A Dimensional Journey Starting from the Dragon Clan

Come on! This is my deliberate starting point for this book.

The bet failed, what should I say? . I already knew this result after seeing no Xiami for such a long time. Maybe the author doesn't know what we want yet. Most of us who watch Dragon Clan fandom are hurt by the original work. What we want to watch most is not the protagonist showing off, but looking forward to the sweet plot. I hope the author's performance will get better and better 😐

When I saw Natsumi, I came in directly. Many authors like Eri to be the heroine. Personally, I don't like her too much. She's too innocent and is more suitable for a younger sister. Isn't my quirky Natsumi good?

The pig's feet hangs up for far more than half of the story, and a lot of space is spent describing the supporting characters. Can you change it? It's really boring to look at it this way. Do I read fanfics to see those people and things in the original works?

The protagonist gave the Wind King's Dragon Bone Cross to the academy and got a chance to work for free at the academy?

Xia Mi after transforming into a dragon

Now the content has become just a slight modification based on the original work, which is getting more and more boring.

I suggest readers who want to read Xia Mi's book later to stop reading Dragon Clan after finishing it. There will be no more Xia Mi in the future.

It seems okay at the beginning. Those who write fan fiction are all warriors. I hope you will continue writing in the future 😁

After reading it for so long, I still want to give the author some suggestions. . . The world view and audience of the Dragon Clan are actually more film- and television-oriented, and the world view and style are more realistic. Author, you have written many two-dimensional comic works after writing Dragon Clan, and either the audience is not wide, or it is too old, so it is not suitable for the current version. . . And regarding the issue of my sister's fragments, you may not have planned how many worlds you can write at the beginning, so the number of fragments and the size of the fragments are ambiguous. As a result, the plot is too fragmented, and readers may find it too tedious. And because of the setting of a little girl, some worlds cannot be included in the topic selection. Science fiction is basically out of the question, martial arts is basically out of the question, and the world view of works that can enhance the ability to face God directly is too grand and difficult to grasp. And because the world view you want to create is too grand, it makes it difficult to achieve your goal of improving yourself by experiencing the world, so that either your strength exceeds the world too much, or you need to weaken the protagonist to make up for it. As a result, you constantly jump between weakening the protagonist and strengthening the protagonist, and it is difficult to give the protagonist a smooth growth curve. In the current book writing environment, everyone hopes to see a protagonist who keeps getting stronger, so the best-selling books now either have a strong background and talent, or the boss is reincarnated and then reaches the top all the way. There is rarely a weakening of the protagonist in the middle, and the relevant plots rarely contain betrayal or a lot of depression. When you first started writing the Demon Slayer section, I wrote a paragraph and gave some suggestions. . . If you want more people to read your book, you must choose a world topic that most people like, but then you have a wave of death. . . I don't know if you, the author, have a complete outline and partial outline of the whole book, but this book probably cannot be saved. I can only give you some suggestions, hoping that it will be a little helpful for your next book.

Author, I want to ask a question Do you think I want to watch the protagonist show off, or watch the plot of Death I want to watch Death, why should I come to your place to watch it? Wouldn't it be better if I just read the manga?

So I feel like the author is written by the god of death, speechless 눈_눈. I haven't seen the protagonist in the last dozens of chapters, and the group portraits are not written like this, ugh.

If you want to pursue this book because you saw the heroine Xia Mi, then you can give up, because... You really can't see her 😅

It's almost done, it's written like a love novel in the skin of a dragon😅

This book is getting more and more watery at the end. It's so crazy that I can't read it anymore.

Can you please stop writing about this stupid Lu Mingfei?

You are so strong, why are you grinding here? In the original work, Lu Ming was not very good, so he interacted with many gangsters, and Hengsheng had many troubles. You are the first person, and you are still grinding here. It looks really irritating.

The Dragon World is too long to write. It doesn't travel to other worlds in 300 chapters. It's completely possible to travel to other worlds midway and come back at key points. The writing is good in every aspect. It's this "Starting from Dragons" that may become "A Dimensional Journey from the beginning to the end of Dragons".

The God of Death seems a bit poorly written. The author has obviously not read the God of Death properly. Something that only appeared in the Thousand-Year Blood War chapter has to be forcibly brought to a thousand years ago. Moreover, I feel that the writing of the old man Yamamoto is very stupid. He really kneels down and licks the protagonist.

When will Xia Mi return and kick me?

This is Yamamoto Genryusai from thousands of years ago. You should check the information when writing.

This chapter is over 40 pages long. It's hard to say it's short, but look at my 6 monthly passes. At least it's okay to add some sperm, right?

If you don't like Demon Slayer, I'll watch it when a new copy comes out.

Understand?

Come on~ I'm here to get better

I gave you eight votes... Don't say I don't take care of you... Give me a cum~

dog head

It's been three months! Hey~

Why don't you add a spell to fight back?