When the Old Days Come

Chapter 134: Persuading to retreat. An inexplicable plot, illogical, a novice, no training, even though he knew there was a demon, he still tracked it alone. The scene in the cemetery was really disgusting. An inexplicable adventure anchor appeared. The protagonist didn't persuade him to quit, but he actually went forward with him. I didn't watch the rest of the plot, because I was persuaded to quit after seeing this. The above is purely personal opinion?

The author's descriptions of the characters' appearance, personality, and fights are very detailed. The relative storyline gave me a sense of abruptness, and there was little foreshadowing for certain behaviors of the characters. I don't know whether the author intentionally did this to show that the protagonist is Bubble's favored one, or because less energy was spent on plot and character motivation. Overall, the writing style is very good. If it can make up for some minor flaws, it will be more worth reading.

By the way, the people here appear so unexpectedly. Someone comes out of nowhere and then becomes hostile. And is the agent an official organization? Or is it a small group like the others?

Nowadays, there is a book shortage, and some popular books are not to my liking, so I can only find books by myself and slowly persevere. Just give me a small reward as support, don't be a eunuch~

Damn it, did the author delete it after writing a million words even if no one reads it?🌙💔

What a humble author.🙂

Come on, let's encourage each other😳😳

Ah, when did this book come to my favorites?

As long as it is updated, I will vote 🙂

I've read a few chapters and I'd like to give you some advice. When writing fight scenes, don't write all the names. For example, when Xiao Yi turns around, Xiao Yi grabs someone's shoulder bone with his backhand, and Xiao Yi does so. The original name only needs to appear once in a paragraph. If you write too much, it feels superfluous. It reminds me of the compositions I wrote when I was a child, such as so-and-so said: so-and-so said again.

I recommend the "Whispers of the Old Days" tarot deck, Cthulhu-themed, very beautiful, but expensive 😭

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.