This Host Is Not Serious

How should I put it? It's just so-so. Author, if you can read your article carefully, you will find that your things are progressing too fast. There is a breathless urgency in reading the text. You can slow down the pace appropriately. The plot is a bit old. Of course, the routines that can be used are good routines. I don't think there is anything wrong. I have only updated seven chapters now. All aspects are not fully developed yet. Let's put it on the bookshelf first.

This book is very well written and I will sign the contract sooner or later.

Dear readers, can you give me a recommendation vote? Thanks jpg

The writing is okay, I hope you can work hard to sign the contract

An editor gave me some advice. When there is no reputation, the description of the environment and details should be as simple as possible, and the description of the setting should be as simple as possible. It can even be said that if it does not affect your story, it is best to have no setting. The first page of your first chapter is almost entirely filled with this kind of description, and deleting it does not affect your article at all. Of course I have this problem too. I have collected it and will continue to read it. If you are interested, you can also take a look at my works and learn from each other's strengths. I wish you success.

The author has a lot of typos, so it's best to check them after you finish writing.

Received, the writing is great, cheers for the author.

Received, please reciprocate, please do your best

Come on, it has been collected, continue to update and make progress, welcome to visit again!

I have a question, who is the elder brother and who is the younger brother.