The World of Ten Directions, All the Ways United into One

If you see the protagonist traveling through time and becoming a woman, you won't want to watch it.

Forgetting the minor logic issues in the previous article, when the Soul Chaser killer came out wearing a mask, I could only wonder if the author had watched too many old-school third-rate Hong Kong dramas? Brother, you are not filming! How can any idiot killer put on a mask and come out in an upright manner to fight you hard? If you want to be secretive, you won't be upright. If you have a upright character, why would you wear a mask and a cloak? Uncomfortable

Wenchao has attracted so much luck from the leader, and finally I saw someone absorbing Wenchao! See if you can succeed!

I came here because of the reputation. I heard that the author is a young lady who likes to wear ancient costumes, has fair skin, is beautiful, and has amazing looks. [Grapevine] I heard that after getting a thousand likes, the author wears lace women's clothes! ! !

The fighting scenes are very outrageous and full of fantasy. If nothing else, just look at the pictures

The writing is so rough! It's almost like a running account! In the main world, in addition to practicing martial arts, it is about collecting medicinal materials, otherwise it is killing people. After traveling once, I feel like I have written a framework and returned. The relatives of Dharmakaya have also written a stroke and then disappeared. It is a breakthrough in martial arts training, and the time has come to return!

The term "guoshu" only appeared in the Republic of China, and was forced by the national crisis. Now suddenly there is a "guoshu" that has come and gone in the ancient world. Isn't it embarrassing?

It feels like the protagonist has a fake elixir, he has not mixed his spirit to condense his Qi Seed, and he has not sublimated his own martial arts path from the martial arts wisdom of his predecessors. The flesh and blood body will eventually have its limits, only the great road will last forever and the spirit will be infinite. The protagonist still has not reached the realm of metaphysics. We must know that academics die and inquirers live.

Four or five pirate ships count as two hundred taels. As a result, I made a bow and had five hundred taels of snake tendons. My brain is flooded. . A large sea-going ship cost several thousand taels, but five sea-going ships were less than half a bow.

Come on, author, sort out the outline, think about what kind of person the protagonist is, and what kind of characteristics he should establish. The only difference between you and the master is the "soul" of the protagonist.

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The protagonist's knowledge is too complex. He has not decided on his major path for more than two hundred chapters. He has been traveling through time to practice martial arts and Taoism and return to the main world. The same thing is repeated again and again. There is no so-called climax in the plot. The fighting is also very boring. It doesn't have the thrill of punching to the flesh like pure martial arts. The Tao method is more like a turn-based game.

The pseudo-Daoguo looks very unpleasant. There is obviously no mystery in the martial arts system, only the training of strength, qi and blood. There would be no incompatibility unless there is no body but only soul.

The writing is okay. . It's just that the combat power is too heavy. . So many worlds, so many techniques. . In addition, he traveled back many times to denies his original body. . It shouldn't be described based on the combat power of the main world. .

You might as well call it internal strength, and what kind of national martial arts? When I first watched Dragon Snake, in addition to its power to attract people, there was also a magical machine that injected soul into the realm of national martial arts step by step, giving it ideas, not just a martial art.

The content of the overworld is meaningless.

It's not as good as a brainless novel. At least I read it without using my brain, and I can still read it with gusto. I read your book as a brainless novel, and there's no sense of enjoyment at all. I read it as a brainy book. All the places are forced to be arranged. The writing style is so exaggerated. It's not easy to write a book. I won't say anything else. Come on, author.

The setting is good, but the writing is terrible! It sounds like a straightforward narrative, but to be honest, it's like a running account. The plot has no ups and downs, and it's lukewarm from beginning to end!

White and awkward, elementary school essay-style dialogue

I can't stand the second world anymore. The more I watch, the less interesting it becomes. I don't have to be vigilant when I should. The author always feels that the time traveler should be invincible. The child of destiny and martial arts fighting can be described in one sentence.

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Name: Lingguang Gender: Female Talent: Nanming Lihuo Kung Fu: Dunjia Tianshu Bloodline: Suzaku Special Skills: Aurora Flame: Condensing the blazing energy, triggering high-speed whirling white flames, burning countless enemy soldiers Weapons: Liuyun gauze belt: The treasure of the Phoenix clan contains secrets that can confuse people and can also hurt people like a sword Treasure: gilded copper fumigation furnace: can collect treasures from all over the world and refine elixirs and treasures Fire cloud golden cloud crown: when triggered, bursts of golden light protect the body and burn the body in flames Human form: wearing a golden luan A beautiful woman with a green phoenix crown and a golden jade robe and a flying phoenix robe and ribbons Beast shape: a giant bird with wide wings and long feathers, surrounded by flames, rejoicing in the rays of light and raging for thousands of miles Character: cautious Introduction: The Suzaku girl likes the male protagonist and wants to be by his side { "NickName":"Author Bai Damao","UserId":189398609}

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I thought this book was the beginning, but I didn't expect it to be the peak.

After reading a few chapters, it was completely forced conflict, with no logic, and the plot was unnatural.

The protagonist is too impersonal and is just a training machine

Author, please ask most readers for their opinions and see if they want to read a fanfic about 40,000 years of cultivation. You can write it again. Reason: One person wanted to ask me to pay for a fanfic about the author's 40,000 years of cultivation. I can only say that I have no money 😅😅😅. I only have twenty or thirty yuan in my wallet...

A kindergarten within a kindergarten, a running account within a running account!

This kind of article should go to Tomato, there is no brainer there.

I'll give you twenty-three tickets today. Just hold on.