Imprisoned for Life, I Signed for a Thousand Years in the Forbidden Area

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Is this book a single female protagonist? Is the author great?

Is this another good book that is not popular? However, there are indeed a lot of typos. The author can correct them when he has time. I am now waiting for Mu Yun's past to be exposed to the world, including the foreshadowing left by Mu Yun's obsession. I am also very curious. The cause and effect of Shenmu City has been resolved, but the disasters in the world for thousands of years have not been resolved. He has shouldered the burden of the world for thousands of years alone.

😅 The first five chapters were almost fatal. After twenty chapters, it was pretty good. I think the later ones are okay. It would be better to remove the first ones and write them separately.

Just looking at the first few chapters, I feel that the protagonist should change his name. With this operation of the original owner, it is not too much to be beaten to death when he goes out. Although the original owner has become cold, others don't know it!

There are so many typos that I can't catch them all. I don't care about the author. It makes my head hurt 😐. I've been poisoned to death...

Let's briefly talk about this book. 1 The currency system is chaotic. In Chapter 36, the Golden Crow Sect offers a reward for the protagonist and the dog, but they actually use gold. A great demon in the Nascent Soul stage, who is considered a middle-level and high-level person in the world of immortality, is only worth 1,000 taels of gold? Even if the purchasing power of gold is very strong, a small town can still grab 1,000 taels of gold. A good Immortal Cultivation Sect does not use spiritual stones but gold. If you were to find a greedy city lord in any small country, I would estimate that he would be richer than this sect. 2. The realm is sometimes high and sometimes low (not talking about the protagonist). As mentioned in Chapter 2, the fastest practitioner on the mainland would take 10 years to reach the golden elixir. Later, a monk in the Nascent Soul stage would be a maid? The protagonist's master is also a Nascent Soul. 3 The plot is too confusing. It feels like the author has no outline and just writes wherever he thinks. Many times the transitions between maps are very abrupt, and there are too many narrations. The author can try to express these through the mouths of supporting characters. Instead of adding narration directly. (I've read more than 40 chapters and that's all for now)

I can barely see from the front, but the back is getting better and better. I also think I can remove the front.

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The writing is okay. The monthly ticket is gone. I'll give you a recommendation ticket. Come on.

By the way, Shenmu City is a big hole, and my ex didn't open the door just because of a woman. There is also a pitfall for Junior Brother Wan. You will know it if you look behind.

The protagonist is a human race, right? You let the demons enter the city. You are so awesome. I want to say, is the protagonist a spy sent by the demons into the human race? In the past, you were a traitor.