Black Technology Starts with Steel Suits

It looks a bit messy, and the live barrage is too watery. You are writing a novel, not a live broadcast. Just write two or three sentences of barrage. Half of the chapter is written in barrage.

Am I being too picky? When I saw the word "live broadcast" in the first chapter, I lost interest in reading it 😅

The writing is too sloppy and messy!

The first few chapters are a bit messy, I hope to sort them out. Not very friendly to readers who lack imagination, they will find it baffling. I barely know the general cause and effect...

To be honest, it usually takes about half an hour for people to prevent theft, but your one day is really unbelievable. Very poor reading experience!

It's too watery. That's not the point. It's watery before it's put on the shelves, and it's difficult to handle the main plot if it's messy. I could still watch it at the beginning, but the main plot was over when I moved to the capital. Daily life is not daily life, technology is not technology, and even falling in love is extremely confusing. It is not suitable for readers who are not good at sorting out and supplementing their own imagination. After all, it is really tiring to read a chapter and supplement this chapter by themselves.

At the beginning, I invented a beggar's version of the steel suit, but the next hundred or so chapters are full of water, which is completely unacceptable to a character cursed by knowledge.

That's it? Did you take the introductory reading? Is this the starting point now?

It will take five or ten years for battery technology to break through, but it will have no impact on today's petroleum industry structure. What we are lacking is not the power storage technology. Think of the nuclear batteries on Mars rover and lunar rover. What we lack is power generation technology. Specifically, it is clean energy. More specifically, it is normal temperature controllable nuclear fusion technology. "Normal temperature" and "controllable" are indispensable. This is the invention that changes the world.

I can't read it. The protagonist has been living in the barrage and is completely out of touch with life. This book should be called "The Author's Fantasy Live Broadcast Room"

What I hope to see is to illuminate each technology, rather than meaningless science popularization here. Popular science is just popular science, and it does not say anything meaningful. It is basically the same as the introduction of a textbook. If the water goes any further, readers will be gone.

As a person cursed by knowledge, if you invent a battery, there will be endless water.

I thought the protagonist relied on the wisdom of Iron Man to single-handedly lead China's technological development by leaps and bounds, but it turned out that the writing was just like a business literature, patronizing wrangling, and having to talk about everything in person (the country is willing to take the initiative to send people to help you manage, and it still needs to be like a business story). Can't you get a character like Little Pepper to handle company affairs and focus on research and development? And I feel that the protagonist's research and development capabilities do not reflect Iron Man's wisdom at all. . . A genius who can hand-make a miniature controllable nuclear fusion reactor and a prototype of a battle armor in a cave for a month, and later build a space-time shuttle, built a low-profile power battle armor in 2 years?

Daily introduces "poison" and Sanjiang promotes "cheapness". Is there anything you don't know now?

Why live broadcast and what to do! Do it! This kind of behavior feels so silly. I don't want to do what the Chinese can do. Chinese people like to keep a low profile and bide their time, be low-key and restrained. There is no such high-profile! Anyone who can keep a high profile is a great person!

Looking at the catalog, you can tell that it was scrawled. The main character is so 🐮, and he even makes things live on the live broadcast. Do you know how the Iranian nuclear physicist died? There are countless scientists assassinated in the world. And Meng Wanzhou is still being detained 🤔

This is the wisdom of Iron Man! Artificial Intelligence and the Ark Reactor are just a joke. They are real. One person can promote the development of the times. In your case, it's just alas.

If it doesn't work, just be a eunuch and do it every day.

I have been reading books for almost 20 years, and I have come to a rule. Generally, the introduction is written like this. After basically reading the introduction, you can give up

As he grows older and matures, it is not unreasonable for the country to restrict Ali!

I don't think I need to read it. The author is enjoying himself

Luo Li, is this a scientific article?

208 209 205 What the hell, you've spent money for a few days and you still don't have a look?

What the hell are 205 and 208 about me?

There are too many popular sciences, and the proportion in the middle and late stages is 80%. It's too confusing.

Can there be less popular science content? . ? ? ? ?

What the hell? Not yet

This book is almost out of date

The live broadcast opens with water. Apart from chatting and spanking, the Internet is not an illegal place.

My brain hurts when I read the book. It was so messy. I felt like I posted it without organizing it. The author wrote whatever came to his mind and posted it as soon as he finished. He didn't consider whether the previous and later chapters could be related. My brain hurt. When I got to the penultimate chapter, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I withdrew it.