of the human body is cut off. I won't write about it if I don't take it. There are a lot of Yin De all practicing martial arts. Why don't the author change the title of the book? I quit it.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a mysteriously resurrected ghost.

The protagonist is mentally retarded, why did he let that Buddha statue go even though he had to give way? Who knows what such a weird thing will grow into? Why don't you take advantage of the fact that you are a weakling and keep it for the New Year? Are you still living an ordinary life? A person who lives in the gutter can spend money to find you, but what about other people, let alone the country, who really want to hide their identity? It really poisoned me to death

It's just a bad thing. I have to practice martial arts and knitting. I can't tell which side is the foundation.

When it comes to ghost writing, just concentrate on writing ghost writing. One is a ghost and the other is martial arts. Both of them are average. I imitated the templates of several novels, but unfortunately, I didn't imitate anything of my own. I have already decided on all the subsequent chapters and will not read them again. The heat is still far from enough.

First of all, there is too much nonsense and the plot is draggy. There is no idea that makes people want to continue reading. It can be improved if it can be modified. It's so hard to find a ghost story these days. Just make do with it,

Starting from Chapter 77, the protagonist is a person who doesn't know what's good or bad. It's nothing else. His family is trying their best to do your best, and you still pretend to be a JB?

I read dozens of chapters and I just wanted to come over and read the comments. I feel comfortable If you write about ghosts, just write about ghosts. Later, you will practice all kinds of boxing and internal skills. Are you out of inspiration or can't write anymore? Are you going to write in the world of martial arts? Go ahead and do your homework

What the hell? This plot is incomprehensible in every way, and it's disgusting to force the plot...

Okay, okay, it's just that the update is a bit slow. Keep up the good work. I'll definitely book it all and give you a monthly pass. I just hope there will be more updates.

The more he writes, the more cluttered he becomes. Perhaps the author just can't think of anything to write about, so he simply "borrows" from other works and stews them all together...

You can still read it, please come on, author! ! ! ! At least the plot is going smoothly.          😁😁

After seeing 96 photos, I suddenly felt that they were not as good as before. Gui Cha is such a good profession. That's when I saw it.

The protagonist deserves to be alive, deserves to die, and deserves to die!

Will he be killed by Tang San Dog again?

It looked okay at first, but the more you look at it, the more rubbish it becomes. He's already a seventh-grade Night Wandering God. No matter who I fight, it's always 55. I'm convinced, and no matter who I fight, it's always a back-and-forth.

The first ten chapters of this book are pretty well written. The further I write, the more cliche it becomes and I have no interest in reading it. Give six recommendation votes and it's over.