The Heavens Begin with the Courtyard Full of Love

Very well written, when will it be updated?

It's very well written. I ordered twenty chapters to support it. I usually read pirated copies, but this book is really well written. It's a pity that the second story ended unfinished. I hope that the following stories won't be like this again.

I really feel that the author's writing is very good. After Qin Huairu's dark side was magnified, I suddenly felt that this was a normal plot. I originally liked this drama and watched it three times, but it was just awkward. I didn't understand why Zhuzi could tolerate their family. I was so angry that I didn't want to watch it. Although the author's character Qin Huairu is scheming, IQ, and EQ off the charts, it just feels right, and I feel that the next pillar will lead to a big explosion and a big reversal. I really want to see the fate of Xu Damao and Qin Huairu's family described by the author. I also feel that the author's analysis of Lou Xiao'e is correct. I also feel this way. Anyway, this is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me. I really like this drama, and I feel sorry for Zhu Zhu. I just want to see Zhu Zhu stand up. Come on, author! ! !

Being scolded means that you are going to be popular. Keep your original intention and write in your own style. Authors without style cannot become popular. Come on.

What the author wrote in this paragraph is to challenge a person's inherent three views. He has always been very disgusted with a person, and from a God's perspective, knowing what Qin Huairu has done, can the disgust really turn into an inexplicable good impression in a few months? In order to advance your so-called plot, forcibly reducing one's intelligence is the biggest unreasonable. What you wrote is all shit

To be honest, I came to see Siheyuan because I wanted to see someone with modern thinking and cheats beating the natives through all kinds of tricks. The result is that the author upgraded the White Lotus Qin Huairu, and the relationship with Lou Xiao'e was ruined even though he had a God's perspective. In the end, Lou Xiao'e's family ran away. He was still talking about having an affair with Ran Qiuye all day long, and when this matter was over, he would have nothing to do with Teacher Ran. Is this a reminder that good things will come to an end again?

Maybe I shouldn't have had too many expectations. I'm used to seeing all kinds of protagonists who destroy people all over the place if they disagree with each other, and suddenly someone so sad and stupid comes here. I really can't stand it. I was lucky enough to read the previous book, but I didn't expect it to be worse than this one... Although the author said there would be a climax later, I have realized that this is because the old writer is sick, and I am scared!

After seeing Chapter 10, I skipped to Chapter 90 and read it. The writing is really good. As a young person, I am envious, jealous and hateful For so many scoldings, it is really deserved I have known a theorem since the first day I wrote online articles. Internet articles are a development game. You can set countless hardships for the protagonist, including dead parents and running away from his wife. But as long as the protagonist has enough gains, everything is not a problem. The harvest is the key point. The harvest can be life insights, skills, treasures, or even friends and lovers. The harvest can make the readers who lead the protagonist feel that it is all worthwhile. To give a positive example, in Coiling Dragon, Lin Lei's first love girlfriend ran away, which alone would be a poisonous point, but Tomato backhandedly asked the protagonist to carve a stone sculpture, advance his spiritual power, and gain both fame and fortune, all... To give a negative example, it is also Coiling Dragon, Lin Lei's grandfather died in order to protect him, it is also a poisonous point, but there is no such thing here. It's rewarding, so - the subscription is crazy, Tomato will never dare to write this kind of plot again Look at the author again, after chapter 70, the protagonist has taken the initiative to do some practical things. In addition to the cooking skills picked up at the beginning, the harvest is just a vegetarian recipe book - this is the most enjoyable one You can only add more plots of practicing cooking skills and find a reason for the protagonist to reduce his intelligence, and it won't be like this. Some people say that this is writing about human nature, laugh... It's not that I despise the author, your thoughts have not touched the logic of human beings at all, and you still want to write about human nature. Although I don't understand those books, I know them. When Shan Fan writes a tragic book, even if the protagonist is unclear, he must have attractive qualities, such as Luotuo Xiangzi, alive... And starting from Chapter 30, what are the characteristics of the protagonist? I can't tell, the writing style is all about supporting roles, and even more so, the protagonist is used to set off the supporting roles... Okay, having said all this, I just hate it a bit, if I have such writing style~... Finally, after reading the single chapter about the author's sixth boyfriend, I suggest the author read more life wisdom from those great people For example, the wisdom of life, and other books

This book is generally of good quality, but I think the author may be a little too hasty. In fact, each story can be explored more, especially the supporting characters. I feel that there is too little emphasis on the supporting characters, their daily lives, the psychological activities of the supporting characters, etc. In fact, this can bring out the protagonist from various angles, instead of the whole book just telling what the protagonist thinks and does.

Well written, keep it up.

Isn't it okay to move out of the courtyard? Anyway, Silly Zhu has accumulated a lot of money as a chef over the years. What's more, you are a time traveler and you are not really an aboriginal. With the ability of a time traveler to foresee and foresee, wouldn't it be good to leave the courtyard and go out to live at ease?

An old bookworm spent two days and two nights reading 4 packs of cigarettes and two bubbles in his mouth. He finally finished it, but it was a bit short.

Well, I subscribed to the first ten chapters. I haven't read them in the past two days because I can't stand it. Some people may scold me, but I still want to express my thoughts. Writing novels of various genres, including warmth and darkness, are liked by readers. It is also a common writing method for novels to express desire first and suppress it first, but the author... Let's talk about the genre first. The author chose a route that is neither tender nor dark. This kind of jumping route tests the author's skills. Moreover, the author also spent a lot of space to enrich the content of the novel from the perspective of the supporting characters, trying to bring the novel to life, but... Obviously failed. The last time I read a novel that enriched the novel from the perspective of a supporting character was "The God III", which became a god in one book. I don't know what's wrong with the author's writing, I'm just talking about my own feelings. I felt very uncomfortable watching it, not the kind of sadness that makes me feel sad, but the kind of discomfort that makes me unable to stand up or down, and I can't stand it anymore. If my feelings are correct, the author should be losing readers quickly. Of course, if the author just wants to write the story from his heart, just treat me as a fart. If you want to make money, give up the current way of writing.

It's too frustrating to write about this mansion. The power you have worked so hard to build is just given to others?

The first world made me vomit 🤮, the God perspective directly abandoned the original owner of the TV series and actually took up most of the plot, self-abuse, poisonous, poisonous

Just make her die socially, just reveal all her calculations. I used to be unhappy when watching TV series. Why are you still fussing about it now? This is worse than watching TV series. You might as well not write it.

You have returned to the Qin Dynasty, and the plot has already changed. One minute later or one second earlier would be different. It would be nice if he didn't kill Yi Xiaochuan. Still hanging around with him. Of course it's easy to write without following the plot, just copy the dialogue from the plot occasionally. But it will lose a lot of readers, especially for protagonists like Yi Xiaochuan. The more you date, the more readers you can retain. When I look at Han Chunming, I feel like she is like a nanny. Every world is the same. She is not domineering at all, and I don't know why she traveled through time! Just a little personal opinion.

Since you asked, I will tell you a reference. I have also read a lot of fan fiction. In the two years when this genre first started to flourish, I could still read it if it was written according to the original plot. Now that I have read more, the requirements have become higher. If I can't read it in this way, I might as well read the original work. I'll leave it here and listen to you repeat it. Now I think that well-written fan fiction only uses the background as the basis, and the characters of the supporting characters are properly fleshed out. Some of the views written by the powerful writer Hu will make you feel that he understands them correctly. The plot of the book is closely related to the plot of the original drama, allowing the protagonist to have his own room for development. If it is well written, the later stage can be written well even if it is separated from the original work. (The specific scale depends on whether the protagonist is an original character or a reincarnation. Even if it follows the original plot, it should be narrated from a different perspective to give readers a sense of freshness.) Your current book gives me the feeling that the original story is told from a third perspective, and you use the perspective of the protagonist to take us to relive the story.

This book is the one I have the highest expectations in the past few years. It's a pity that the setting in the front is very interesting, but the world in the back is too niche. The greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment! No more books to read

After reading it, let's chat. This author writes very tastefully. Just like the Sewing Man book, it has its own writing style. But... The author's literary youth is very ill. For their own purposes, or because of obsessions arising from their own lives, they just made the protagonist Zhang Peng, the time traveler, into the original form of Silly Pillar. If you want to be strong, you should suppress it first. I keep saying that good deeds and evil deeds will be rewarded, which dragged on for a long time. It makes people angry. The arch fire is first class. You can see it if you want to experience the ups and downs of life. Highly recommended.

Look at the picture, it's really not that I don't want to write. The mansion gate is over!

I hope it ends as soon as possible. The plot of Bailuyuan is not that satisfying. Firstly, it doesn't strive for hegemony, and secondly, it doesn't accept girls.

Write well and turn on the automatic. Don't let me down.

I gave up when I saw the chapter about marrying Lou Xiaoe. It was so awesome. Are you an original stock? Dare to marry the daughter of the Lou family? Who protects you? It's windy up there, and you're still jumping in? Wouldn't it be nice to have a chance meeting? If we open it later, we can borrow the Lou family's style.

Why did the monthly ticket list drop so much? With the support of a guaranteed monthly ticket, the author needs to be in the best position to write the first plot.

As a digression, "lying flat" has become popular on the Internet recently. It used to be said that you are an adult at 18 and can make your own decisions. Nowadays, people who choose to lie flat have their own reasons. I just hope they don't regret it. Happiness seems to be far away from people like me. Then we choose to respect ourselves. Maybe we should also maintain our self-esteem. Those experts, professors, celebrities, and so on, I can tell you in reality that standing and talking does not hurt your back, and then there are many people who even watch a video and express their emotions. As the lowest-level people who are farthest from the sun, they long for light and heat and start moving. I couldn't sit still and the beeping made China moved and burst into tears.

The author's writing style is very good. Dajiang Dahe's writing is more interesting. Come on.

This book is better than the new book, but sometimes don't worry about changing history. This is just a new dimension, a new branch, and deserves a new story! Monthly tickets are provided, please add more updates quickly!

The writing is quite good, not as mindless as mainstream works, but written in a humane way, and the author also understands that the process is a little tortuous but the ending must be good, so the overall story is quite refreshing, and it is a well-written Shuangwen, but it is not a novice Shuangwen, but a higher-level Shuangwen, and the characters are well established. Many people who write about this kind of time travel in film and television dramas from all over the world have failed in writing. They are just for the sake of criticizing people, which is very brainless. But this work did not fall into the inferior category. It stood out and received thumbs up. The writing style is also good.

The author writes well, and writes more with the characteristics of this era. The author must keep at it! 🌹🌹🌹