I Have a Role in the Heavens

The writing is good, but it is a pity that the author is determined not to have a harem and not change the original plot much, resulting in the role of the time traveler as a variable being too low. A lot of the plot is equal to multiple passerby characters, and the content still follows the outline of the original work. Of course, I only saw Xue Zhong and Zhifu. The most amazing thing about Snow is that the last person goes to Tianmenli, but it is undeniable that the previous chapters are probably 90% equal to the original work plus a little bit of pretentious scenes from the protagonist. It's hard to say whether you know it or not. If there is no harem and a single female protagonist, then Hua Lan should have at least more roles. In the end, she has no sense of existence. In the end, she insists on cooperating with Gu Tingye and Minglan. Especially when he wrote a poem to Wei Xingshou, and then Gu Tingye came to hold Wei Xingshou's hand, and then when he persuaded Minglan to get married, there was really a strong feeling of giving away a daughter. There are really not many good players in this kind of astronomy. Unfortunately, I think the main reason is that I hate the feeling of half-cutting the basket, which is similar to the feeling of not being able to catch the ball. However, it can also be seen that the author does not like emotional dramas, so if you know the plot, it is better to just travel to the Song Dynasty. .

It feels like you don't know what you are doing from the beginning to the end, and what is your protagonist's setting? It feels like you are watching from the side from beginning to end?

Go to the Super God Mechanic to compete with Black Star or the Super Seminary. You can also go to the black technology world of Xueba to compare with Lu Zhou. Is it better to be a saint or to hang on the wall?

Too short and weak🤫🤫🤫

I can't stand it anymore when I see the protagonist actually admires the way Uchiha Itachi kills the entire clan.

I skipped reading and saw the second article about Yu Qingnian, who wanted to marry Fan Ruoruo, and then I started to feel that I didn't care. After a month, I thought that if her parents didn't agree, why should I pursue her? What kind of divine expansion is this? Just forget it if you don't agree? Why should a man worry about not having a wife? And you are already a great master, why do you have to be a licking dog? The same goes for Naruto in the first article. Do you admire a person who destroyed his own family and killed his own parents? From what I have seen so far, the biggest poisonous point is that he admires Uchiha Itachi, and then he is a licking dog, and no one with normal views will like a person who killed his father and mother, let alone admire him. And even if Uchiha wants to betray the village, do those young children deserve to die? Secondly, Konoha was established by the Senju family and Uchiha. As a result, Senju Hashirama and Senju Tobirama became Hokage respectively. What about Uchiha? Going to be a guard was like one of the companies they founded together became the president and held a controlling stake, while the other went to watch the gate and work as a security guard. Moreover, Senju Tobirama also felt that Uchiha might betray Konoha and had to guard against them. Besides, Uchiha seemed to be forced to betray. After all, one would die slowly, and the other might not die if he gave it a try. In this case, you all know how to choose.

This novel should call me a licking dog in the heavens

This book should be called Reality Licking Dog Tracking All Worlds

I felt lonely writing it. Every time I traveled through the world, I felt like I had no clothes. I got nothing. I just wrote it according to the original novel. I had no sense of participation and did not participate in the plot. I knew it was a tragedy but just let the plot happen according to the original trajectory. I kept saying that I couldn't stand it, but I just didn't change it. If I didn't copy the original text, you wouldn't be able to write it.

In fact, Naruto's biggest joke is! Naruto and Nagato said that they would bring peace to the Land of Rain, and then Nagato believed it and resurrected everyone in Konoha with his life! Then the Kingdom of Rain was destroyed... And he was still talking about peace and ideals in Konoha, and his ideal was peace in Konoha! Everything else is deception...

I really don't know what's good about this book. It just follows the plot of the original book and it's not interesting at all. I rely on it for my defense.

How can I put it in writing? It's a bit disgusting. People don't like it when you rush forward. What kind of three-year agreement is there? If there is no time traveler spirit, is there no woman left?

Wu Su showed real kindness to Deng Tai'a for saving his life, teaching him his profession, and giving him a meal. Deng Tai'a only saved Xu Fengnian once and gave him the flying sword, and that was all. Xu Fengnian only paid a little attention to his grandfather. The protagonist made three promises, but then he helped Xu Fengnian in everything, so that others could not even use the promise. Now I am very touched when I hear the promise, and I still owe a favor. Is Xu Fengnian the protagonist's father? As for licking it like this?

There is no one else who has these three views. I think it's modern people. "The parents who bear the body hair and skin" don't accept other genes and organ transplants. I really laughed. I think it's ancient people. The death of my own father seemed like a small matter, so I blocked it symbolically. After reading the comments, I didn't think about revenge, especially the part about the Uchiha genocide. What do you think the ancients would think when they saw it? They claim to believe in Confucianism and ancient rituals, but whether it is the murder of parents without revenge or the killing of fathers and mothers for any reason, it is the most intolerable in any dynasty To put it bluntly, if you want to establish a character, then establish it well, don't arrange so many plots that are not in line with the character If you have done it, you still have to establish it.

There is no main plot and no standpoint. The characters in the original work are all the same as NPCs. The protagonist has to be involved in everything. He is always in love. He will forget it after passing this volume. The picture will be changed after the plot is finished. The plot is also written wherever I think. There are always various reasons to cover up the strength and pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Anyway, there is always fun in everything. The character of the person hides the facts.

You confused me from the very beginning of this book. You told me that he was always lazy when he was practicing, and he was always lazy when practicing. He spent three days fishing and two days drying nets. In the end, you had to show how deeply he remembered this hatred. Don't you think this is funny?

Damn it, I cleared Yuan Fei Rizhan's name. The two great darknesses of Konoha. Ranked first, the scapegoat king. Ranked second is Sarutobi Hiruzen. Can't be washed clean.

Isn't the protagonist's state of mind improved at all? Whenever I meet a woman, I make all kinds of excuses and feel guilty. I'm a little confused. After so much experience, I'm still like this. It's very embarrassing to watch.

Why isn't Zhu Xian placed in the front? He has become a saint and an ancestor since ancient times, but he is still so weak when he comes to the Zhuxian world? Even if the world is different, a top-level universe, a world where even heaven and underworld are not organized, the protagonist still can't develop? The skills cultivated in the ancient world are better than those in the Zhuxian world even if the basics are modified, right?

I was really speechless when I saw the Ming Dynasty chapter. The author has been writing himself on the road to death. So far, the protagonist has not found a girl either in life or in the world. The emotional drama in Qing Yu Nian is even more inexplicable. He is already engaged. I thought the protagonist will finally leave the single and write about marriage. But the world is over. Either you don't write emotional drama, or you don't write half of it and stop writing it. What's the difference between this and pulling half of it and quitting it? If you don't write emotional drama, just write more storylines. As a result, the author also wrote a sage character for the protagonist who is pure and inactive. He knows how to practice martial arts or read books in seclusion all day long. The key is that in the real world, the protagonist is still an actor. You are pure and inactive and still mess around in the entertainment industry. Who can get ahead in the entertainment industry is not an individual. Also, in the worlds I have watched so far, I don't know why the protagonist traveled through the past. I basically don't participate in the plot. I know it all day long, but I don't say it and basically don't participate. The heroines don't chase and the villains don't kill. The story in each world has no ending and the protagonist returns to the real world. I really want to ask the author what you wrote. What do you want to express? The martial arts practiced in these worlds cannot be used in the real world. I am really speechless. Is there no main line? To travel for the sake of time travel, you might as well write a system and assign several tasks to the protagonist in each world. This way you will have a clue when writing and a basic main line.

I hope to write Bright Sword, Super Seminary, Swallowing Starry Sky, Marvel, Under One Man! Come on, recommend, vote monthly, one world doesn't necessarily have to be better than the other, come on, I like to read your writing and gain new perspectives!

After reading the complete innocent daydream version of Naruto, I saw that reality has not grown at all and has no strength. I saw that the second time to celebrate more than 10 years is another daydream reincarnation. The review of this book was not satisfactory. There are too many poisonous points.

You are really good at it. The ancient Yang God is finished. Come to a love-filled courtyard. Are you serious?

You have the strength of Chaoying and you are still struggling. Are you going to avenge your father? ? ? ? I'm still writing about my daily life. Is it difficult to cover up and destroy a village and then use space power to go back?

The protagonist is timid and has nothing to do with himself. Can he really become an emperor? Moreover, is Ye Hei using you to protect the road? He has nothing to do all day long, just like a nanny, going around putting out fires. I don't know, he thinks he is your son.

The protagonist in The Lord of One World has transcended, and is theoretically the strongest in the world. How can a powerful person go to those small worlds without fear of crushing them and destroying them? So after writing The Lord of One Life, it's completely the finale, and there's no point in writing any more.

I like the setting of this Zhutianliu the best. After a world becomes stronger, the true spirit reincarnates and its talents increase. My favorite is the Genius Stream, I can learn everything quickly. But I don't know if the author wants to practice his writing and try different styles or if the writing is just not good enough. I forgot about it before, but the protagonists in several subsequent worlds are like schizophrenia, with completely different personalities. I remember that the protagonist has the memory of knowing his own reincarnation, so this is not understandable, and he is a completely different person. If you want to write about a different life, then you only need to add a need to experience the world of mortals. This is just my personal opinion.

The quality of the copies varies. Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing of Zhe Tian is not good. It's the same as if you haven't read the original work. Let me make two points: 1. Heavenly tribulation, just like Dian, the scope of pig's feet from the fourth level to the third level of immortality is one tribulation, which does not even cover the Eastern Wasteland. Ye Fan's immortal three does not need to transcend the tribulation. The original work, Ye Fan's promotion to the third level of immortality, thunder tribulation covers most of the earth. How do you say this? 2. In the original work, many people have brought up the Empress. How can a pig's trotters make a cold-faced and paralyzed otaku who is hundreds of thousands of years old speak normally? Still acting like a girl? Do you really think that hundreds of thousands of years of home life and experience are nothing?

Write about the Holy Ruins or something. The Holy Ruins is more aggrieved than Jian Lai. I need you to go. Show off and slap in the face

I really like the setting of the reincarnation of a real spirit with pig's feet. It's a good setting, but the writing in the main world is a mess, because the income from the reincarnation of the real spirit is basically of no use to the main world, because except for the strength of the soul and the skills of the special forces, the income from other worlds has basically nothing to do with the main world. Fortunately, it doesn't take up much space, but it is true that after you have just married your wife in the dungeon, you return to the main world and give away your girlfriend. . . .