Pension Plan Expanded from Three Kingdoms to All Heavens

Read Chapter 15. As long as the surname is Gongsun in the article, the names are confusing. Can't figure out who is who. For example, Gongsun Du's eldest son Gongsun Kang in Chapter 15. The second son was Gongsun Kang. In the first few chapters, other people's names changed to Gongsun Lu many times. The plot is okay, but it is very tiring to read, because you will find that the "Gongsun Lu" in the article may not be Gongsun Lu, but Gongsun Du, Gongsun Han or someone else.

I would like to ask, in martial arts, you have written three flowers and five qi toward the original, five declines of heaven and man, enlightenment, and how to write immortals later. Your martial arts has written immortals and immortals, five declines of heaven, humans, and five declines. Is martial arts that powerful?

It's a pity that the protagonist's golden finger only has storage space and the ability to travel through time, which is already strong enough. Later, he had to add some messy abilities and finally got a weapon spirit. It was also related to the characters in the list of gods. It was really poisonous.

In summary, I was so embarrassed that I didn't know how others felt, so I slipped away.

It gives me a headache to read, there is a long paragraph of densely packed words, especially some special symbols stacked in a large paragraph.

Well written Have you seen any improvements to this?

Our protagonist, your protagonist, what the hell is this writing method, can't it just appear once or twice? It's happened so many times, it's so awkward and awkward

I originally thought it was the Infinite Luck Dynasty style, but in the end there was just a guy wandering around. As a king, he didn't think about how to strengthen his territory or how to dominate the heavens. He just kept wandering around there. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

It's dazzling to read a large pile of text without segmentation. There are so many words crowded together that I don't know how to change the map.

It was pretty good at first, but it was because I saw Huang Yaoshi's possessed feeling... It was so bad that I jumped right away.

The emotional drama was very embarrassing, very embarrassing. I hope the author will stop writing such emotional dramas, even if it is just one sentence 😅

Why not write about unifying the Three Kingdoms?

After the Golden Finger Weapon Spirit came out, the plot fell into confusion and the character descriptions were incomprehensible!

It's really a bunch of nonsense, without any nutrition. Maybe the author wants to give people a little humor, but it's not humorous at all. Instead, it makes me jump while watching it! The author should still need to improve his writing skills! But the subject matter is really good!

I read Chapter 4, a story about a girl controlling a dog.

Don't write down the war in such detail. It's really poisonous. Don't let the TV series poison you. You can't ambush an army of over ten thousand. At most, you can only ambush a few hundred vanguards.

I was speechless when I saw my mother was written as an old lady at the beginning! Many books are like this. People in ancient times got married relatively early! Pig's feet are 12 years old, and his mother is definitely not over 30. Are you an old lady? There is another book that I forgot its name. The protagonist is already over 70 in his 20s. I couldn't read it at that time. What the hell is this? His IQ is worrying

The Three Golden Chapters have nothing to do with Zhutian, you just like it, and the Three Kingdoms want to ride on the popularity of Zhutian Wanjieliu,

Can I ask what that bird is for? It is neither obedient nor useful. Even if you want a pet, there are better ones in the world of fairy swords. If you are obedient, it can still be considered a pet, but what is the use of keeping a disobedient bird that only causes trouble? Use it to cause greater trouble?

To be honest, judging from the title, I thought it was a routine for fighting monsters and upgrading. Fighting worlds one by one from low to high. It doesn't matter if the time event is poisonous. There are all kinds of wonders in the world, but what the hell is it if you are always disconnected? The protagonist is often in a state of fighting alone to protect himself. It is quite speechless. The most speechless thing is the time jump. It happens every once in a while. It is very poisonous.

I just want to know, is it a big stud in the harem? If anyone knows, please tell me, thank you.