
Yu-Gi-Oh Miracle Heroes
游戏王之奇迹英雄
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 982k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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388Chapters
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The author had better change the latest one. The protagonist has been there for so long, has done so many tasks, and is still a time traveler who is familiar with the Yu-Gi-Oh system. So at the end of the day, he doesn't believe that there are dark games and that the card world doesn't kill people? It feels like this is a picture that forcibly lowers the IQ of the protagonist. He was invincible in the front, but suddenly he has a lower IQ. Although I understand that the author wants to suppress the protagonist and carry out a strategy of suppressing first and then improving, but it is not such a abrupt transition.
I have read more than 300 chapters, and I want to say thank you. I have read a lot of Yu-Gi-Oh novels, and I still have six of them on my book list. This one is not the worst, but it is the most awkward one I have read. The protagonist got new cards but didn't use them. The supporting characters all knew they had to use the new cards. For example, the heroine's Black Rose Dragon deck, the one that criticized the electronic dragon by name. Well, I was even confused about the protagonist's deck. It felt less like a poker player who traveled through the past, and more like an animated character. He played cards for the sake of the plot, such as for the sake of viewing pleasure and the opponent's attack power. There were other games as well, but this one was particularly obvious. After all, if you lose, if you win, it is called a doge. Of course, the author can use the protagonist to explain it by using pure decks. It doesn't matter at first, but for the sake of the plot, some general cards are not used and they are done. I remember that the protagonist changed the cause and effect cut off, so just pretend that he didn't draw it. There are many parts of playing cards with others to play Ax vs. Slash. Secondly, regarding the card playing itself, everyone's purpose of playing cards is different. The protagonist of the animation may play cards to save the world, or he may play cards to find out the truth. The protagonist of the novel may also play cards simply to gain points and exchange cards, but the purpose is serious or profitable, but playing cards for women is really unacceptable. This may be the fault of the original author Kazuki Takahashi. They say card guys don't take partners. Although this is a joke, if you really play cards for a woman, you always feel that the quality of the game itself has changed. The last time I saw playing cards for a woman in the anime was in the Jounouchi Oriha arc, but it was not because I liked it, but just for companionship. In terms of the novel, it was written as A5, but I fell out of love at the stage of developing a relationship with the heroine. Of course, playing poker for women may be my own reason, but I believe there are many real poker players who resonate with me on this point. To be honest, even if the opponent is Jian Lie Xinxi playing Destiny Hero, it would be better than this. The female protagonist is a trap in Yu-Gi-Oh. It's not that you can't write a female protagonist, but you have to determine the heroine's definition of the protagonist. The emotional line between men and women has always been the highlight of Yu-Gi-Oh. There can be some, but not too many, and it can't affect the plot. In short, the protagonist gives me the feeling that the protagonist of the Yu-Gi-Oh animation, the protagonist of the ordinary time-travel novel, and the protagonist of the Yu-Gi-Oh novel are mixed together. Maybe this is the awkward part. Having said so much is just out of my thoughts. I guess many people may disagree, but I really just don't feel happy if I don't say it.
Shit, Gu Liang forced the protagonist to lose. Xin Yuxia didn't even use it, but he had to forcefully recreate the original hero and lose to the electronic dragon, right?
The protagonist loses inexplicably, his enthusiasm is gone, and he gives up.
I feel retarded when I think about the main character's failure. To be honest, he force-feeds people shit, which is really uncomfortable to watch. 😐
I gave up and forcibly lost to the white board electronic dragon (and it was not infinite). And the way of playing cards with only one deck is unacceptable. The soul of Yu-Gi-Oh is to mix and match. Even if there is only one standard deck, the fused Shaddoll, the synchronized Dragon Star, and the super twelve beasts are more normal. And what is the so-called victorious white dragon? Isn't Bailong used to stack R8's younger brother?
Md The more I thought about it in the middle of the night, the angrier I became. What an outrageous plot that just made the protagonist suffer. Nt novel, I will go away myself. I really believe it.
Why is it that the more I write, the more I lose my temper? I am terrible at playing cards. I wrote more than ten chapters with supporting characters playing cards. I finally waited until the protagonist came on stage and used the second deck to scrap the deck, but the result was anticlimactic. I also made a meaningless mirror shattering, so I just cut it, right? The inner drama of the protagonist is also embarrassing. I remember that the protagonist is a time traveler, right? The opponent's playing skills are at the level of dm. Gx, so he is so excited.
How dare you write that the main character loses? That's awesome. At worst, we should both perish together.
Let's talk about some of the awkward points now. First of all, the new deck's appearance rate is too low. There is no linkage between the three decks. The most commonly used ones are heroes, Hope and Scrap. It feels like I want to complete the protagonist deck, but I just don't use it. In fact, the hero axis Sehope is very convenient. There are a lot of four-star heroes at the lower level. Secondly, there are too many boring emotional threads, and some plots and dialogues look extremely awkward. And this resulted in a significant reduction in the space occupied by duels. Finally, too much meaningless and irrelevant content has been added to the duel plot. The duel accounts for less than half of the content in one chapter, and the standard of the entire duel has dropped significantly. It's really embarrassing to do this kind of thing while playing a hero. The protagonist is also distracted from the duel, and even though the strength of the deck is so different, he can still be suppressed by the opponent. And the skill appearance rate initially set is almost 0, which is really a background board setting.
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If you have decks you want to see and interesting cards, you can post them in this comment! ! ! As a reminder, the decks provided here will most likely be placed against the protagonist's opponent, hehehehe😈😈😈! ! !
Everyone who has traveled through time has lost, is speechless, and has given up.
The author is really good, I doubt I have ever played Yu-Gi-Oh! There are a lot of common sense and low-level mistakes in every chapter. In the latest chapter, there is a stupid nonsense such as the destruction of Zhen Ziyan by Huantou Yikang. If you don't understand the rule book, please take a good look at which word is written about the effect of Zhen Ziyan's destruction that needs to be activated?
The mission system is really confusing. They are all murderers and there are no other missions? Then why do you call the mission system? Why don't you just put a wanted order? Oh, we all know where the criminals are, but we just don't catch them. Hey, we just wait for someone to take over the task. I'm convinced. The way for high school students like the protagonist to obtain energy lottery is to catch murderers. This setting is really amazing. Even if there is only one high school in a city, it can meet the workload of adult duelists and high school freshman. Some cities also have universities. In order to create so many murderers, the government must have done a lot of good things.
It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that the pace of card play is too slow and there are too few operations and chains. Most of the people who will read this book are card players. Everyone has been killed from monsters such as Shadow Jiao Zhao, Golden Kingdom, Long Huiqiao, etc. It is not pleasant to read if there are too few operations. Moreover, the protagonist, as a time traveler, is now playing cards like the early ten generations. Even if an explanation is given, it is not fun enough.
Hope family portrait
I found a problem, that is, your description of New Space Heroes is a bit too tool-based. How should I put it? It's just that their original effects are not shown very much. You use them as fusion materials, and you have not let them show their own effects. The effect of the earth mole monster can turn the opponent's row back. In your hand, Brother Dolphin, you can watch Look at the opponent's hand, and it can be used to deal with chestnut balls. She can blow up chestnut balls directly from your hand. Flashing Golden Platform, you can't attack when he is on the field. So, New Space Hero's personal monster effect has not been shown. On the contrary, They are all used as tools to make fusion materials for Xin Yuxia, and their own effects are not shown. I admit that New Space's own attack power is not high, but every effect is very powerful. The effect of Sky Hummingbird is that the opponent does not have a card in hand. I will give 500 health points, but in your novel, Star Swordsmen have not used these effects. They only use them as fusion materials for Xin Yuxia. If it feels too tool-like, I have to let them show it. I guess this is my personal opinion.
The author's level of playing cards is too low. He is not as strong as a duel player. It feels like a child playing house.
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No more updates? Do you have any other recommendations for Yu-Gi-Oh! 😭
Does anyone know where the author went? He didn't even make an announcement.
I checked the author and found several problems. I will tell you a little bit here. After reading your novel, I read Yu-Gi-Oh! Again and found several problems with this novel. First, you set the Duel King to use heterochromatic eyes, which are vicious and vicious. Fusion Dragon, Phantom Wing Synchronic Dragon, if these dragons want to exert their true power, they have to use the Pendulum Summon, because they have some abilities that can only be used when the Pendulum Summon. The second point is that you cannot use ordinary magic cards and traps when riding duels. Under this rule, only high-speed magic can be used. If you want to use ordinary magic cards, 2,000 health points will be deducted from the player after use. Moreover, in the high-speed duel rules, after each round, a high-speed counter will be generated. The condition for using high-speed magic is to consume high-speed counters to activate high-speed magic. Ordinary magic cannot be used. If used forcefully, 2,000 health points will be deducted. These are the problems I have discovered so far. I hope it will help your writing fluency.
This book... Is just like this?
Is it really not updated? It's been over a year, and this one is pretty good among the Yu-Gi-Oh fanfics I've read, but it hasn't been updated yet. Do you have any other recommendations?
So my Hubert is gone? 😭😭
Alas, the author can't come back. It's still a book I read when I was in high school.
Or Destiny Hero Blood Demon D Cow🐮
Can the author do some acrobatics? It is an acrobatic combination of Xin Yuxia, Stardust Dragon and Hope. .
Can you change the word "Xia" to "Xia"? It sounds so embarrassing to me. Doesn't Flame Winged Man sound good?
Is there a value-preserving deck for the Chinese server? Newbies want to join the Chinese server but don't know how to build a deck.